Maryada: Vidya-Gaurav FF - Updates. p. 145 (6/29)

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Posted: 14 years ago

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I don't understand salome at all... who exactly is she?

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mystique_girl

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Posted: 14 years ago

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So finally showdown between Father and Son eh? Good that Gaurav has openly declared war now...He didnt fear saying all the things he said ... feel sad for him though - its terrible for a son to know about the misdeeds of his father and yet be forced to stay with him...

Quite some hatred between the two - now want to see Devyani's reaction to it...

Lovely reactions Devi

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Black_beauty

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Posted: 14 years ago

#694

Great update!!
Is the title by any way a reference to the Greek prince Oedipus who also hated his father but loved his mother.
Loved the showdown between father and son. Can't wait to see how vidya will react to the whole situation when she wakes up!

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her_story

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Posted: 14 years ago

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the showdown..bring it on devi..

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priya..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#696

loved loved loved the father son interaction.

I can understand the hatred gaurav has toward his father..but I am still surprised that he doesn't bear the same resentment /anger for his mother who had an affair..even though he married vidya against his will, he was still faithful to her..for a man like that, i assumed discovering his mom's affairs would bother him more than he showed..

You leave me wanting more with every update devi!! Awesome!!

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Krishna

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Posted: 14 years ago

#697

Ah-mazing! I loved the dialogue between Gaurav and Father Dearest (lol). Gaurav told him to keep his lecherous eyes off his wife, finally. Loved the part about the skeleton in the closet. I've never heard that saying before. That's another thing about your FFs, I am always learning something new.

Have I told you lately how amazingly well you write? Well, if I haven't, you are an amazing writer. :) thank you so much for the updates and PMs. Waiting to see what your brilliant mind comes up with next! :D

I know how much you hate naming the chapters, but the names are so interesting and insightful. I had
read Oedipus last month. According to the myth, Oedipus was destined to kill his father and marry
his mother; so he was left to die. But he was adopted by a king and queen... And the
rest is Greek mythology. lol So is Gaurav Oedipus? Hm...

Edited by Krishnaluv94 - 14 years ago