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Posted: 14 years ago
Lechu and Sammy these two are very smart no fear at all to present their love in front of Dev..what will be his next step ?

Enjoyed Dev's talk to angel... loved the update...
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Posted: 14 years ago
HI Devika---

So Sammy-Lechu secret is out---
So Dev has become a responsible brother and will have to tell his parents---

Sammy's conversation seems so real--like he is a "real" person and something someone would say in real life----

Liked Lechu's reference to DDLJ---that girl has spunk

And love papa-princess talk---this is one segment, I look forward to every day...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank you friends ruchibabbly, 5armad, mich, Nabesa, imissouri, khus1973, sweetrose92, shalinikanagu, sweetfamily, radha_bilahari, *Maleena*, sushmavina, sugarandspice, vinianil, DAIRY25, laxmis, v3gradev09, suwin, chalhov, abhilasha_dream, bvs7691, radhika5, Tilashini, -Madhu-, Indiangirl09, anu17, nycsweetie, for liking part 112.
@ekta: thnak you, yes Lehcu si ready , but not her family.. so let see how her Bro will tackle it, will he make them to wait or will he let her run away...
@nycsweetie: thank you friend
@sushmavina: thank you so much dear.. especially to know you loved sammy's charactor, he is new int he show, and will join the bhatt family soon, so happy to know it.
@anukutty: thank dear< yes dev need to talk wiht his dad and mom, is that easy? because they never talked about it or not even thought about it, so how he will deal , maybe radhika can help him. so let see
@radha: thank you so much Radha for liking the new team, hopefully together they can bring more fun into this story line, with their natural self..
@madhu: thanks madhu, hopefully you will like upcoming part too
@suwin: thank you chechy
@diary25: thanks, aap ko hum kya kahe..!!
@vini: thank you, what'll be next step, Poor Dev now he is in his sis trap, so maybe Radhika will help him to come out of it, let see..
@radhika5; thank you so much dear. ha ha, so sammy's conversation real,wish i could find one lechu also !! thank sofr liking the nagel talk, more coming, with Lechu's blackmailing..
OMG! thanks for the PM too friends.
Thank you friends for the quick response. so let''s move on with Dev's next mission.. and Lechu's blackmailing... ready... coming up soon Part 113..
Devika.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 113

The arch of sunshine dipped into the west sea, and the earth was covered by the blanket of darkness. Radhika was checking on next days general work flow at the office.Now she almost knew what is happening all around the office in a daily basis, and who is in-charge of what. She smiled looking at the monitor when she saw Mr. Agarwal's project , which will be starting next Monday onwards, and the project lead will be Sammy, and they will be working from on-site.

Radhika jerked as she felt the hold on her shoulder, and she turned to look at him.

Dev: what happened? Today you are on office page!!!, not tired!

Radhika with a smile closed the monitor, and got up slowly, holding on to her stomach.

Dv with a smile: um, so my angel is growing big.

Radhika: um, she is growing big and giving me troubles too.

Dev: I know Radhika, but only few more months na., then I will carry her in my arms, and you can take rest.

Radhika with a smile walking with him towards the bed: very nice.

Dev: any doubt, then with another smile: no Rahdika, actually, I will take leave, and I will compensate your struggle time by holding her in my hand ok., you take only rest.

Radhika: compensate, that menas, after angel comes out ...for the next 10 months, you are not going to work.

Dev: what?

Radhika: otherwise how will it compensate?

Dev: not like that Radhika, I will be off for few weeks, you think dad will give me leave, even if dad gives, Mr. patil won't let me get me out from hsi sight, what I mean is after that I will be back home early and will take care of the baby the rest of the time, and play with her.

Radhika: um, let us wait and see.

Dev halped her to settle in bed, and slowly joined with her.

Dev: how is your feet feeling now?

Radhika revealing her slightly swollen feet : better

Dev touching and rubbing on her feet : Remember what Dr. Sulochana told, not to stand on your feet for long, I was watching you today, all the time you were walking around or listening by standing on your feet, I thought to interfere you many times, let me see, if you won't take care from tomorrow, then I will tell dad to cut your office visit.

Radhika: walking is good she said, also sitting simply at home, I feel bore too.

Dev looking at her face: remember how two years you were sitting simply at home, that time you never complaint.

Radhika: but now I am getting used to it and time passing quickly. Also next week Mr. Aggrwal's project team will be here , and I have to make sure their space and all.

