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Khushboo

@-Khushi-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#301

beautiful part sajjal............

m was literally crying....

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#302

Awesum SS

Never expected sumthg lik this frm Mayu

For Society he didnt support his wife

Sumwhr his reasoning was ryt to make u feel good but she wuld hav felt best if he wuld hav supported her

I wsh Khushi wuld hav live

I didnt wanted her to die

Mayu didnt the happiness at all

He got his wife n daughter after 5 years but he lost them also

Nups face a lot

She jus face pain pian n pain

Her only reason to live Khushi also left her

I really feel bad for her

I wish Mayu hav supported her

They wuld have been living happily

Jus love the SS

U wrote it fably

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amrutha,akhila

@ammuakhi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#303

mindblowing update sajjal..............

it was really good......

the ending i felt its apt for the ss.....

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#304

Sajjal i agree with the fact that mayank should'nt be forgiven...He should support nupur above all the circumstances...I cant forgive him...But why did u kill khushi and nupur? Nupur should get some happiness in the last...U killed her life her happiness khushi and she also died in last...
I've never expected this ending...Its the most painful ending...
Ur becoming tragedy queen dear...But i loved this ff...Enjoyed a lot...Hope u dont give a sad ending in THH...

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#305

awesome part.

superb ending.

lovd it.

waiting for some more from u.

thanks for the pm.

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Payal-15

@Payal-15

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#306

OMG it was such a sad end to all their lives.....i feel bad for all.....Mayank, Nupur, Khushi, Ria..........all had such incomplete lives

it was very painful Sajjal......u wrote i beautifully..........it requires courage to write the way u wrote....👏

but i wished life would have been a bit easier on them

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#307

hey sajjal..

sorry... i cudnt read ur ff's earlier...thnx 2 my studies...

got free tym 2day....

gosh... i read d whole story....

Heartwrenching!🥺

during earlier parts..i thot... mayank shud b 4gived...but after reading d last part....i thot.. husband is supposed to guard his wife's honor......and mayank didn't deserve that forgiveness....i just feel so bad that nupur and khushi both died!.....😭

u r a truly a gem of a writer...⭐️

luvd it!

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Beet

@Beet

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#308

Sajjal 🤗

Gosh, this was a beautfiul story!

It had a certain power and truth to it! Poor Nupur, lived her life feeling so disrespected and crushed! And in the end she even lost her reason to live!

This was such a wonderfully written story hun! You portrayed all the emotions so perfectly through your words! Bravo!

I really really loved this story <3

Keep rocking!!