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She feels alone and lost among her own. Incomplete despite all she has.

She keeps searching for the missing half of her life. And has found her way to it without any directions. But they say she doesn't remember 'him'.

The lingering whispers keep calling her name. Keep calling her back to the jungle, the place where they met often.

Where she feels she belongs, where her heart is.
The place where her soul still stands waiting for her to find him…to be herself again.

She still hears his voice far from. She speaks to him without words.

He flows through her veins like blood. He whispers in her every breath. His name escapes her lips without even her knowing.
She feels his presence everywhere. Feels connected only to him.
But still they say she doesn't remember him.
But little do they know that she remembers him. Remembers everything.
Her memory failed her but her heart didn't.
Defying all logic and reason she had ran to him once and again today she ran to him breaking all the barriers of this world and the other; she had found him.
Darkness envelopes her but a light within guides her to him.

She stands there paralyzed for a moment as the sight of him locked in that cold glass box makes her gasp for breath at the same time the thought of being near him calms her, the restlessness finally settling.

She sits near him, the cold breeze hugging her but still she feels warm and safe more than she ever had.

With a weary smile on her face she runs a hand on the ice slab softly calling his name.

A lone tear escapes her eyes and falls on the ice, seeping through it to her sleeping love;
breaking the curse.
The tiny figure wrapped in green then lies down hugging the frost.
Drop by drop the tears flow, melting the spell and so awakening her love from his deep slumber.
Her heart beats echo in his silent chest and as she opens her eyes she sees the familiar face looking down on her.
A soft smile forms on her lips as her light fingers caress his face.
She can read the questions in his eyes and as an answer she whispers only, "I remember."

Then gently rests her head on his chest, letting the tears dry as he holds her tight in his arms.

That moment it felt as if tomorrow and yesterday had crossed over. Time and space had lost dimension.

It all seemed an accident of fate, no reason and logic, but also because it was meant to be.
They are meant to be.

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Ok another random rambling. I know already thousands of beautiful posts have already been done on this very topic. Well one more from my side.

This is how I pictured Abhay come back or AP union.

Oh well good night peepz!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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This one got me sentimental, Anu, Only somebody who believes in soulmates and the power of love transcending time, barriers and tests of fire can write something as soulful as this.

Its touching. Especially when you said:

A soft smile forms on her lips as her light fingers caress his face.
She can read the questions in his eyes and as an answer she whispers only, "I remember."

Then gently rests her head on his chest, letting the tears dry as he holds her tight in his arms.

That moment it felt as if tomorrow and yesterday had crossed over. Time and space had lost dimension.

It all seemed an accident of fate, no reason and logic, but also because it was meant to be.
They are meant to be.

You have some real heart, Anu. Sigh!

Love and luck always,❤️
GOD bless you. 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pocahontas

This one got me sentimental, Anu, Only somebody who believes in soulmates and the power of love transcending time, barriers and tests of fire can write something as soulful as this.


Its touching. Especially when you said:

A soft smile forms on her lips as her light fingers caress his face.
She can read the questions in his eyes and as an answer she whispers only, "I remember."

Then gently rests her head on his chest, letting the tears dry as he holds her tight in his arms.

That moment it felt as if tomorrow and yesterday had crossed over. Time and space had lost dimension.

It all seemed an accident of fate, no reason and logic, but also because it was meant to be.
They are meant to be.

You have some real heart, Anu. Sigh!

Love and luck always,❤️
GOD bless you. 🤗

I do! Thats a surprise. Lol. I mean i dont if i really do believe in all this...Yes I write about it but dont know...Reality is far too bitter. Writing is an escaped.
Anywhos, hoping to see a great epi on monday.
And Thank Yooouuu for the beautiful comment! Really your replies always make me happy. So a big thank you for the love. 😳😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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amazing post👏...so touching😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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It was so poetic and so close to heart. So beautifully written piece.

Ladki - kitni baar boluun - You are amazing writer!!! Each and every word was so beautiful.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sugaryanu

Drop by drop the tears flow, melting the spell and so awakening her love from his deep slumber.
Her heart beats echo in his silent chest and as she opens her eyes she sees the familiar face looking down on her.
A soft smile forms on her lips as her light fingers caress his face.
She can read the questions in his eyes and as an answer she whispers only, "I remember."

^^loved this part. touched me.
Beautiful piece of writing. Her stubborn heart is incredibale and unbelivable. Their connection is beautiful. His distance keeping yet failing to stay away is heartwarming.
I know with the creatives that love dragging the remembering part is yet to come far away, but just the way they show how her heart shapes their moments and his name is atleast a valid and powerful reason to keep us through the drags.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OH GOD ANU..that was DIVINE yaar..you this intense passionate connection between ABHIYA is what drives me insanely crazy & VISU have put their sizzling chenistry as tadka for that madness..of mine..!!😳 Love you & thank you for writing such a touching ..post..!!🤗
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beautifully written liked it :)
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well done ! u wrote very beautifully
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Originally posted by: Ritzie

It was so poetic and so close to heart. So beautifully written piece.

Ladki - kitni baar boluun - You are amazing writer!!! Each and every word was so beautiful.

Bolo bolo...baar baar bolo! Haha, I love to hear it! 😛
Thank you thank you thank youuu! 🤗

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