Dev: um, so now you are more responsible than me.

Radhika smiled.

Dev suddenly: Radhika, Sammy is the project lead , right?

Radhika: um

Dev went in trance

Radhika: so how is the jassosi work going on?

Dev smiled and said: what jasoosi!

Radhika with atease smile: what else?

Dev: Radhika

Radhika: um, tell me na

Dev: I enquired his details. Munda sounds like a good guy, will match our Lechu, but

Radhika: now what is this confusion?

Dev: but how we will introduce this to dad and mom?.

Radhika: um, Lechu told me today, if Bro is not telling it by tomorrow evening, she will step in.

Dev: I am not at all surprised, she will do that also. I can't believe how much she changed within this two years.

But then they heard a knock at the door , Dev looked at Radhika and then looked at the clock , almost 11Pm, and who is at the door now!.

Dev went to open the door and within fraction of second , Lechu came in and closed the door behind, Dev stood there with confused face seeing her actions. Lechu ignoring Dev at the door, went straight to the bed and crawled in with Radhika.

Radhika: what happened?

Lechu: I am feeling sleepy

Radhika looked at Dev, who was coming near to bed

Radhika: did you watch any movie, are you afraid?

Lechu: nope

Dev looked at Radhika

Radhika: then , what happned?

Lechu: I am going to sleep here tonight

Dev looked at Radhika shockingly, and nodded his head in disagreement

Radhika with a smile, stroked on Lechu's hair and asked: tell me Lechu, what is it?

Lechu sitting back : Dad came back this afternoo , and still Bro is not presenting my issue to Dad or Mom, and sammy's parents will be here this weekend.

Radhika: oh, then looking at Dev: and taking her eyes back on Lechu: so that is the reason

Lechu: ha, how much time he need, see my Sammy how smart he is, just came and told you both na.

Dev controlled his anger on his arm.

Radhika; don't worry, your Bro is going to talk to papa and mom tomorrow, at breakfast time . Let papa settle first ok.

Lechu looked at Dev and found his shocked face, staring at Radhika

Lechu very calm way: I don't think so

Radhika: no Lechu, trust me, if he don't then, I will talk to mom and papa, happy now.

Lechu with a smile : sure?

Radhika with a smile: um

lehcu: Pakka

Radhika: pakka

Lechu giving a quick kiss on Radhika's cheek: my sweet bhabhi, I know, you can only handle this.

She stood from the bed and looking at Dev: you see, when the baby comes out na, he will be a boy only, and not just one, two boys, and I will tell them all about you. Wait and see

And she walked away.

Dev just stood in shock and then saw her clsoing the door behind ajar and disappearing.

Dev in trance: what was that?

Radhika with a smile: nothing, she just want to make sure that you talk to dad and mom

Dev shaking his head; but then why she was scolding my angel?

Radhika with a smile: she was not scolding , she was just irritating you, for not doing what she expected from you.

Dev: but Radhika, that's too much.

Radhika: think over it, or she will occupy this space tomorrow

Dev laying next to her and covering his arms around her stomach, bringing her more closer: no way

Radhika: then you better talk to papa

Dev kissing over her upper arm: she really knows how to blackmail me now

Radhika : just like her Bro

Dev with an innocent face: when did I do something like that?

Radhika : Remember, you made me to dance , that college program, you made me to do all those what you wished for till now, right?

Dev covering his expression: but that's because,

Radhika: wrapping her arms around his upper shoulder, bringing him closer: um, that's because..

Dev just smiled hiding his face over her chest, but then after a pause , he raised his face and said: but then why she should say that our angel will be a boy

Radhika: that's because she knows you are wishing for a girl.

Dev : ha, and I am sure our baby will be my little princess only

Radhika: ha, and you better hide that princess frock in cupboard, if Lechu sees that na, she will make a big scene here,

Dev: what scene?

Rahdika: what if it happened to be a boy!

Dev with a childish tone: Radhika, you too

Radhika: no , I am sure it will be a girl, but

Dev: what but?

Radhika: nothing

Dev: I know what you are trying to say, you are also with her only, let me talk to my little princess, let her come out into my arms, then I won't even give her in your hand, and I will tell her, you two are boyish'

Radhika: boyish, what is boyish!

