Maryada: Vidya-Gaurav FF - Updates. p. 145 (6/29) - Page 69

Oh God...m so damn confused...!! will wait until two three parts are updated n thn read together...donno if i'll stick to this resolve of mine...lets wait n watch...!!!!!

More twists...cool! I am now very curious about Gaurav's scars and how he actually met Salome. If Salome is related to Arod, then everything was likely planned to the minutest detail...everything from how they met to the kidnapping that played out! So...sleeping with Gaurav was part of that plan? Hmmm...

Wow.. so many updates.. Fantastic.. Now this is completely new turn to the story.

Loving all the updates :) :) :)

I have finished reading up to chapter 49: A New Dawn and thought I should let you know that I have not disappeared😆 I am still very much captivated by your writing!

This fic is very different the 'Oldest Story'…both in terms of character development and storytelling…and it is filled with Greek Reference and Paradoxes of life…I absolutely adore the way you have shaped the story…totally didn't expect it to turn out the way it did. So a big thumbs up for keeping your readers to the edge of their seats…

I love the characterisation Gaurav…they way he treated Vidya with respect from the very beginning and how he understood that just like his mother Vidya's heart and soul would wash away as he will not be able to cater for it but then the way he nurtured their relationship was amazing, of curse Vidya being the rational woman she is helped along the way. I admire the way she entered this relationship without any expectation as such and knew that there is a 50/50 chance of a marriage surviving be it love or arrange (this Vidiya is totally different from the one in the show…yeah my curiosity got the better of me therefore I decided to check out the show but was hugely disappointed so I'm back to the cocoon of your literature world😳)

All the characters have complex personality, even our simple Vidya but Salome outshines every single one of them…and the last part I read where we discovered that she was the disguised CUP who carpentered GrauvVidya…when S said to G that there is nothing wrong with loving two women and how she tried to get GV together (though her motives aren't exactly quite clear at this point)…this Salome reflects Luini's picture of the biblical Salome that is hanging in G's study parlour where it is portrayed that maybe she didn't know that she was a pawn in her mother's hand…we just need to know who this Salome in being played by and who is going to her Jhon…Gaurav or SSP. I don't think it's a love triangle between SSP-Divyani-Salome's Mother…but I don't have capability to come up with a alternate theory to match your standard.

And I don't think G is in love with V yet…he is physically attracted to her…I am also yet to figure who is the female lead of this story…Vidya or Salome, they both have their own stance but sometime I feel that even with small appearances Salome leaves a bigger after effect then Vidiya.

Devi you have such insightful readers here that I feel that my comment is just random rambling😳…I hope didn't put you to sleep…:)

Ufff!! I'm running out compliments!! First the CUP... now the Arod situation, then Salome might not be Salome! Gosh Devi... you're very talented story teller! the suspense about Salome...is killing me here! .. Poor Gaurav though.. he really loved her despite knowing who she is/was...

This is incredible...every time I think I have the story figured out you add another twist! This is why I love your writing :)

Salome Delilah was not her name. ..shockeddd.. thanks for the pmm ..

I thought I had figured everything out and then I am lost again...you find new ways and names to puzzle me😆

I knew the voice was Salome. Right since it was revealed that it was a woman!!! :D seriously.