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Posted: 14 years ago
aawww Im so loving their understanding...and sweet sweet litte talks...


Now I know why Mum always use to say that the period between ur engagement and marriage is the special one and the most romantic one...


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Posted: 14 years ago
my first expression was😛 both parts are lovely
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Posted: 14 years ago
both parts
lovely part
love it
thanks 4 double treat
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Posted: 14 years ago
U updating again.
Looks like you are on a roll.
Me soo eagerly waiting 😍
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Posted: 14 years ago

ALMOST DONE...JUST POSTING NOW

thanks a lot for all the love & beauitful comments...I will be updating last part of TM tomorrow..my heart goes😭😭
love
muskan
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Posted: 14 years ago
woow muskaan eagerly looking forward to!!, as you said you have mood of writing more, pls pls pls give us more and more updates :) , oh TM's going to end tomorrow!! you must have thought of a new concept or something for ending TM and aparichit, deewangi etc.. :) is that the case? we will be eargerly looking forward to.
Edited by cyberprincess - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
yappieee

omggg

loveee uuu muskiieee

update fast me waitinggg
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Posted: 14 years ago
Di!!
how long is it gonna take?
I wanna read it before I sleep!
its 3:45am here, and I have to join as an intern in my office tomorrow morning🥱
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Posted: 14 years ago
PLEASE CLICK LIKE BUTTON ...
COMMENTS ALSO... i FEEL LIKE WRITING MORE..AS I SEE ALL SUPPORT..
SACHI
MUCHI
~Aparichit~
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THE PIC CREATED By NANDU/ nanditasingh..specially for my FF😳😳
thanks a million sweety..

he pulled her back.. & looked into her eyes.. I really like u.. I like to see u smile like this always.
Tum hasten huwen aachi lagthi ho
she blushed & smiled stealing glances from him.
He pulled her to him and gently kissed her lips. .. & again looked at her in admiration. Her big eyes that always looked for answers to him. He kissed them one & then the other.
U r so beautiful
she chuckled.
They both quivered with the sudden down pour of cold stream teasing their parts of exposed skin & seeping through the cotton. He held her hand & ran towards the car. She giggled & held her duppata while trying to run.. it was so thrilling for her..& irritating for him. I hate rains.. he screamed as he almost was dragging her..I love rains she tittered..
how could u..?? he shakily pulled out the keys & pressed the automatic button to open the door.

She quickly took a spun in the rain stretching her arms.. before sitting in the car. He immediately placed a plastic sheet at the footrest & over the seat to avoid it from drenching.
Yeh kya hain she asked as he was arranging them meticulously.
I don't like car getting messy!!
woh tho hoga hi na!!..
she said casually.
not if u r careful..he was so particular
not her cup of tea she knew that. She sat in & put her head out couple of times feeling the rain.


After checking the seats & then drying his face with his hanky.. he saw her & kept staring at her, her long black hair was somewhat soaked in the rain and covering most of her face. When she moved the hair from her face he finally saw her snow white skin dripping in pearl droplets for a moment he felt like time had stopped. When he gazed upon her enchanting eyes, she was the most beautiful girl he ever saw. The most amazing thing about her was her eyes.

At that moment he felt his heartbeat rising and an unusual feeling, the feeling that happens after finding something that one was searching for a long time & suddenly he realized that the girl for whom he was always waiting and searching for was her. Yes she was special.. he didn't dare to go near her especially when she looked so temptingly sensuous with her wet hair & her dress clinging to her skin.

Both of them behaved maturely not teasing the others senses.. else it would have been their closest appetence encounter. They sat quietly until they reached home. She slipped her soft fingrerd around his cheek into his hair & pulled him closer.. he instantly jerked.. she frowned a bit cutely .. he gave in then.. as she placed a soft peck later. He smiled as she walked to her house & turned back..just short of her entrance & smiled yet again.

Next day a special occasion in Sanjeevini. It was special program in honor of all the major corporates who sponsor the hospital. All the drs & the management where preparing for the event. Armaan & ridzy where to perform. Geet was also participating in some skit with others. As the program began the head of sanjeevni.. dr.Gupta began to panic. Ridzy spoke with him & discovered that one of the major sponsor of the hospital was not attending the event.


Ridzy went to the back stage & broke the news to armaan & Geet. They all got tensed & worried.
Armaan - kitna footage khaten hain yeh corporates walen
ridzy - papa is really tensed
Geet - Modi & gps aa gayen kya?
Ridzy - sab aagyen hain
armaan - tum dr gupta ke paas ruhko main recption main check kartha hoon.
Geet consoled ridzy & got her water to drink.
Ridzy - savitri aunty tho humesha hi bahut actively participate karti thi..pata nahi iss bar kya hogaya?
that name rings a bell to Geet..she reluctantly asked kaun sa corporates hain
ridzy - khurana's
Geet's eyes popped out
reality stuck ridzy.. ek min.. Maan Singh khurana!!!...khurana!!!
armaan came in running.. aacha koi representative aa gaya hain unka.. chalo chalo..
ridzy gave a disappointed look to Geet & walked away..

Geet opened her locker & took her phone to ask Maan wat was going on.. thats when she saw 20missed calls from Maan. She immediately called him back..
oh jaan..kanha thi tum
aap kanha ho?
Office main hoon..
why r u not here?
I have been calling u since afternoon for that
she got worried sab teehk hain na..
nahi woh Daadi is gone out of station & she wants me to attend this program..
jaan plz tum sambal lo na
Geet was shocked, she was already not liking every one thinking wrong abt him & then upper se he is actually asking her to manage. She was definitely hurt. This event was close to her..actually for the whole sanjeevini staff but he was not bothered.
Geet !!! tum sun rahi ho na??
why can't u come?
Woh main .. main..
he was a poor liar..she just discovered that..
mera meeting hain
aap aisen kaisen kar sakten hain.. we all worked so hard for this
I am held up main nahi aa sakta
, he said it bluntly this time. I will pick u up after the program.
She was taken a bit back with his tone. Why he didn't want to come to the function.. is it because of her..like he is conscious of being associated with her or something.. her heart sunk into grief..thinking of all the possible reason why he did that. Har saal tho aachen se participate kiya hain .. phir iss bar kyun nahi?? zaroor meri wajah se.. ridzy ko bhi kitna bura lagraha hain. Amy ko pata chalega ki Maan is the person Oh god wat wil he say.. she felt so let down.

- BLOG aparichit part 15-

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precap
Geet so hurt
-PREV PART 14 NEXT PART 16-
please do comment
thanxs a lot for the warm welcome
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
wonder why he didn't want to come to the function
Edited by millie_maaneet - 14 years ago

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