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Posted: 14 years ago
Sorry for Armaan. I'm still angry with Maan for everything ( I'm not as great as Geet )
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part...
armaan's tragic past is heartwrenching...
but loved maan

continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it...nice to see things patching up between geet and armaan...i hope ridz and armaan will to be together...update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

loved the update ...

he cherished and treasured her every relationship ...

next update kab miley gaa muski
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Posted: 14 years ago
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-truly magical-
part 185
Ridz had a nervous break down
where is she?
We have shifted her to special care
Geet was shocked with the word..we!!! she was definitely falling in love with him all over again...
armaan stood numb.. his ridz had a nervous breakdown & he has been thinking all this while she moved on.. how could he.. Maan knew the exact feeling he harbored in his heart. He slowly hugged him.. she will be here in 8hrs. I have already made arrangement for her to board the flight. Armaan hugged him tightly & cried.. she will be fine na!!
Maan nodded very softly.
They finish the breakfast. Geet & armaan both were quiet. Maan printed out her complete report & gave to armaan. He carefully studied it. Geet somewhere knew that had she been around things wouldn't have gone so out of control, especially with armaan. She was so guilty, but the way Maan handled the whole thing she was overwhelmed. He actually arranged to get ridzy here, the moment he found armaan. He had been taking care of her & strangely the reports read the only person whom ridzy now recognized was Maan. She was so much falling in love with him all over again. for keeping every thing of hers close & protected. How he was understanding armaan's pain..
all of them looked at armaan's pager that beeped.
I need to rush ..koi emergency hain.
Maan & Geet nodded
wat time is her flight expected
7pm
Maan confirmed
I will be back by 5 for sure.
Umm

after armaan left. Geet was still gloomy. Maan tried to cheer her u, she smiled weakly & locked her self in the room..
jaan plz aisen mat karo he knocked the door
sab meri wajah se huwa.. she began to sob
nahi jaan..plz don't blame urself
he forcefully opened the door.
She hugged him & cried.. main unke saat hoti tho..aisen nahi hota.. I would have taken care of him.. I could have spoken to ridzy's dad.
Oh !! jaan plz tumhari wajah kuch nahi.. huwa...plz don't cry
..he kissed her jaan dehko baby bhi cry karegi.. plz sweet heart.. he softly caressed her stomach. She tried to be strong & went to the kitchen. He closed his eyes.. not able to bear her pain.. she was feeling so disturbed, he was not letting her stay like that. She came back to the room wiping her tears..

he closed the door & played the music
Hey you
Meri saans saans tere paas paas,
Yu hi baar baar, hui aag aag, kyu bata?
She was in no mood to smile..but the song lighten her a bit..reminding of their past..
She shook her head & walked towards the door
Hey you,
Tere saath saath poori raat raat,
Karoon pyaar pyaar bhari baat baat tauba
,
he extended his hands & blocked the door.. she knitted her brows & looked at him
Bebo main bebo, dil mera le lo,
Dil dene aayi, le lo ji le lo
Maan shook his body sensually enacting the step & tossing his t-shirt off his head
Sehmi sehmi se main, roko toko naa ji,
jaan tumse bandhi hai, durr jao naa ji,
she blushed & looked away
Durr bhi ek bahana, haule haule se jaana,
he pulled her closer & kissed her neck.
Hum ko bhi kya khabar thi, ishq hai apni tu tu main main,
he removes his tracks & presents himself na** to her
Bebo main bebo, dil mera le lo,
Dil dene aayi, le lo ji le lo
he dances yet again..but now totally sensational..
Chupke chupke mujhe, mud ke dekhe kuy ji,
she bit her lips & giggled
Saari saari hi main, teri teri hu ji,
he spreads his hand opens & hugs her
Dor daale zamanna, mera dil nahi maana,
Teri ek hi nazar mein, dil ko hua hai yeh yeh wo wo,
she hides her face in his embrace.. u r looking hot.. she smiles.. I am sure bebo will have a tuff competition
oh really
he pins her to the bed. Maan strokes down her skin using the tip of his tongue. It would be so easy to just move on, he had no doubt that she would taste absolutely delicious. geet lay still, frozen with anxiety as he touched her. She shivered as his warm tongue made contact with her cold flesh. He made her feel like she was wrapped in his warmth, being smothered his loves embrace.

Maan she whimpered sensually. Maan smiled naughtily at her plea, he loved it when she begged for more, to admit them what had been uncontrolled him...their passion.. He leaned across the trembling her and slowly licked her flesh, enjoyed her shiver and moan. She would be so easy to take, he moved his hand to her top and slowly began to work at the buttons. He was in no rush, they could be lost down here for hours, and so he could take his time with her, he would savor her. He could toy with her and love her.

He gave slight twist of his wrist, and the top parted down the middle in one motion. Geet smiled beneath him, and Maan smiled down at her carnally making clear his intention. He could exert his power over her so that she was blindly obedient to him, but thats not wat he wanted!! He wanted her to relish ever moment.. what was happening to her, he wanted her to feel every last bit of her life being drained away, in passion.. he wanted to break her... moan.. plea.. cry.. forget all her sorrows.. & just live that moment.

he listened enthralled to her heart. ..like it was his.. he could feel himself alive with every beat of hers..lup...thup..lup...thup..lup...thup..He dimly heard her whimper, he vaguely heard her moan.. he was blind and deaf to almost everything as he latched on to the steady beat of her heart. How long he lay there, covering his love with his warm hard body, Maan could not have said. He was in love.. in love this women..

he moved softly lower.. caressing her ever so softly increasing the desire. He smiled wildly as he was entrapped in that warm fluid, geet scream like the one earlier bounced around the cavern ..Silence followed for a very brief while, and then the moans began in earnest, full of rage and passion. & emotion. For a long long time those cries continued, to slowly die away and leave silence once more.

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Precap
ridzy meeting armaan
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muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

enjoyed unedited version even more
thanks for updating


Edited by millie_maaneet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
aw was sooo cute
poor armaan x

Edited by Nazmaa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneet23

Nice update

i didn't get the line - she knew it was only till u..touch his heart..once u r there..there was no return.. he would keep his loved ones cocooned in him.
could any one pls explain me
i like the way maan is so possasive for his angels.
precap is interesting "bebo main bebo" again...
w8ing for nxt update

it means that once u are close to maan's heart..he will love u unconditionally & take care of u in his own way.. wat ever happens..but he will be always their for u
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: millie_maaneet


enjoyed unedited version even more
thanks for updating


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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update
Loved it
Plz rember to send me pm plz

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