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Posted: 14 years ago
how much longer muski??? its already 2.25 am here... am still waiting... 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
how long will it take darling wanna slepp but a peaceful1 that wont cum without reading this
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Posted: 14 years ago
DOUBLE UPDATES SO PLEASE CLICK LIKE BUTTON ON BOTH..😭😭😭 PLZ...
COMMENTS ALSO... i FEEL LIKE WRITING MORE..AS I SEE ALL SUPPORT..
SACHI
MUCHI
~Aparichit~
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I am really sorry.. she was extremly emotional & missing him badly
I really like u.. mujhe aap bahut pasand ho
u are very sweet.
Mujhe aap se milna hain
Oh!! that was too much of liking at one go for Maan.. he was floored. He wondered wat happened to his sherni..first thing she was calling...wow!! then all those words.. that just blew him away!! he couldn't even find words to reciprocate. His mouth went dry..just hearing those words.
He immediately checks his meetings can we meet at 7.30 pm
itna late kyum hum tho humesha jaldhi milthen hain na
he was so much liking this restlessness of hers..poor he...he had lots of impt meetings lined up. He cursed himself.. & probably cursed his assistant too for lining up so many meetings.
He thought for a while.. very carefully.. I have a meeting lined up until then
jab bhi aap ko milna hota hain tho main aati hoon na.. aab jab mujhe milna hain tho aap ke pass time nahi hain
.. she gets angry & cuts the call..& ten wonders yeh kya kar diya..uff..

Maan bangs his head on the table.. & wonders.. yeh kya hogaya
he immediately calls her back
she was in a cute mood..not wanting to fight with him.. but his saying no.. especially when she so desperately wanting to meet him.. just pissed her off. ..but not that much ..that she won't answer his call, she picked it up & kept quiet
jaan..
there he said...Oh!! Geet was dead... how much she just wanted to kiss him right now
she smiled.. a smile..probably he could read it through the phone
jaan..I am really sorry plz samjho mera meeting hain..we will meet at 7.30 ..paka.
How could she refuse now.. he said it twice..at a row... Oops..she was dreaming..already..
jaan.. he said again
ji!! she said with a smile
he was so happy ..she actually smiled.

After the call.. Maan wondered ..why was she angry ...oops..upset..at the first place..then now..so happy..that she said all that..

ek min phelen she got angry & cut the call..aur abhi...ekdam maan gayen.. uff wat exactly makes her sad & wat pleases her..he had no clue...least did he know it was his magical Jaan that was playing the trick...

the more he thought the more he got confused. He just preferred to be happy that every thing was fine between them. He just couldn't let things get bad..he so much liked it when she sounded like this. He had no idea why was he feeling so relaxed & peacefu nowl. It was the best feeling on earth..most beautiful. He rested his head back on his leather chair. He smiled..

adhi..sasha.. watched through the glass door & wondered wat was upto their boss today!!

7.15pm... Geet was already waiting at the cafe.. she brought a bouquet & card for him. She checked herself in the mirror couple of times in the wash room. It was 7.31pm.. she was getting really impatient now.. she has been waiting for last 16mins..uff!!! technical he is only 1min late... magar yeh maam kaun samjhayega. Maan walked in at 7.35pm..oops!! he was super late in her terms..she was already restlessly pacing outside the cafe shop. The moment he came
kitni late kardi..she made complaining face..she held his arms lovingly & walked in with him.
he looked at the time & then at her. ..then his heart missed couple of beats with her hold around his arms.
Main kab se wait kar rahi hoon...she sat on the chair
Maan wanted to say..people.. wait months to get Maan singh Khurna's apt.. but ..here..it was other way around.. he was waiting for weeks..to see this cute side of hers. He didn't mind her complains.. he knew it was special ..suddenly she seemed blushing, & restlessly knotting the napkin. He then noticed the flowers & the card.
Kisi ke bday main ja rahi ho? Wondering she wanted him to take her or go with her..!!
She rolled her eyes & pushed the flower & card towards him.. getting cutely anxious. ..inhe tho kuch samjh hi nahi aata..uff.. she murmured. She looked at her babaji..& made a complaining face yet again.
Maan looked up & then tried to make out wat she said.
He opened it ..& read the card. (ceck out the card here)

He smiled ..
she blushed & looked down..

he didn't know how to react to all this..it was new to him.. someone presenting him a card & flowers. He remembered annu.. giving flowers to his GF..may be he receives too..salen kabhi batayen nahi...he was silent for a while quiet oddly..while she was expecting him to say ..
yah nice..
I like u too..
thats so nice.. etc etc ..
but he was quiet..
she softly pushed her curls behind still blushing as he lay his hand on the flower. He was kind of conscious ...pink flowers!!! how was Maan Singh Khurana to carry pink flowers..oh god..it all looked so girly.. but he couldn't have refused thats not good manners.

He very consciously carried it to the car & immediately ditched it in the back seat, but not making it obvious to her. but she did notice..oops.. sweety confused again!!

Shall we go for a walk he asked reluctantly
she nodded..
they silently walked along the garden..the sun was setting.. stars had began to twinkle.. their hands softly caressed..she smiled consciously..he entangled his forefinger with hers & then the whole hand.
Aapko flowers nahi pasand ayen..she asked
nahi aisen nahi.. then he sighed..actually I was bit conscious.. all this is so girly
she smiled..I didn't think like that..(then hit her on head subconsciously.. aur tu..kya kya soch rahi ..thi.. kaha tha na amy..ne. they r different..lekin flowers..chado)
but I liked them he reassured
aaglen bar se nahi lavonghi
he pulled her back.. & looked into her eyes.. I really like u.. I like to see u smile like this always.
Tum hasten huwen aachi lagthi ho

- BLOG aparichit part 14-


precap
Maan not able to explain

-PREV PART 13 NEXT PART 15-
please do comment
thanxs a lot for the warm welcome
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yay...!!! Double updates today...
Party time...
Great part...
Commenting first for the very first time at 2:40 am at night...
But gotta go to sleep...
Long comment for the double treat tomorrow... Pakka se...
Loads of love and hugs to u...
Thanks Muski..
Love
Sakshi
Edited by zaqxsw - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Awww the card was chooo chweet!!!

Hayyyee

ITs such a cute love story!!!

Edited by cue1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Gr8 update::
Haha maan just has to say the word jaan and geet has melted lyk butter,,but maan doesn't know why she be'z happy one tum and angry the other
Oooh now wat does maan hav to explain
Cont soon Xx...
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome ... nice update... maan carrying pink flowers... rofl...

maan not knowing that jaan does the trick... hm... muski very nice update...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved it 😳
Edited by nanditasingh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
"u can do wonders with words"
dis describes my feelings 4 yr update
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update Muskan
loved it...thank u so much for the double update
update soon

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