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ver is the update yaar
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have just read this in a go it is excellent
emotions that u r potrying is very similar to arrange marriages
now it is impossible to wait to read next part so do con't soon
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The updates are just too good...totally loving this FF
Muski ur just too good...ur one of the best writers
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What happend to the fellow who was oh so eager to mawl her during the first meetings and now he's already settled for gentles touches now?! Oi Hoi! 😭
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loved it...but why didnt maan come?...update soon
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dear...😊

1stly ...4 PM me hunn...
u really done n ...👏👏👏👏.
4 that to u..👍🏼.
... ......n really .😃😉...
4 donn't comment regular but also late n short.becouse of my exam.....
4 ur update tons of n ..🤗.
again 4 ur update..😃..
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thanks a lot for all the beautiful comments
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waiting di...like a good girl
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part 16
Har saal tho aachen se participate kiya hain .. phir iss bar kyun nahi?? zaroor meri wajah se.. ridzy ko bhi kitna bura lagraha hain. Amy ko pata chalega ki Maan is the person Oh god wat will he say.. she felt so let down.

The program went on well. Geet looked around if he made it. But there was no sign of him. Even during her skit her eyes were looking for him. She over heard adhi apologizing to Dr. Gupta that Maan was held up since afternoon on some meeting. Geet was taken a back..if he was held up then how was he trying to reach her... she remembered seeing 20 miss calls. It all was so weird & more painful. After the whole event ridzy was still angry with Geet.

Geet - ridzy he personally said sorry for all this
Ridzy - lekin uski problem kya hain?
Geet - he had very impt meeting
Geet definitely didn't let him down..how could she.. though she really didn't believe any of his excuses.
Ridzy - pata hain papa kitne paresan ho gayen the
Geet - sorry.. I am sorry on his behalf.. she hugged her
Ridzy.. - bedi side le rahi hain Maan ki
she blushed ..nahi he really called me


Geet walked out taking her belongings, Maan was already waiting for her. She was surprised.
Geet - aap idhar hi ho tho andhar challo na.. Dr. Gupta se millo, unhe aacha lage ga
Maan immediately snapped .. nahi!!
she didn't understand why he snapped.
Just then Dr. Gupta came out. He immediately walked upto him & apologized.
Maan - I am really sorry Dr. gupta
dr Gupta - aap yanha?
Maan - I was held up in a meeting.. Adhi ne khaha hoga
dr gupta looked at him & then Geet. She was feeling little shy & conscious.
Maan held her hand ..my finance.
Dr gupta - Oh congrats.. I knew she got engaged but didn't know it was to u. thats wonderful.
He looked at Geet.. u never told me!! I was so tensed all the while..when I already had khurana family's member arranging the event.
Geet cursed Maan under her throat ..Aab sab meri galthi hain..I was telling him chal ke millo..tab tho ..he snapped..uff I don't understand him only

Maan stood there & spoke nicely to Dr. Gupta... they almost discussed the whole plan for the coming year.
Maan - now onwards all the Khurana's sponocership will be handled by her.
He softly tugged his hand around her. Her eyes almost popped out..so was dr.gupta's
dr gupta..cleared his throat - do u think she can manage all that?
Geet immediately - yah I don't have any such exposure
Maan - I will help her, aur Daadi bhi hain. I am sure she will do a great job
Geet made a baby face...Internship tho mujhe se sambal tha nahi.. abhi yeh sab..Babaji yeh sab kya ho raha hain mere saat. Phelen tho yeh event main he nahi aaten.. aur abhi..yanha khade hoke sara saal ka event discuss kar liya.. sab kuch mera sar pe thop diya.. wat is he doing.

After 30mins.. finally they get back to the car leaving Dr.gupta pleased & happy. Dr Gupta even told Geet she is really blessed..

yeh lo.. she thought.. kuch hi der phelen inka BP high tha..inke karan..aur abhi..he is going gaga abt Maan. She shook is head... Maan really knows how to please people she thought.


As they sat in the car, just before wearing the seat belt he hugged her suddenly.. thanks thanks a lot. His sudden touch send shivers down her spine, she almost forgot every thing in that moment..it was just his broad chest that completly consumed her, his scent that was intoxicatng..his warmth ..that she couldn't have enough of ... he was so lost ..she initially couldn't even realized he was continously saying thank u to her... then she wondered wat did she do that he was thanking her. He kissed her forehead. his lips..the warmth..was so special..


tum naraz to nahi na.. that I didn't come to the event
she so much wanted to say she was really hurt..but his concern & charm just melted her.. she shook her head..nahi.. he sighed in relief.
after that hug & peck..all her hurt just seem to vanish.. she hated herself to be so vulnerable to his every thing actually.. not just kiss..or..hugg..even his sweet gaze seem to melt her.
He seemed genuine.. & concerned.. then if he was concerned & cared then why didn't he come at the first place. She didn't know how to ask.. more over she herself has told him she is not angry abt it.

He drove her to a jewelry shop.
Geet - yanha kyun
he came around to her side - challo
he held his hand out to her. She smiled & wondered wat exactly was he doing.
He reached in the shop.. I want to make it up to .. plz don't say no.. just select a gift for ur self.
Wat.. she exclaimed!!!
it would have been so odd na that I didn't come.. & u didn't mind.. actually u managed every thing.
He softly squeezed her hand that he was holding. Daadi hoti tho bahut naraz hoti.
If he really cared then why didn't he come.. she was still confused ..though less hurt now.. because she was showing so much of concern.
Maan - wat do u want.. ring..
u already gave me one
Maan - when did I give u
she rolled her eyes & showed the engagement ring.
Maan - oh!! yah.. ek aur le lo
Geet - actually I don't want anything.. it ok..
Maan - tum naraz ho kya?
Geet - nahi baba
Maan - phir gift lene se mana kyun kar rahi ho
Geet - nahi.. I mean it is not a big thing.. actually she wondered wat did she exactly do to deserve a gift!! she was actually cursing him all the while
he smiled warmly - u r really sweet, it is really a big thing for me.
Geet - main ne kuch nahi kiya.. jo bhi kiya who aapke assistant ne kiya na
Maan - but u would have had to face so much of odd looks.. I mean I am ur finance.. aur main ..he made a very sorry face
Geet - if u were so concerned then why didn't u come
he scratched his head - woh ..woh..
in that brief moment she thought abt a million options but not wat he said whild holding her hand softly in his & resting his other hand on it..more like a confession


I am not comfortable with hospital atmosphere..uska smell .. he couldn't say a world more.. his face looked pale enough.
She wanted to laugh.. but then laughed at herself.. how silly she was thinking about all the uncanny things on earth..but never thought the Maan Singh Khurana..would be uncomfortable with hospital as such!!
plz tum galat mat samjhna ..he pleaded
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geets reaction to Maan's affirmation.

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Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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