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So I sat up and read all that's been posted by the duo of you in this thread so far - which by the way makes a very interesting, and much more so, a fresh concept. Although, since I never really followed the show - I'm not a very TV person post one month into any show I reckon - I suppose even if you sold me the very same track as the show itself, it would be new! But it's unlikely such an unorthodox representation of a story could have been a hit series as MJHT was, so I'll assume your story is one of its own.
Which makes it better to me - you should know that Kanky, from reading Shakespeare!
And getting more precise, I give you both kudos on not losing thread with minor details in the character sketches. The way these two leads were penned in the introduction has sort of flown out into a stream that widens and narrows at points - widens in blunt revelations and narrows in adding more mysterious hints of what might come - but the connection stays. To formulate complex creatures and remain true to them start to end is rather hard, and you both have done a fine job thus far.
The last chapter puzzles me a bit - but I reckon part of that is attributed to the fact that it doesn't have a follow up installment yet! Message being, update fast please!
Thanks for getting me into the PM list, I wish to stay on (:
xx
JZee
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