Maryada: Vidya-Gaurav FF - Updates. p. 145 (6/29)

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FaithnFate

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Posted: 14 years ago

#671

The question is when walls are raised between the closest one in your life what do u do?? keep them as they are or open a door & few windows to breathe in & live the life with a new beginning.

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priya..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#672

Lovely Update!!

It is really hard for G to comprehend the fact that a woman he adored so much had so many secrets of her own..when he always wondered why she put up with his father in the first place... I like where G&V's relationship is going. He doesn't believe in love anymore but does feel something towards V..I can't wait to see how they become a power of two in uncovering all the dirty secrets and putting the past behind them!

Great update Devi!

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

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Posted: 14 years ago

#673

Devi - awesome update...perfect end to the night of suspense and perfect beginning of a new day...👏

Am amazed at how Gaurav and his mom still manage to carry on decent conversation after all revelations...my favorite lines in the update were:

"They both greeted a new dawn with old skeletons spilling out of an overstuffed closet, discovering that walls could be built between even the closest of relationships overnight…"

very well explained...

Loved how Devyani noticed Vidya's marks and how Gaurav has become fiercely possessive of his wife...really - the two women he loved most in this world managed to deceive him (though i dont think this is the right word) and his wife who he had no expectation from, no permanent attachments proved to be the one he could hang on to now ... is he already in love - or do we see this just as an enhancement of his already present feelings - just out in the open instead of hidden that they were till now ? I hope your next few updates will throw more light...

Loved it ... its amazing the turns your stories take ... waiting for more 😳

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her_story

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Posted: 14 years ago

#674

awesome updates devi... i like how the story is going...

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Posted: 14 years ago

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bushrayou

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Posted: 14 years ago

#676

SO happy i checked this before heading to work!

The confusions shall never end!!! I love it!!

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Sadaf

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Posted: 14 years ago

#677

Salome and Arod are related..woah! i think he is her father..hmm

interesting!!!

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Krishna

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Posted: 14 years ago

#678

Great update! Very well-written! Gauri is now sleeping, and not unconscious; now there's a greater chance of her waking up and hearing Gaurav and his mother's conversation...

Delilah. Is that another part of her character? Delilah seduced Samson into cutting his hair which caused him to lose his power and strength. Is this the same case for our Salome? And is her father?

Did Gaurav's father personally go to get Aditya?

Congratulations on completing fifty chapters! Waiting to see what happens when they get home... :D

Oh, and the people part of Gaurav's "organization" are called Orions! Interesting...

Or is Arod Aditya's father? Who is Aditya's father?

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Posted: 14 years ago

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New Dawn:
Ah! The scenes between mother and son although partly awkward, they were very well placed and written. I was reeling many questions when I had read the update at the time, but now with the next update, I'm a tad bit better.
Of course the sensual scene towards the end, was definitely enticing to the readers...but I wanted to peek into Gaurav's mind at the time ...(Nah! its just me wanting to read up more)
I like this chase, that you are keeping me a part of.

Micah Arod:
The element of mystery still continues, but it has been cut down substantially, as the main question was to reveal, the motive behind letting them go out of nowhere (ok..atleast that is how it seemed initially).

Well when revenge takes over, it really is a blind war after that. I want to see, what sentiments are severed and savored as the story takes another turn.

Great Updates Devi.
Hasini