my past in present..SS (MG) part 5: pg 24

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Heyy guys'!!! Im Adeena.. a bigg fan ov MaanEet'!! After readdinggg sooo many owsumm FFs on maaneet I thought of writing a SS.''''..

Here's the first part

1st part'

She was climbing up stairs in a big rush' she knew she was late abt half an hour.. while she was crossing the door, she slipped and before falling someone grabbed her by waist... and she tightly closed her eyes cox she knew who was he. His exotic fragrance was making her feel dizzy.

When she opened her eyes a pair of dark brown colored eyes was looking into hers. She made her self straight

He spoke: Geet!! U know. You are 20 mins late.. Can I know the reason??

Geet: ss..sorry Sir.. main aainda se khyal rakhun gi.

After saying that line she immediately ran from there and straightly went to her seat..

Yash (a new employee) asker her: what happened? Why were u running like this?

Geet (a bit sternly) : that's not ur concern.

Yash to himself: ajeeb insaan hai. Pta nahi kahan khoi rehti hai aur kisi se baat tk nae krti..

As he was a bit loud so pinky who was munching a sandwich overhear him and said: yash,Geet ko pta nae kya hogya hai.. pehley wo aisi nae thi..

Yash: hamein kya?? Let get back to work.

Maan's cabin:

Maan: Damn, why she is behaving like this as she doesn't know me.

He was soo frustrated so he decided to go back home.

At Khurana mansion:

Maan enters and was goeng towards his room but dadi stops him: Maan, aap mjhe batyieye k aap istarah behave kiu krtey hain?

Maan was in no mood to give the answer so he asked: Dadi! Ryaan kahan hai, main jb ata hun tou wo yahin hota hai.

Dadi: he is in his room. Nanny usey le upper room me le gae hai.

(Maan went upstairs)

In Ryaan's room: - (maan enters)

The room was lil bit dark and Ryaan was sleeping peacefully on the bed.

Maan sit beside him and placed a soft kiss on his forhead, "my baby", he whispered.

He spent few more minutes watching him quietly and left the room.

In Maans's room: -

After changing the cloths he lied on the bed. Door knocks:

Maan: come in, nakul enters: sir, dinner ready hai, sb aap ki wait kar raey hain, ap jaldi se neechey ajaeye.

Maan: ok, m coming.

Downstairs on the dining table, every one was present there.

Maan was surprised to see Sameera and Sarita (his mom) there. Aj aap donu, is wakt ghar pe hain. No party kiya? Nakul, bring my dinner to the study, I'll eat there.

Sameera (a bit louder) Maan, why u r ignoring me and Mom. Im ur wife.

Maan: yeah. I know, and went to study.

Sameera: mom, you saw na, how he's ignoring me'

Sarita: don't worry baby. He'll b fine...


I know its little short but net time I will try to give a long one'.

Please ignore all the grammatical and vocabulary mistake..

if you liked it soo please press the like button and do comment

My ff is untitled so please give it a name because ive not decided a name yet'..

Wid luv..

Adeena'😛



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Posted: 14 years ago
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hailaaa.. MAAN KA BACHA... 😡
the starting was my favourite for this part and the part where maan is ignoring sam 😃😆
and wat was with (maan ki) geet.. and maan said "why is she ignoring ne as if she doesnt know me" BIG SECRET huh 😆 and also that sameera likes partying and seems like she doesnt care for the kid.. hmmm.. noor ka SHATIR DMAAGH 😆
it was prettty small update despite all the one month waiting 😡😆
chall noor abji k leay iss se guxara kr *self talking*
now noor wants a BIG BIG update next time wrna adeen ho gi aur noor ka joota hoga.. AND m serious..
and i almost forgot to say that it was a reallly nice update 👏👏👏👏
Love
Noor 😆
Edited by NoorFatima - 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: NoorFatima

hailaaa.. MAAN KA BACHA... 😡
the starting was my favourite for this part and the part where maan is ignoring sam 😃😆
and wat was with (maan ki) geet.. and maan said "why is she ignoring ne as if she doesnt know me" BIG SECRET huh 😆 and also that sameera likes partying and seems like she doesnt care for the kid.. hmmm.. noor ka SHATIR DMAAGH 😆
it was prettty small update despite all the one month waiting 😡😆
chall noor abji k leay iss se guxara kr *self talking*
now noor wants a BIG BIG update next time wrna adeen ho gi aur noor ka joota hoga.. AND m serious..
and i almost forgot to say that it was a reallly nice update 👏
Love
Noor 😆




oye huey.. noor ka shatir dimaag to bara tex chal rha hai..😉. but abi tk second part ki heading tk nae daali...tou sabar bachay sabar...😆😆.. jald hi update krungi...
or haan.. bara wala Thanks... 😃😃



wid luv,,,
Adeena...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice update i luv it...😊 thnx 4 the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetcherry96




oye huey.. noor ka shatir dimaag to bara tex chal rha hai..😉. but abi tk second part ki heading tk nae daali...tou sabar bachay sabar...😆😆.. jald hi update krungi...
or haan.. bara wala Thanks... 😃😃



wid luv,,,
Adeena...

abhi tk nahi daali jeading tou kher hay..
noor nay pehla part tou post krwa lia na ab dusra part bhi likhwa lu ge..
fikr not bacha wen noor ka shatir dmaagh is not that kacha 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice start
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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great ff...nice concept...maan married...cool...plz one more update...want 2 kno more...

i want an update...plzzz

Edited by sam1234fly - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Really interesting start. Pls add me to ur PM list ...dont keep us waiting too long.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: saniya456

nice update i luv it...😊 thnx 4 the pm



thanks saniya...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: nahtani88

nice start

cont soon
add me to your pm list



thanks😊

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