~~A BEATUTIFUL MIND~~ A new ff of Saavan updt pg 5

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maris

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Posted: 14 years ago

A Beautiful Mind

Foreword

Baat hamari paaki hai has influenced my life greatly... Never before I realized I could write a fan fiction based on the cast of a popular Indian serial...An hidden talent I unearthed myself, partly because the original storyline of the show impressed me and mainly because, I simply adored the rocking chemistry between the lead pair Barun Shobti and Ankita Sharma onscreen, and the actors themselves... As they enacted the wonderful characters of Shravan and Saachi, I fell in love, with this wonderful pair, creating magic and entertaining and enthralling all of us as SAAVAN...On those lines, I sat back, thought about the disastrous and depressing end to a great story...If there is ever to be a season 2 of this show, the one notable glaring point to be observed by the CVs would be; never deviate from the original storyline, stick to a plot and exploit and experiment everything and anything within that...

The story is the king and Queen of the Land; the cast and crew its subjects...The downfall of BHPH had been that, there was too much tinkering and repairing to the storyline and the even bizarre introductions of cameos, which eventually killed the show...Am not here to lecture you all about what we already know and feel bad about it...I am here to attempt to write a new fanfiction about our favourite Saavan...This beautiful Mind is the story about Shravan and Saachi, their trials and tribulations, their love and affection , their families , their profession; in short all aspects of their adult life...How they overcome all the hurdles placed before them and live happily ever after forms the basic plot of this beautiful mind...

Many a times, as you read the chapters you may feel, that the plot resembles some wonderful novels and other stories...It may be true as I am greatly impressed by many authors...Naturally I may consciously or unconsciously follow their plots and descriptions...But therein lies the similarities and the difference...So sit back , relax and read and enjoy this new fiction about Saavan...My only hope is that if there is a season 2 to BHPH, I would want it to be this way...So think this fiction as BHPH 2... Savor and Enjoy... And as usual post your comments liberally...And please keep visiting this forum to keep it alive, if not for the sake of my story, but for the sake of our beloved Saachi and Shravan; 'Ankita and Barun', two great and endearing actors, tellywood had ever seen...

Thanks for you kind attention and patiently reading this post...

PS: I couldn't write more than 3 chapters, as I had hit a writers block then.Later I lost interest and motivation to continue this story.But rest assured you can see me writing for IPK and Preeto later on. Till then enjoy these 3 chapters and leave your valuable comments.

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Jahnvi

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Posted: 14 years ago

First, you came BACK!!! Second, you came back with a FAN FICTION... what all could we readers ask for, right? Really looking forward to your updates and seeing what this new FF holds in store for us. The title already has hooked me up so please post the first chapter soon.
Include me in your PM list (which I think I am in already 😆)

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maris

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Posted: 14 years ago

^^^

Jahn dont have much hopes I didnt write more than 3 chapters .so u get to read only those 3 and nothing else.

Probably the next forum will kindle my writng talent to pen something about Aurshi!!

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Jahnvi

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Posted: 14 years ago

Maris, even 3 chapters sound good. *sigh* How much we have all missed you and your talent in different forms!!! I just can't wait to see where you were taking the story in those 3 chapters. It's fine if you can't continue it right now. At least post those 3!!!

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ash91

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Posted: 14 years ago

yayy!!! Maris is back with a fan-fic!!! 😃😃😃 its fine, if its just 3 chapters,Maris...we can read anything if its on our SaaVan and that too in your writing😊😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

wow Maris thats brilliant 😛, a fan fic from you.. ,, Queen and King and thier tribes. awseme sounds intersting.. update as soon as you can

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ktms

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Posted: 14 years ago

Maris always love your writings and u know how desperately we wished u to keep writing ff's. very happy to see that you are back with a new ff😛. Whether its short or long we dont care. we love your work maris!!!😃

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Ayshran

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Posted: 14 years ago

Can't wait!😉

Miss BHPH😭

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Priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

cant wait to read ur latest ff

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maris

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Prologue

THE YEAR-2040

The cottage was nestled well among cosy Gulmohar trees on one side and palms on the other side... The huge spread of green grass, in front of the house, was like a carpet spread out to welcome all the guests to it...It was a small cottage with all the modern amenities and situated on the golf course road, bordering the greens of Gurgaon golf club, a prestigious 18 hole course designed by the famous Arnold Parmer... A House in that area was a prestigious address and shows immense wealth of the owner...

The man walked towards the house slowly, his steps reflecting a tiredness about him and his face haggard either from the lack of sleep or from the worry that was eating him alive...He was not too old , nor middle aged but a decent age of around 55 years, still considered prime by many...

He had a diary in his hand, an old leather bound book with a strap holding the covers... That was is most cherished possession now, no other material things mattered much...He reached the front door and saw the nameplate on the door...A bronzed plaque with the words "SAAVAN House"...

He knocked the door perfunctory and entered...The nurse cum companion welcomed him and submitted the day's report of the patient to him...He listened to with keen interest noting the ever so smallest details in his mind... He then knocked and entered the bedroom, like a small child entering unfamiliar room, not knowing what to expect from within...

The lady seated on the couch facing the window, slowly turned back...A woman of about 53 years ,her gaze shifting away from the lush green of the park towards the quite handsome man, though slightly old...She gave him a dazzling smile, her eyes welcoming him...She didn't knew much about him, except that he was a constant visitor daily, introducing himself to her and talking to her, putting her at ease...She felt a sort of security and a sense of belonging, in his presence...

The man saw her open smile and felt really good...She was his wife, a fact that she did not remember at all...A hit and run accident that happened 6 months ago, had completely robbed her of her memory...She just didn't knew what her name was and who was her family and what her profession was...She just existed and that mattered to her...

The first 2-3 months of her accident, she was constantly slipping in and out of consciousness; sometimes fully aware of her hospital surroundings, sometimes just lying there sleeping an almost endless sleep...The latest advanced medical treatment was employed, but it was only able to physically cure her, not mentally...By the end of the fourth month she almost became alright, but still recognition of her family eluded her totally...

Seeing the twins, some older members and even this man constantly, put a pressure on her mind...She just couldn't handle it...So to stop her further deterioration, the experts advised him to isolate her, but under watchful eyes...He brought her to this cottage and very slowly and patiently exposed himself to her...This past one month she really warmed up to him and felt more at peace mentally and physically...

Today he was going to tell a story to her...The first time ever she was waiting eagerly for his visit...He sat opposite to her and opened the book...Giving her a reassuring smile, watching her childish enthusiasm in sitting crossed legged,he started speaking...

The story of Shravan and Saachi, the story of himself and his wife, the story of Saavan...

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