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Posted: 12 years ago
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😍😳Pleaseee!!!!😳😍
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Posted: 12 years ago
guys so far , 

4 - track 2 
5 - track 1 . 

so  only this many people like my ff ??? 
am so sad πŸ˜­
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing FF!
I loved reading it!
Geet is so cute!
Love her bonding with her friends!
Can't wait for the next part!
Please continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part!
 
thankgod yash is marriedπŸ˜†
 
continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi Durga , nice story. just all the parts in a line .
i think 1or 2. specifcally. 2. 
dont end the ff i just kove reading it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey guys thanks for the comments ..πŸ€—

so far , many wants to continue with track 1 . on the other hand , some wants suspense .. πŸ˜•

i have decided to take on some sort of suspense but i ll promise it ll have the same level of comedy scenes ... πŸ˜Š

so next update gonna take some time i guess !! πŸ˜‰


DURGA ..


Edited by mrk_1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
my first OS .. writting long back ...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1683312
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Edited by mrk_1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

hey guys !!! 

first of all a big thanks to my readers .. πŸ˜ƒ

i was so happy that you wished me on my birthday .. πŸ€—

just made my day !!

am up with the next update !! 

this gonna be shorter .. 

but i promise next ll be a long one ..

my first Os link ::https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1683312

PART -28

Geet left the office in a very angry mood and reached home . rano was quite surprised to see her so early at home and hence called her towards kitchen .

Rano : arey geet !! tum itni jaldi agayi ??

Geet : haa mom . any problem ??

Rano understood that she is quite angry on some one otherwise she would never talk like this : arey what happened ?? why are you angry ??

Geet :ask that to your son-in-law .

Rano : maan ??? what did he do ??

Geet : no wrong question . what he did not do ?? he joined with yash and made fun of me in the office .

Rano : yash ?? when did he come ??

 Geet : go and ask yourself mom . I ll never talk to them . they are just ' just'

Rano : geet ..bus ' bus .. tum aaram karo kamre meh . I ll bring some thing to drink .

Geet : no mom . I don't need anything . just leave me along for some time .

Rano got that its useless to argue with her and hence asked her to rest .

It was evening 6 P.M.

Maan and yash tiptowed in handa mansion . rano saw them and had a huge grin on her face .

Rano : arey maan . yash !!!

Maan : shhh ' mom .. don't make noise .

Rano was startled : why what happened ?

Yash : aunty !! am sure you might have experienced valconic eruption some time before . .

Rano : tum chup car . she is always like this . first say , when did you come ?? where is meera ??

Meera :: am here aunty !!

Maan and yash turned and saw meera standing there with a devilish smile on her face .

Yash : meeerrra ????

Meera : its meera yash . why are you stumbling ???

Yash : haa am I ?? am so surprised to see you here '

Meera : geet invited me .

Yash : oh wow !!

Meera : only me .

Yash was annoyed : what do you mean only you ??

Meera : it means get out ..

Rano and maan were silently watching the conversation and started lauging .

Maan : oh my god , stop both of you .

Meera : so this is Mr. Maan singh khuranna !! my jijaji !!

Maan : yea you are correct saali ji ,.

Rano : okay enough of your chatting , go and sit first . let me bring something for you guys .

After rano left , yash gave a angry look to meera while she returned with " I ' don't ' care ' for ' this" look .

Meera : so jijaji , what brings you here ?

Maan don't know what to say : woh woh '

Meera : don't blabber jiju ..

Maan took a deep breath : I made geet angry and I don't know how to pacify her . so thought of coming here and have a talk .

Yash moved towards meera and put his hand on her shoulder  : darling !! please help us na .

Meera smaked his hand : don't darling me . what have you done to her ??she sounded so angry .

Yash : no we were just talking .

Meera : just talking wont make her angry .

Maan : okay fine . he told what ever happened there in the office .

After hearing this meera : am totally out in this , its between you and geet ..

Yash : oh please dear , talk to her na ..

Meera could not stand both their pleading face and hence agreed . meera told her plan to them , and left to meet geet .

In geet's room

Meera : geeettt.

Geet who was sitting on the window railing was startled . then she saw meera and ran towards her . both had a bone crushing hug !!!

Geet : wow meera !!! you are back !!! how long we had seen each other .

Meera : wow am so excited geet . sure we gonna enjoy a lot this time .

Geet : am waiting meer,,,

Meera : yup . I told yash clearly not to bother me for  a week .

Geet face showed clear anger : don't talk about him meer.

Meera : I know 'I know 'why to spoil our mood now ?? just chill .. now get ready . we are going some where .

Geet : where ? not now pls ' am now in a very bad mood '.

Meera : arey yaar ,, pls for me ..

Geet : okay .. where are we going ???

Meera : my frnd had arranged for a party in her farm house '

Geet : what ll I do there meer??

Meera : well its your frnd too .. so no more questions . get ready soon .. we ll leave with in one hour .

Geet :okay ..you too ..

Meera :chal I ll get ready in the nect room'see you soon ..

With that meera left the room and gave a winning smile to both the people !!! 

precap ::: party time and a new entry !!!! 

part 29 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/44836588

do leave your comments and hit the like button

 

Edited by mrk-1 - 11 years ago
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HELLO ME 1ST LOVE IT DEAR ... LOVLEY PART...BUT IT  VERY CLIP HUNGER ...UPDATE SOON ...Edited by madhavipatil - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hiya Maaneet partying!!! will there be dance?
new entry Dev?