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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
Awesome Update Dear.. Geet n Vampire.. Intresting. Carry on.. Thanx for d pm..lol.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
plz add me to pm list...loved your ff
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
wow wonderful update
do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
Very thrilling update you did dear, love it😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
wow what a storyline do pm me. thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: maanujaanu

waiting 4 a update here

sorry! I am busy...can update after 12th may only! after 12th you'll get daily updates!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
interesting ff..
hmm so geet is a vampire now.. but maan is not?? cause she said she wants to make him without a heart beat so i guess he is human.. but how is he responsible for her condition??
sorry i asked to many questions 😆
continue soon & plz add me in the pm list
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Pinky- Sir she suicided two years ago...though the police hasn't been able to trace her body and they claim that some animal might have taken away the corpse with it...
Maan: What rubbish Pinky...How did you get to know this...?
Pinky got scared: Sir!
Maan: just leave!
Pinky: o-ok-okay sir!

Maan was heart-broken and heart-sore hearing this...How could Geet do this to herself for a small fight... then he corrected himself... he had insulted her in front of a huge crowd...this was his punishment! He winded up his work and proceeded back to Khurana Mansion

Khurana Mansion

Daadima and Harshvardhan had been waiting for Maan since he was never late from work however burdened he may be...
HV- Maan! aapko itni der kaise ho gayii?
Maan: Dad... I was busy and time ka pata hi nahi chala!
HV: jaa kar aaraam kijiye...hum dinner bhij waatein hain...
Maan: mujhe bhook nahi hai...
HV: beta kuch to...

Maan didn't pay attention to his words and continued to walk... he went to his room and shut the door behind him... He threw his over-coat on the bed and fell down on the ground with a dull-thud... He screamed- Geeettt!!!!

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Geet sat on her window with her eyes closed...though not sleeping...she couldn't sleep after all!
Suddenly...she woke up! She thought someone called her...She looked around, then she smelled the room and found that it was just her imagination...The voice in her mind was familiar...it was that voice...which she hated- Maan Singh Khurana's voice...she hit herself trying not to think about him...

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He was wailing loudly and shouting as well: Geet! mere paas waapas aa jao! please...mujhe maaf kar do...ek baar waapas aa jao...main tumhe bahut pyaar karoonga! please Geet...

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Geet gasped again... she was able to hear Maan's voice calling her passionately...her heart burned...she wanted to see him desperately... Then she hardened herself: Geet...tu pagal hai kya? jo usne tere saath kiya...tu abhi bhi uske baare mein soch rahi hai... She hit herself again... She was so angry and ferocious and that two small girls were passing by their residence... She pounced upon them and ripped them apart... She drank their blood in content...to pacify herself and then cremated the bodies... Now she was calmed and so she retreated back to her room...
Her phone rang again... she looked at the clock and then the call- it was from the CID Bureau
Geet: Hello!
Abhijeet: Dr. Geet!
Geet: haan Abhijeet?
Abhijeet: Dr. ek case aaya hai...aap ki zaroorat hai...body kaafi buri haalat mein hai...aapko crime site par hi aana padega!
Geet: mujhe address SMS karo...I'll be there in a moment!
Abhijeet: hmm...
She took out her car and dashed through the driveway...She was happy to have got a case to distract herself from his thoughts...she drove straight to the site which Abhijeet had SMS'd her... It was near the lake and so she suspected that the body might be found floating on the water... She parked her car and reached the crime site... The body was in a bad condition and the smell radiating from the body was really horrible... Geet needn't needed a mask but to conceal her identity, she grabbed one... She tried to pick up the hand but it broke off... Abhijeet gasped and then patted Geet...
Abhijeet: sambhal ke Dr.
Geet: hmm...
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Maan switched on the TV and started surfing the channels... he stopped at a news channel where they were flashing the Breaking News regarding the body found at the Lake... He tuned in to check out the news...
The correspondent announced to interview the Forensic Doctor involved in the case and before she could appear, Maan switched off the T.V... He glanced at their wedding photo which adorned the room...

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Geet looked divine in her wedding dress and her face occasionally turned pink and red seeing Maan... Maan was lost in her serene beauty and stared at her with mouth wide open... Geet giggled seeing his reaction...
After nearly an hour of wedding ceremony...they were proclaimed Man and Wife...

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Tear fell on their wedding album which Maan quickly dried off and then kept the album in its place... He lay on his bed cuddling the cushion which Geet used to hold and sleep and then dozed off thinking of her...

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Geet inspected the body and found out that it was necessary for the body to be taken to the lab so that the equipments can be operated... With lot of difficulties they managed to move the body to the lab where Geet ripped open the body... Foul rotting smell filled the air and made it impossible for Abhijeet to stand who went out... Geet was left alone with a dead woman... She realised that she was dead to and an abnormal smile sweeped on her lips...
3 hours later, Geet handed over the reports to ACP and retreated back home only to find Leher and Abeet sitting on the sofa, cuddled into each other... She entered the hall
Geet: ahem!
Abeer jumped back suddenly and so did Leher...
Geet: waise...I didn't see anything...!
Abeer smiled and escorted Leher back to their room... Geet sat on the couch and switched on the telivision...All the news-channels were flooded with the so-called Lake Murder Case... She sighed- yahaan bhi!

The door banged giving the announcement of the arrival of Milind and Ayesha..who were coming after attending a marriage...
Geet: how was it?
Ayesha: mouth-watering...!
Milind: I am still hungry...
Geet laughed: you too are...!
Ayesha: neways Geet...you killed 2 girls today?
Geet gasped: yes! to calm myself down...that's it!
Ayesha: you'll expose us someday...you fool!
Ayesha tapped her stone and left...

Geet fell again on her couch and switched on the television again...

Precap
The Reason for Geet's change is finally unearthing...slowly

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Edited by CIDMaaneetNaksh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
Nice part!
Feeling bad for maneet!
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.



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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
loved the update...
so her identity will b relieved slowly...
but wat maan did and y did they split...
well when they encounter wat wud happen...
actually li'l upset to read abt geet like this but well if thats the story...
eagerly waiting for the next

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