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I was not in my senses. I walked across the college corridors and tripped over my dress. I felt a shoulder. I was mesmerized and was attracted to that person. Only elves were so attractive. He was certainly not an elf. I moved slightly away from him.

''Thanks ... do you know where Geometry is?'' I mused
''Go straight and take a left.'' he replied.
''Okay.. Hey! What's your name?'' I shyly asked him.
He looked at me angrily
'' Do you need to know everything?!'' he shouted. He stormed away.
I was surprised. He was so sweet and gentle first and suddenly he became an angry young man. I still liked him though... but it's not like I'm in love ... I know what it's like to be in love , not like I have ever been in love...

You can't sleep , you're not hungry , you can't concentrate anywhere and you get mood swings. That's exactly what happend to me today! I was really frustrated at the end of the day. When I walked up to my bike , I realised it was not there. I suddenly remembered that I took a taxi to come to college and it was too late today to take a taxi. Suddenly , that 'angry young man' appeared.

''What happend?'' he asked.
''I took a taxi to college today and didn't bring my bike. It's too late to take a taxi now.'' I answered in a low voice.
''I'll drop you to your house. Follow me.'' he said.
It was more of a command though. I sat in his car and went home.


Before we got home, we stopped in the jungle. I fell in love. Our eyes met.

During the following scene, this tune played ( http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ebSm76K7MhE)
I went up to him the next day. I kissed him on his lips for as long as I could. He placed his hands on my hips. I let go off the kiss and said 'I love you. Whatever your name is.'
'My name's Abhay. And your name's Piya. See you tomorrow.' He said, still arrogantly, while he stared at me.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wooowww. Loved it Noorri. Who are these 2 characters???

Dying 2 know!!!

Nahi

xxx

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Piya n Abhay. ooo

xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow !! Beautifully written...please write more !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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strange intro.. waiting for more

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