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Posted: 14 years ago

ok guys !!! next update ready !!!

this gonna be a bore one ...

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part -27 .

It had been a week since the incident happened . maan still could not digest the fact that a girl like pari called him "bhaiya" . above all these things , the endless teasing sessions of dadima !! what more worse can happen in my life ???he thought '.

The office had been the usual thing except there was a meeting with one of the young and rich client . it was considerably a big project and everyone were working hard for it '

Maan and geet were discussing the last minute changes and arranging the blue prints .

Geet : maan , I forgot the accounts file .

Maan : it ll be with adi .

Geet : no maan I got it from adi sir , for getting a copy . its in my cabin . I ll bring it now .

With that she left for her cabin and searched for the file . upon finding it , she made her way towards the cabin . it was then he noticed a familiar form standing at a 10 feet distance . she had a wide smile on her face and ran up to him .

Maan on the other hand was waiting in his cabin . he wondered what took her so long ' he came oout of the cabin and saw her hugging some one . then came a another shock . she kissed his cheeks .

Maan : what the hell ?????am here waiting for her and here ' who is that guy and why is she kissing him ??

His blood started to boil and unknown jealousy came over . he marched towards them and heard their conversation .

Geet : oh god man !! I cant believe its you !!

Person ( In a flirtry tone ) : oh yes beautiful !! am here '

Geet : yash !! still you haven't changed !!

Yash : do you think so ??

Geet : hmmm'.you can never change ..

Maan interrupted them just in time . he shouted " what the hell is going on here ???"


Geet sprang up with the sudden shout and tripped a bit but just then yash held her in position . this added a packet salt in maan's mood ..

maan (towards yash trying to remain calm ) : may I know who you are ??

Geet side hugged yash and said "oh maan !! he is yash !! my darling friend .

Maan clenched his teeth and thought "darling ???she not once called me so !! I should definitely get rid of him NOW"

Yash : hello Mr.Khuranna .. am Yash malhotra . Nice to meet you . am here on behalf of my dad to work on the project .

Maan : oh hello Mr. yash . nice to meet you .

Geet : yash , you dint say to me ???? she complained like a small child ..

Yash : are yaar , did you ever give me a chance ???

Geet pouted : hmmm..

Maan could not bear the site any longer : okay Mr. Yash , we ll start our meeting now .

With that they left for the conference room and started their meeting . once they were in the meeting , they behaved fully professional . they discussed the ongoing demands and changes in the blue prints . once they were satisfied , they called off the meeting .

Maan : pleasure meeting you Mr. Malhotra .

Yash : oh please call me yash . pleasure is mine .

Geet was engrossed in going through her notes that she dint notice their little conversation . after a while ,

Yash : so if you don't mind , shall we talk keep aside our professional lives for sometime and be friends ??

Maan : ofcourse yash ..

Yash noticed geet and started commenting " I wonder how on earth did my geet became so sincere ??"

Geet snapped her head and gave him a deathly glare which dint go unnoticed by maan .

Maan : how you both know each other ??

Geet was about to answer but yash interrupted "oh I ll answer that question"

Geet : I know you jandhu !! you ll turn the story according to your script .

Yash : you still call me jandhu ???

Geet : if you behave like one , what can I do ??

Maan was amused as well as confused : guys stop it . am here as well .

Geet looked at him "maan I ll say the story."

Yash : you call him by name ???

Geet " ofcourse !! whats wrong in it ?? after all he is my finace"

Yash gave him a bewildered look and said "maan , why have done such a terrible mistake in your life ??? I hope god saves you"

Maan gave an uncomfortable smile . he wanted to know how exactly they know each other but the story was taking a different angle . on the other hand , geet was boiling a high degree . she was all red and ready to blast .

Geet : YOU ..YOU .. HOW DARE YOU SAY THIS ??? HAVE YOU FORGOTTEN YOUR HISTORY ??IT WAS ME WHO SAVED YOU FROM GETTING BROOMSTICK BEATING FROM MERRA . '. IT WAS ME WHO TALKED WITH YOUR DAD FOR ARRANGING YOUR'S AND MEERA'S MARRIAGE !! FOR GOD SAKE , YOU SHOULD FALL ON MY FEET AND THANK ME .. BUT HERE , YOU ARE TALKING TO MY WOULD BE HUSBAND AS IF HE HAD COMMITED A SIN BY ENGAGING TO ME !! HOW DARE YOU ???"

Yash did not know how to react . he very well knew that it was hard enough to control geet's anger . he have a sheepish laugh towards both of them and searched for an opportunity to run away .

Maan was giving an idiotic smile on knowing that yash is already married geet noticed maan and her concentration fully transferred on him . bechara maan , he need to suffer maan !!!

Geet : MAAN !!! why the hell are you laughing ??

Maan was dumstuck . for a second , he dint know what to say .

Geet : oh so , you are also with yash , and making fun of me ???

Maan (stammered ) : nahi geet .. I was laughing on seeing yash's plight .. maan bit his tough . "oh god ! yeh maine kya kardhiya ???? you are gone man !!"

Yash stood terrified : oh god maan !! what is the need for mentioning my name now ??

Geet : oh so you thought you can escape ???

Yash bowed his head : nahi meri maa . am so sorry !!! please forgive me . he made a puppy dog face .

Geet softened a bit but did not speak a word . she left the cabin giving a glare to both of them .

Maan : what is my fault ???

Yash : it all happens !!

Maan : now how ll I pacify her ??

Yash : are yaar , come on !! I have done a PHD in it .

As time passed , they became comfortable with each other and made up a plan to manofy her . they gave a hi-fi and left to execute the plan !!!!

sorry if i had left anyone from sending pm 😭

those who wanna be pmed please send me a buddy request .it ll easy to add ..

hope you guys like it !!

ll update the next part soon !!!

precap ::https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1676321/ff-forever-in-love-thread-2-link-added?pn=33


part 28 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/43832110

Edited by mrk-1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome n hilarious durga
loved it to the core
wonder how will they pacify geet
continue soon
thanks for the update
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: millie_maaneet

awesome n hilarious durga

loved it to the core
wonder how will they pacify geet
continue soon
thanks for the update


thnk u so much for the comment !!!!
they have a spl plan i say 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
That was wonderful!!!

well loved this 'J' Maan for fraction of seconds😉

Beautiful part!!!

loved it ...awesome!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was hillarious Durga you are amazing
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hillarious part. . . . Loved it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh durga dear...
how can i say how much i liked this ff...
ur updates are just awesome...
i cant find any word to describe it coz its such superb one.
i m dead laughing when pari called maabn BHAIYYA....OMG!!!!
and now geet's anger...oh poor maan and yash...
waiting for more dear...
love u for giving such an update...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: teju2292

oh durga dear...
how can i say how much i liked this ff...
ur updates are just awesome...
i cant find any word to describe it coz its such superb one.
i m dead laughing when pari called maabn BHAIYYA....OMG!!!!
and now geet's anger...oh poor maan and yash...
waiting for more dear...
love u for giving such an update...


thnk u dear ..
glad u liked it !
its all ur comments , thats supporting me
Edited by mrk_1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
i always like ur ff
Edited by teju2292 - 14 years ago

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