Poem: Sunset's Whisper

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Posted: 14 years ago

Will post it again, after I have checked the link given by Manal and only if it dates after my earlier post!

Sorry for all the confusion! But looks like I am getting over-inspired! 🤣 Or may be I'm over-inspiring ppl! 😛

Edited by -Sharmila- - 14 years ago

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BIackSwan

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Posted: 14 years ago

ahhh *sigh* gonna take a deeep breath phooo...

my choti daniel steel dis s just sooo beautiful 😍 nothin sounds more poetic than dis. i can just feel kushi's presence and her heart beat. da love she has for arnav is somethin extraordinary na i mean da girl's waitin for her with da love of of her life despite da changes in sky, weather and everythin else... so nothin really matters to her if he comes... ahhh im smitten!!!

dis s my fav part...

I lie here all too much alone

In this great, vast chilling bed

For my world has stopped revolving 😍 😍

god bless u choti sis!!! mwaaah

Edited by NaDzGirl - 14 years ago

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-scarlett-

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Posted: 14 years ago

SHAR!! I mma bang you wit a hammer if you EVER tell me you cant write...

girl did you lose ur memory or something

cuz this was awesome...

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sabihaa.

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Posted: 14 years ago

OMFG. That was BEAUTIFUL.

Millie cupcake! Do you want me to tear up? So beautiful. I pictured Khushi standing on a beach, staring out as she remembered Arnav.

I pictured unspoken words of love, soft stares, and a whole lot of shivering as she remembered him.

I pictured Arnav thinking of her as she thought of him. I pictured him sitting in his office remembering how Khushi's smile lights up the surroundings.. I pictured her laughing softly remembering his stern stares and gruff words.

I pictured a lot. And it's all because of the poem. As much I don't see this happening in the show (read, Indian-shows-are-too-melodramatic-for-such-soft-sentiments), I would love for it to. But Khushi would have to be in a white dress.. the wind causing it to flow around her.. her hair flowing softly around her shoulders. Hugging herself as she's immersed by the sunset.

Amazing work.
*squishy hugs* 🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 0711rokxoxo
SHAR!! I mma bang you wit a hammer if you EVER tell me you cant write...
girl did you lose ur memory or something

cuz this was awesome...

ROFL! 🤣 🤣
*runs away*

Thank you! But seriously, I still don like my work much! 🤔

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Neetz

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Posted: 14 years ago

Sharmiii!! Omg this is so beautiful!! The 'risk' was worth it 👏

Don't ask me why but this reminds me of that promo when it's raining and these two are looking at their torn photo 😆

I never knew you could write so well!! Awesome work, Jaana! Love you! Muah! 🤗

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497410

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Originally posted by: prettyfulwishes
OMFG. That was BEAUTIFUL.

Millie cupcake! Do you want me to tear up? So beautiful. I pictured Khushi standing on a beach, staring out as she remembered Arnav.

I pictured unspoken words of love, soft stares, and a whole lot of shivering as she remembered him.

I pictured Arnav thinking of her as she thought of him. I pictured him sitting in his office remembering how Khushi's smile lights up the surroundings.. I pictured her laughing softly remembering his stern stares and gruff words.

I pictured a lot. And it's all because of the poem. As much I don't see this happening in the show (read, Indian-shows-are-too-melodramatic-for-such-soft-sentiments), I would love for it to. But Khushi would have to be in a white dress.. the wind causing it to flow around her.. her hair flowing softly around her shoulders. Hugging herself as she's immersed by the sunset.

Amazing work.
*squishy hugs* 🤗

Strawberry! 🤗

OMGGG! Such a huge essay for this poem of mine!!! 😲
Thank you Love! I loveee you for this comment! <333
Wow, with your comment, i could imagine a hell lot of other things! Wow!. . . Yeah, White dresses n sunset go well! 😳 Your comment is so poetic girl! You are a born writer! Thanks again hun! 🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Chill_Out
Sharmiii!! Omg this is so beautiful!! The 'risk' was worth it 👏
Don't ask me why but this reminds me of that promo when it's raining and these two are looking at their torn photo 😆

I never knew you could write so well!! Awesome work, Jaana! Love you! Muah! 🤗

Thanks a zillion Neethz! 🤗
Yeah, I posted it here thinking of that only! 😳
I don write well, I still need to work on my writing!
Love ya more! 🤗