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Hannah

@nondescript

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Posted: 14 years ago

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TheMelody.

@TheMelody.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Okay. So where is the LOVE button? :| Without sounding too cheesy I'd like to say that was honestly amazing. I'm speechless and I truly feel my comment will do absolutely no justice to it but I shall try anyway :)

The concept is so gripping, I swear. I'm intrigued, I want to know what happened to Ridhima, where did she go, why did she leave her daughter and Armaan? So many questions are floating around in my head and I know they'll be answered in the upcoming updates but I still can't help but wonder. You've actually been really cheeky and not showed much of Armaan's thoughts on Ridhima's departure from his life. It creates all the more suspense and I'm sure readers, like myself, would want to know his thoughts and feelings. Honestly speaking, at first, imagining a nice Shashank didn't gel down too well with me, but as I read on, his conversation with Armaan was actually really touching. I loved the fact that he cares SO much for Armaan and Aria! I must admit, the intricate details about Armaan were so perfect it had me smiling all throughout. I could easily visualise everything so well, I really feel that that's the beauty of your writing - readers can connect really quickly with the story. My instinct tells me Ridhima is not to blame for the departure. She probably had some problems but I can't say anything more because you haven't given us many clues so far. BTW 'Blues' reminds of a show called 'Blues Clues' which I used to watch as a little girl, so I guess I shall be waiting for further clues about Ridhima. LMFAO. :P

You're a beautiful writer Hannah! When I told you I look up to you, I really did mean it. You inspire me. 😳 I cannot wait to read more! Keep it up! Muaaah!

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Ishaqzaadi

@Ishaqzaadi

Trailblazer

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Posted: 14 years ago

So glad to see you back on the forums Hannah! And what a GRAAAND COMEBACK :D with an FF :O OMKSG :| I'm so excited to read it!!!! <3 Ima read this intro tonight and comment by tomorrow muahh! ILY and I know the FF's gonna be amazing coz you're a great writer =)) Love the title already (and the siggy you chose from IC is lovee!)

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@khahani

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Posted: 14 years ago

Looks like I missed the first box...:P

This is a brilliant start...left me with a lot of question...I guess that was the idea! I absolutely love the way you pay attention to details (I think we already had this discussion, where you were complaining how I don't bother to comment tehee)! Anyways so as I was saying the intricate details add a little extra touch to the ambience of your FF! I don't think I have to tell you how beautifully you write because you already know that :)

Armaan and kids are love😍 especially the way you portrayed Aria and his bond! - can you get me a readymade (tailored to my needs😳) Armaan? :P

So where exactly is Riddhima hibernating? Why did she leave her baby daughter and husband? I am going to do a little guessing 😆...I don't think she went away due to health reasons (that would not be the Hannah style of writings!) but maybe something to do with career choice? Or the pressure of becoming a mother and the responsibility became too overwhelming for her? The title 'Blues' gives an empty feeling :(

And for once I have no bitterness towards Riddhima *miracles are possible I guess* LOL

Update super soon...:) x

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@awarapan.

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: khahani
Looks like I missed the first box...:P be back later :)

TELL ME ABOUT IT. 😡

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Hannah

@nondescript

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Sary-
HAWWW

I was just about to inbox you HB!!!! Hi <3 I was on my way to sending a message and I see you here haha!

Miss you muchos!!!! Ly xoxo p.s Ima inbox you now

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TheMelody.

@TheMelody.

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: InfiniteEnigma.

TELL ME ABOUT IT. 😡

LALALA you ain't as cool as me 😎

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soundsofcedar

@soundsofcedar

Trailblazer

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Hannah.

I was just about to inbox you HB!!!! Hi <3 I was on my way to sending a message and I see you here haha!
Miss you muchos!!!! Ly xoxo p.s Ima inbox you now

I missers you I mma try to catch you tomorrow 😳 BTW it makes me super proud that you used my siggy-cap w/e as the banner thing 🤣

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@awarapan.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Sary-

I missers you I mma try to catch you tomorrow 😳 BTW it makes me super proud that you used my siggy-cap w/e as the banner thing 🤣

WELL, you should be! It's incredibly beautiful 😳

A beautiful banner, and a beautiful story awaiting to be read! AH. Twinner it feels so damn good to have you back. Honestly, it makes me smile! Haven't felt this excited in such a long time! I love you <3 Welcome back!

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-CromulentHaze-

@-CromulentHaze-

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Hannah Omg I'm So happies u started a new FF I love ur writing it's brilliant =) I'm loving this so far and I love the tile Blues it's so intriguing. And what is up with ridzi man why would she leave a tiny baby and her loving husband is she crazy :| I just hope she had a valid reason cause if she doesn't I'm gonna smack her :| anyways continue soon and do pm me when u update =) Tashu =)

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