Dev: that you two wished for a boy

Radhika pulling on his shoulder to look at her: you know what, I don't care, let it be a boy or a girl, its our angel, and

She smield shyly

Dev looking at her smile: and what?

Radhika: nothing

Dev: tell me

Radhika; no

Dev: Radhikaaa

Radhika in a shy tone: you only told that , you have more chances, so there is hope na

Saying that she covered her face

Dev's face coming near her face, and then digging near her neck space, just called her softly: radhikaaa

***

At the breakfast table. LEchu was rolling her eyes up , and it was moving between Dev and Radhika, and Radhika and Dev were looking at her expressions and then munching on the food pieces. Suchi was surprised to see the silence.

Suchi: Is anything important going to happen at the office?

Surrender: why?

Suchi: nahi, you came yesterday afternoon, and everything was fine until our dinner time, but today before going to office, your employees are so silent, so , just asked?

Surrender: in my knowledge there is nothing specific, and I don't know looking ta Radhika; is everything ok beta

Radhika : ji papa

Lechu: no dad, everything not ok

suddenly Dev: how do you know Lehcu, then looking at Surrender :everything is ok at office dad

Suchi just looked at her kids surprisingly with the fraction answeres.

Surrender looking ta Lechu: how do you know Lechu?

Dev: no dad, she is simply

Lechu: no dad. Not simply, this Bro is

Suchi seriously: Lechu, we are asking about office, and you are going to college right? Not to dad's office

Lechu: What is this mom, all the time college, study,college ,study

Suchi: at your age, that's what we expect, ok, once you complete your studies, we can think about office

Lechu mumbled: who is talking about office, mei tho

Dev: Mom, vo

Suchi looked at Dev: vo what?

Dev: vo, then after a pause :kuch nahi

Lechu as if reminding: Bhabhi

Radhika looked at Lechu and tried to give a smile

Suchi: o what bhabhi?

Lechu with a smile, getting up from her seat, went near Suchi, and then pulling on her one cheek, she said: that bhabhi will tell, and I love you mom.

Suchi: esse kya hogaya

Even Surrender looked at his daughter's strange behavior and his eyes followed her actions along with Suchi's.

Lechu coming near Dev and in his ears, very secretly : ok, now I am leaving, but when I come back, I need to see a positive response, or else, don't even think about stepping back into your room, ok.

She moved her face back but then noticed the shocking face of her parents, to ease their shock, she suddenly placed a quick kiss on Dev's cheek and waving her hand she disappeared.

Dev sat there shockingly, surrender and suchi sat with froze face too

Radhika controlled her smile hard.

Suchi in broken surprise tone: vo vo, lechu hi tha na

Surrender: um, and I am sure she is buttering her brother and her bhabhi so much, that means she has to present something so important to her then looking at Dev: what is it Dev?

Dev coming back to reality, looked at Radhika

Suchi also waited patiently

Dev: vo dad, actually there is nothing

Surrender: don't say there is nothing, there is something, um

Dev: vo

Suchi: what is it Dev?

Dev looking at his watch: mom, will tell you in the evening, you know it is Lechu, its all her silly things, don't worry, I will handle it.

Somehow he completed his sentences and got up and went to his room.

Suchi: I know, this lechu, might be her professor scolded her for something, or she might have did something wrong at college and professor is asking us to be there.

Radhia: no mom, nothing like that

Suchi: how do you know?

Radhika: vo mei

Suchi: um, whatever it is, better tell us OK, I don't want her to get into any trouble later. And then looking at Radhika; don't try to side her with filling her work book and home works ok.

Radhika , just like a school kid: ji

Suchi got up and left the dining room'

Surrender looking at Radhika: ye,sabko kya hogaya hei bhai, everything was fine till I left, and when I came back it was looking fine too, then what happened in one night?

Radhika with a smile: nothing dad, everything is fine

Surrender : um, that's good

But then they heard Dev's call from the room

Radhika got up taking the permission from surrender and went upstairs

Rahdika: what is it?

Dev: Radhika, where were you? Get ready fast, we are already late

Radhika: ha I am ready, but, why you look so tensed?

Dev : nothing, but then walking near to her and holding onto her shoulder: Radhika, how do tell them?, I don't know. I mean, if I get a start then I ,for sure, but this is, ...dad and mom never even thought about this, and I don't know how they will take it, and that Sammy, when I asked him to wait, he is giving me time for a week. You remember how long we waited, and this two!!!, just met and ...

