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Posted: 14 years ago
Ok...As much as I hate saying this...

I'm tired of writing parts in many updates. You know me, I like to name each post and off late I feel some of the updates can be named differently, instead of just sticking it with the previous part and calling it Update 2.
So, I'm going to break my own rules and go beyond Number 100...there is just so much story to move ahead...and to be told.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 6thElement

Ok...As much as I hate saying this...

I'm tired of writing parts in many updates. You know me, I like to name each post and off late I feel some of the updates can be named differently, instead of just sticking it with the previous part and calling it Update 2.
So, I'm going to break my own rules and go beyond Number 100...there is just so much story to move ahead...and to be told.
Hasini

Go for it. I miss your innovative titles anyways😉😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
Maaneet's phone convo was really adorable.
Loved they each other making sure everything is fine around.
The dramatic Geet is really cute. Missing her in NY
Finally both siblings having some heart-to-heart talk.
Naina left him and landed to NY.
Wonder how is Rishabh doing there. Poor soul.
I really wish she would give Rishabh another chance.
Eager to read more of the convo btwn Maan-Naina.
Well actually am missing Rishabh in this update.
Am so use to see his name in each update.
You going to write more. Am so eager to read all those wonderful update.
But i really hope there wont be mega twist on further updates.
Will there be...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 76 Family court: Oh know….drama to ensue…I just know it!!! I just hope it's not depressing!

highlighted her cheekbones that flickered like that of a ruddy candle flame- this imagery is so excellent…love the way you described it!

AWWW! Dadaji is such a cutie….no wonder Maan is such a romantic….wonder where he gets it from?! LOL!! Spraying Dadi's perfume in the air to remind him of her when she's gone….awww!

And yet the feeling gushed in her, that he still played hide and seek with words. –How cute….hide and seek with words…me likey like like! And love how Geet knows Maan inside out and upside down!

The family tradtion line of how the women are supposed to be cherished….this Khurana Men are something else!

Aww and then the flashback scene…so so so cute! I miss the old days too!!

WHOA! Share holder….def didn't expect that at all. I still don't get why she was hestitant….sometimes I fail to understand her! Her name is Naintara….so OMG….def didn't know either! I guess Geet isn't the only feeling stupid!

OH!!! SNAP! This just got so much better…the drama officially begins…Dev and Naintara….holy sheeps…I can't believe this! But then along Geet supporting Naini…I can't even call her NT at this point! Uff….I don't get her…let's see how it all plays out!

Geet and Naini to be friends….let's ee what happens….but the alliance has kind of formed…with Geet kind of taking her side and Naini showing an instant liking of Geet! Let's hope for the best!

Honestly, I don't know how I feel about the whole finding/talking with her hubby in secrecy….not gonna be good…I'm calling it now!!!

And end It with a kiss….beautiful!!! With a bang…awesome!!!!!!!!

Okay loved it, but why is the pace slowed down in this update….there wasn't much action…no fight, confrontation, or any kind of action…I mean we find out about her hubby…but more please!!!!!

Still not bad at all!!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 89: War and Peace Update 2

After all she had done for her grandchildren, especially Maan, they were still keeping her at bay about the most enthralling news of the Khurana family, in the last decade. She wanted to call and tell her kitty party friends and share the proud news of her new status of becoming the great-grandmother to the fourth generation of Khurana kids. Although, for now, her tongue was more than literally tied as she awaited a formal confirmation from her daughter-in-law.

She sat rubbing her forehead, in the living room, surfing the channels mindlessly, when Maan entered the room.

"Daadima, can you get to your phone? I have been calling you for the last 10 mts" he said, holding up his phone, away from his ears, as if he was already on a call.

This confused Daadima greatly, making her wonder, if everything up in that first floor head of her grandson was functioning as it should be. Her puzzled look, clarified her state of mind to him, when he smiled and went ahead to gesture her to pick up the phone. She plainly obeyed to dig out her phone from under the sofa cushions that had muffled the rings earlier. In other words, she had a prickling need to confront him about the news. But she knew better than to do so and hear his disappointed denial over the claim. Instead, she chose to continue being exasperated until Geet would visit them. The things she had to do for them, despite her own displeasure...

The phone rang in the next few seconds and she picked up to answer his call. Only now, there was a brief moment for which the line went dead and the next second, she heard an array of voices throwing words at each other, all sounding friendly.

"Hi Daadima" Rishabh said, followed by Meera, Yash, and then Geet screeched in the end "Daadima...I miss you...How are you?"

She was silent, taken back wondering, against who they were planning a coup against. It didn't take her long to notice Naini had not been on the call and being the mastermind behind many schemes and devious plans, that had benefited one too many kids, she was sure, that Naini indeed was the subject of the call.

"I'm good beta, how are you now?" She asked hoping, she would hear one clue...rather any clue that could confirm her suspicion.

"Oh! I'm tired Daadima, that's all" Geet answered quite cheerful, sounding far from being worn out.

"Daadima..." Maan called to her attention rather straight "Rishabh wants to move to NY for a while, and I was suggesting he stay with Meera and Yash" He paused and then added "He can't come home given Naini is here and of course no point staying faraway"

"But Daadima, I really don't want to be intruding first of all...I mean...Me staying one floor directly below does not make it any easier" Rishabh said, seeming unsure as his tone faltered for most part of his words. This pretty much gave out the point of contention they were debating against and she eased back into the sofa with that. She could take all she can get, and so in the time it would Geet to travel down and give her the news personally, she sought peace over Rishabh's decision to come over.

"Oh! Common Rishabh, even Daadima will acknowledge it's the best if you stay close and moreover Yash and Meera are practically family" Geet chirped, anxious what Daadima would have to say, albeit she was certain, Daadima had little to object.

