Maneet FF - GEETIKA (OLD THREAD 1 - 2011-12) IMP NOTE PG 136 - Page 22

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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved the update
Maan is dng all opppsite of his brain saying hehehehehehe
Loved how he helped her
Geet's new name is fab
Deer Devil hehehehehehehe
Loved her n pinky talk
Lets c if she culd say sorry or nt
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Posted: 14 years ago
dont be sorry the story
shaping up amazing
love it
fabulous update
pls cont soonnn
thanks pm
thank yu so muchhh
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update ... add me to ur pm list ... thanks ...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Vaidhumom

Hee Hee...Everybody are surprised that maan didnt scold geet...I dont know why...I dont like them fighting 😆
Anyways...some fights are on the way which I dont like but have to do it to take the story forward.😳
I love Pinky and her charector. She would marry food if given a option.😆
You will be surprised to know...I started watching geet from Aug 10th episode and I begin to like it so much that I watched all the episodes from April -Aug online at one go. 😊
Now...writing part 11...gathering all the inputs at one place.



sorry lakshmi i couldnt reply u back on time.
i got hocked up wif some other stuff ..
I even havent read ur latest update.. will do tat afta dis...
so even u dont like 'em fihting.. yah me too.. its always better to be romancing den fighting.. but even fighting is apart of romancing..okok control me plz... sth really wrong wif me 😉
Pinky marrying Food!!! She would need to get married everyday... 😲
ooh aug 10th was indeed a beautiful part. THou kinda boring one. But it was a recap of their beautiful journey. Wat u must me kidding me. U watched all tat at a go!!! wow!! u really superwoman...
okie now i really need to read ur current updates...

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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 11
wonderful!!! wow geet is jst d best!!
she made well on her first day itself... without any falls.
she is indeed smart
luved d way maan made sasha shut her mouth!! She need to more such treatment

Part12
wonderful.. d way u connect each picture into d scene.
luved d way maan was doin all d way opposite to his brain.
mayb he is folo'ing wat his heart is telling him!! Deer Devil in action!!!
so far it goin on smoothly..no hiccups..
its no draggy as well.. as its jst on d beginning phase.
SORRY scene... i wonder wats goin to happen..
am vry curious wat she goin to say. how she goin to tell him
n how maan will react to it!!!

thx for the pM... keep writing...
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Posted: 14 years ago
heyyy,,plzzz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Ladies...
Have been busy for the last 2 days and even today...😕
Will give my next update tomorrow...😳
Take care and thanks for all your support😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hello Everyone
Sorry for my late post. Giving a loong looong update and hope this compensates 😳
Posting now and will check with my editing and spelling mistakes later.
Part 13:

Later in the night Geet calls her family and has a long long talk with excitement on how her first day in office went.

Next day morning...Geet keeps a small idol of Ganesh on her table and prays for a good day ... "Bhagawane...Enaku mannippu ketka sakthi kodu" (Babaji...Please give me strength to plead Sorry) Her first step is to try confessing via phone...She sits at her desk and makes rehersals...It seemed as an easy task till yesterday...but as the time is nearing its getting more and more difficult for her. Tappu seyyumbodhu yosikave illai...ippo Mannippu ketkaradhuku ivalavu yen yosikavendirukku? (Never thought anything before committing mistake...then why am I thinking so much to tell a Sorry)

She takes her mobile...practices...Sir I'm Geet...Sir Sorry...She is not getting right words...her heart is beating faster.

Now she accumulates all her guts and calls Maan on his mobile...The mobile rings and she immediately cuts the call...

Ayyooo I shouldn't have called thro mobile..I should have used office landline...I'm such a stupid.

Maan finds it strange...he calls the number back. Geet's mobile has been ringing now for the 5th time. Geet all tensed and biting her nails...Its better I dont take his calls...He will forget this number within a day or two...CORRECT?

Tasha and Sasha are closely watching Geet.

Saashaaa...Mera matlab hain Maa'm...yeh behenji kar kya rahi hain?

Haan Tasha...aaj yeh kuch pareshaan lag rahi hain...Kuch tho hua hain...pata lagana padega.

Geet at her desk...all confused and rolling her eyes...didn't notice thro the blinds that Maan is passing by her cabin and enters her cabin.

Geet jumps out of her seat...tension written all over her face...Maan SSSIR Aap?

Nahin main unka bhoot hoon! With a smirk😈

She does a little louder self talk...Ivaruku eppadi terinjadu ivarai naan boothamnu kupadarennu? (How does he know that I have nicknamed him DEVIL?).

If you are done with your self talk, May I know why did you call me on my mobile?

