MayUr FF - The Blossoming Magic || Part 18 - Pg 92

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Posted: 14 years ago

#561

wonderful update.loved their level of comfort with each other.this was both romantic as well as emotional.i loved the way mayank was trying to understand nupur.please update soon.cant wait .😊

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sonal

@Mystique

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Posted: 14 years ago

#562

😔 the part towards the end...the pain,lonliness she felt...all of it one can't even begin to imagine the extent...all u can do,is let the person speak about it...if u can share happiness,why not sadness?! And mayank let her speak,finally someone with whom she could share all that was trapped within!
Lovely chapter :) the way the sharma kids are superfast n always running (like me i'd say 🤣 )n the morning romantic start ...cute!
Your update brought a --> 😃 on my face...aur kya kahoon?!

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daniella

@daniella05

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Posted: 14 years ago

#563

wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thanks 4 the pm

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_ArTi4ever_

@_ArTi4ever_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#564

after finishing off reading ur each n every update,i crave 4 it even more than b4..this is the uniqueness of ur narrating stories..😊simply fantastic update,while the last few lines actually brought tears in my eyes...awesome job dear...now fatafat update the next part asap..😳

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Varshini

@varsh-mayur

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Posted: 14 years ago

#565

oh god its so dreamy😍...loved mayank and nupur...so magical

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Mamoona

@Silent.Dreamer

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#566

Nupur is Such a Sweet Heart and Last was Really Emotional Loved it

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jiya

@--jiya--

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Posted: 14 years ago

#567

It was such a dreamy beginning😍...

Nupur splashing water on Mayank😆...

and the romance was so...☺️...beautiful

and how sweet of Mayank that he brought her stuff😊

and the last bit was so touching n emotional😭...Nupur missing her parents😭... I m happy to see Mayank loving her so much😊

❤️❤️❤️

~jiya~

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Mulan.

@mulan.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#568

KINZUUU ATLEAST MERE TMEN TMARA PART PARHNE KE BAAD HUG KRNE KA MAUQA MIL GAYA AJ!!!!!! :DTHIS WAS AN AMAZING PART BCZ IT SHOWD HOW MUCH MAYANK CARED FOR AND LOVED NUPUR!!!!! THE ENDING WAS SAD AND I CAN UNDERSTAND NW WHY U WR FEELING SO LOW AFTER WRITING IT ! BUT AT THE END OF THE DAY NUPUR IS NO LONGER ALONE! SHE HAS MAYANK!!!!LOVE U BESTIEEE!!!!