Radhika holding him loosely: so you just need a start, I can help you with that.

Dev with a surprise look : how?

Radhika : don't worry, leave that to me, I can talk with mom, mom doesn't have clinic afternoon today, she will be back early and i can try to come early too..

Dev: but be careful, I don't mom to faint, or get panick, I mean she just overcome formt he shock that I gave her, and I don't want her to believe her kids got spolied so much, you know, I really don't know Radhika, how she will take it, she is thinking about her studies and mostly seeing a fun daughter in her and ...

Radhika holding him tight: just trust me, i will take care

Dev giving a kiss over her forehead: I trust you

And then hugged her.

Dev: get ready quick then

Radhika: ha

Dev: how is your feet feeling now

Rahdika: better

Dev: let me see

He looked at her feet and found the swelling reduced.

Dev: um, now if I see you walking around, that time you will hear me for real.

Radhika smiling:um

Dev: I am serious

Rahdika smiled and went to get ready.

***

Radhika came early , saying some excuse to Surrender.

Suchi was sitting on the couch reading some book. Radhika came down and she sat with her feet rested over the sofa length, she tried to read Suchi's face to check in her mood.

Rahdika: mom

Suchi looked at her face

Rahdika clearing her throat: mom, vo

Suchi kept the book away: is everything ok beta

Rahdika resting her hand over her stomach, as if trying to get her little ones support too: vo mom, I have to tell you something

Suchi: bolona, why you are giving such big introduction.

Radhika: vo mom, Lechu

Suchi: lechu! I know she did somehting, so only you two are playing this hide and seek formt he morning.

Radhika : nothing like that mom, but still lechu

Suchi : ha, lechu! What happened?

Radhika: vo mom, she is in love.

Suchi: ha, so

Radhika felt a relief after saying it out

But then Suchi's forehead tightened and she looked at Radhika and Radhika noted her frowned expression

Suchi: what did you say?

Rahdika rubbing over her stomach: vo mom, I want you to listen patiently.

then within few minutes she said everything to Suchi about Sammy's visit and his parents plan to visit that weekend

Radhika looked at Suchi and saw her flat affect posture, Radhika's heart was beating faster, she kept on stroking over her stomach, making sure that she said all right.

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thank you friends for the response and hopefully you will like this part.

have a goodday
Take care
Devika.
Edited by Devika. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Devika, loved the last 3 updates so much. They are very entertaining. Looks like Sammy is perfect match for Lechu. Hope he can help Lechu with her sari😆. Poor Dev is being blackmailed by sister now. Loved how Dev and Radhika are so close to each other now. Can't wait to see Surinder and Suchi's reactions.
I was just giggling away reading the updates. Thank you very much Devika.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: laxmis

Devika, loved the last 3 updates so much. They are very entertaining. Looks like Sammy is perfect match for Lechu. Hope he can help Lechu with her sari😆. Poor Dev is being blackmailed by sister now. Loved how Dev and Radhika are so close to each other now. Can't wait to see Surinder and Suchi's reactions.

I was just giggling away reading the updates. Thank you very much Devika.

Thanks Laxmis, I was so eager to know.. so thankyou so much for your response...
😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank You---Thank You for such a quick update and a beautiful one too-----

More than Dev-Radhika --I love papa-princess conversation; so thank you for making that relationship so special---Also, wonderful to see how caring Dev is towards Radhika and how their relationship has grown..

Lechu-----I feel like saying "you go girl!"---she knows what she wants and goes right for it and doesn't mind manipulating her bro too-----Wow!! what a character---

And Dev; didn't expect to go and talk to his parents---and that's what he did---So now Radhika has to tell it all---waiting to read Suchi's reaction----
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Posted: 14 years ago
di wow super fast updates I love it soo much...Dev is afraid more than Rad...also Lechu she is my Good super fast in love...hope good thing happen to her...
Dev can't control his younger sis...that much she is stubborn...
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks devika, hope everything works out for Lechu...
love papa princess talk and radhika enjoying it ...so happen next..waiting 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Devika,

These updates are so entertaining. I really liked the flustered Dev and the responsibility resting on radhika.

My poor Suchi Mom, she is completely shocked at the behind the back activity of her daughter. This son-daughter characters are a real twosome. Enjoying these updates a lot. Way to go Devika.👍🏼

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