"Yes, Geet's old bedroom is still furnished and we are mostly not home. It's no trouble at all Rishabh" Meera chimed in, wanting to make him comfortable all the more.

"Common, once you join us, at least we men will not be outnumbered here..." Yash wanted to give a pat on his back at his immediate finding that had not been obvious to the others, but Meer glowered at him from the kitchen.

"Seriously, I'm sure it sounds all fun, but I have no timelines around when things would fall into place..." Rishabh hesitated before he continued with his thoughtful tone "And you all know how stubborn she is"

Sensing the uneasiness with Rishabh, Geet made a move to turn the call into a personal one. She felt Rishabh could so with a bit of discretion when he was being exposed raw and came across vulnerable.

"Yash and Meer, we will call you right back...I hope you guys don't mind...I think..."

Meer cut her off, before Geet could finish her sentence.

"Yeah, absolutely...bye guys...bye Daadima" Meera sang quickly. Shortly afterwards, Yash too bid his good byes and the duo dropped off, without so much as a question.

"Beta, why are you hesitant?...If Maan hasn't told you already, that apartment actually belongs to Naini. Maan bought it in her name. Just treat it as your temporary home" Daadima sounded calm enough and her tranquil was undoubtedly rubbing off on the others, more importantly Rishabh.

"All arrangements can be made sure that you are going to feel at home. We can hire a cook or even better have you come home...that way you can meet her often" Geet recommended.

"I doubt it Geet...She hates my presence for now..." He wanted to end, saying that Naini would very well run away once again if she was to learn he would be staying one floor down from her current home. Kicking himself was what he wanted to do, for making love to her the other night. How much more shallow could he have come across to her? He was asking himself that question for the hundredth time.

"Rishabh, If there is one thing I know about my sister for sure..." Maan came out firm, yet assuring "then that is her still being in love with you. The sooner you are going to try to shake her out of her denial, I say it's better for you...If not for her, I would want you to stay with us, but I insist you stay downstairs and not anywhere else" He finished off his spiel, convinced that should do the trick.

Maan didn't have to wait long to find out that he was right. Rishabh was yielding, even though his reluctance over the matter was being conveyed clear by his voice.

"Ok...Maan" He said softly, like he was giving up on something "I will wrap up the affairs here and move into the apartment over the weekend"

"Wow...that is such good news" Geet shouted in excitement across the phone line. Daadima smiled in agreement in the living room as Maan came out of the bedroom to join her.

"I'm really feeling J now...All of you will be there in NY...and it will just be me on this side of the coast then" She said, her voice drowning out, towards the end. Maan instantly got up and went back into his room, unable to face Daadima anymore. Since when did his face become a palette of emotions? He pondered. The pain of leaving her behind...that she could miss out on all that might play out at NY unplanned, troubled him.

Her own sentiments had not been different at all, some three thousand miles away. She had sat back in the chair, weary from the load the realization bore, when she had been pacing the room all the while. Being away from family was going to cost her this time, she thought.

"Oh! Don't worry Geet...I will make sure the drama is all scheduled for the weekends you are here. Trust me you won't miss out on anything" Rishabh attempted consoling her.

After sorting out the finer details, Rishabh hung up and so did Daadima, leaving Geet and Maan on the conference call.

"I miss you Maan...really...I think I might go mad one day...sometimes there is just too much silence around me" She said, wanting to tear down the shrieking silence that haunted her at home and sometimes office. It was a start up with few men, scattered across a long hall, which had broken her expectations the very first day. The element of conversation was restricted to only phone calls with him at the moment, and so she held on to every minute she got with him, like her life depended on it. Indirectly that was what was keeping her sanity alive over the weekdays.

"I miss you more..." He said, closing his eyes in a quick prayer.

He really didn't mind time teleporting just then, or even settle for the ultra-modern techniques to communicate with her hologram. But he reminded himself, it would never be the same as having her in the flesh, in their NY apartment. At that moment, he was ready to pay up any amount to just cup her cheek or hold her hand...nevertheless, distance, like life, was a bit^& after all.

I know I haven't been PM'ing at all...But will do so soon. In the mean while, I can always do with more comments, don't you think? Let me know, how it's all turning out. All those who have been commenting regularly, THANK YOU so much for taking time out for this FF. It means a lot to hear from you all.

Edited by 6thElement - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
So Naini is back ...hope Rishabh too will join her soon ...aww ...Maan was so restless to meet his sister ...love the small Brother-Sister convo ...love the way how they were defending each-other.Maan-Geet phone convo was really lovely.Wonderful update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey nice update yaar...
maaneet r rocking n romantic too...
naini is back with maan n she asked for time...nice...hope she accept abhi...
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! abhi is gonna join in NY...that's good yaar...wanna see naini n abhi reunion sooon...
looking fwd...

Edited by blueopal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice Update . But I felt really bad for Maan when Geet complained about the silence around her. I mean he likes being quiet and here his darling wife is complaining about the same thing. Let her come back forever.I cant see him sad.
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Posted: 14 years ago
So Rishabh is moving into NY ...Sonner Maan & Geet clear Daadi's doubt ...it would be better for Daadi ...before she blurt out her doubts to everyone.After long time Yash-Meera ...lovely.loved Maan-Geet convo ...that was so sweet ...ll u come up with transferring Geet to NY??? wonderful update!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hasini..

great update..I am happy to see that Rishab is coming to stay at yash and Meera's place.. eagerly waiting to see patch up betwwen Rishab- Naini.. but yaar do something with our Maaneet.. How long will they stay apart.. 😭😭😭😭😭

Also, please don't give that our sweet daadi expectations.. please clear it up or I think may be she will hear the good newz sooon 😉😉😉


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