Ayyo...how did he know that it was me who called him? I must say that he is a real DEVIL🤢

She must be thinking how I got her number...thanks to Aadi...he gives me the contact details of all the new employees on their joining date...and smirks😈

Sir...Actually...That...YES...Why I called you? I just wanted to know what time you will be reaching office?And she gives one of the idiotic smiles...😃

What? Now Maan is confused...Are you sure that this was the reason for your call?

NNooo Sir...I mean YES Sir...😕You were late by 5 minutes and I heard that if you are late you will not be coming to office. So, I needed to know your important tasks for today...and she breaths Phewww

Hmmm...OK...I will be leaving to my cabin now. Will call you and give you a briefing about today's aganeda...Hmm?

And...I'm very busy for today...you have to tell Pinky to transfer all my calls to your intercom so that you can attend to them on my behalf and take messages...ALRIGHT?

SURE SIR😊

Maan leaves from her cabin and Geet again sits back at her desk... indha phone plan semma flop aduthadhu enna? 😕 (This plan to call over phone turned to be a big flop...what next?)

Saasha and Tasha have been silent observer of all this...

Saashaaa...Mera matlab hain ma'm...main ne aaj tak Sir ko is tarah kisi ke cabin main jaathe huve nahin dekha...Even if he needs to talk to you...he calls you to come down to his cabin...🥱

Tasha...I am not happy with this behenji working closer with MK...I need to do something about it.😈

Pinky walks in to Geet's Cabin...Geet...Chalna...aaj main tujhe nahin chodoongi. Come lets go to Office Cafetaria.😛

Pinky...Aaj sir ka calls bhi mujhe lena hain.😕

Pinky calls the security guy who attends the calls at the reception during her absence. She tells the security to call Geet Madam on her mobile if there is any important call.

Pinky drags Geet to the Cafetaria...She orders for Burger and Coffee and Geet orders for Coffee

Geet...kya baat hain...itni upset kyon ho?

I really dont know how to tell sorry...It doesnt seem to be as easy as it seemed to be and I am not getting the right opportunity.

Bas itni si baat??...says Sasha who comes closer to Pinky-Geet's Table...How to miss Tasha?...she is Sasha's Glue Stick...😆

Main tumhari madat kar sakthi hoon...😉

Sasha Ma'm sach? Please help me then...Asks Geet innocently

Pinky pinches lightly on Geet's hands...in a way not to listen to Sasha.

Pinky...Get back to Reception as its going to be a busy day today with whole lot of calls and visitors.

YES Ma'm

Sasha and Tasha tell Geet that the best way to impress BOSS is to make nice coffee for him...and then tell SORRY...They take take Geet to the Office Pantry and explain her to make coffee for Boss.

Yeh Coffee Mug Lo...Ab is cup mein...5 teaspoon sugar...1 spoon of instant coffee powder and 2 spoon of milk powder add little water...mix all together well and then pour in the hot water from the kettle and mix once again...your coffee is ready

WOW Sasha Ma'm...so nice of you...you have made my day.😊

You're welcome😉

Sasha and Tasha smile at eachother once they come back to their cabin

Saashaa...Mera matlab hain Ma'm...today will be the last working day for that Girl...WOW...what a plan!!!

Sasha with her usual evil smirk😈

Geet knocks Maan's cabin door

Come in

Yes Geet

Sir I have prepared this coffee for you

Why are you doing all this? This is the job of office puen not yours...you do what needs to be done by you...😡

Sir...I thought you have a very busy day ahead...that's why I made this coffee by myself. For once, please have it Sir...

Fine...let this be first and last time...OK??😳 With an attitude.

Geet Smiles and invardly thinks...let this DEVIL have his coffee and then I will say SORRY...Even I am no way interested in making coffee for him...Grrr😡

Maan sips the Coffee...and all surprised with the different taste.

The coffee was at its best...well blended

Geet...Its the best ever coffee I have ever had...Thanks

Sir...really?

What do you think? I am joking here?😡

No No Sir... By the way thanks for your compliments and enjoy your coffee...and leaves from his cabin and goes back to her cabin

She realised something and hits her forehead with her right hand...Ayyo...Paythiyam Paythiyam...Avar thaan coffee rumba nalla irukunu sonna...neeyum EEEnu Pallu kaamichitu veliyila vandutai...ippo Mannippu eppadi ketkarathu?(Oh No...You mad girl...He had his coffee and praised you...and you smiled showing your teeth and leave from there conveniently. Now how will you tell SORRY?)

Sasha and Tasha walk into Geet's Cabin

Tasha...Pack all Geet's belongings into this carton. I am sure Boss would have fired her after having such a horrible coffee😈

Tasha just starts with her task...

TASHA...How dare you touch my belongings? Better know your limits. Your Boss doesnt have brain it doesnt mean that you stop using your brain as well?😡

GEETIKA...how dare you tell me that I am brainless😡

Because You are one Sasha Ma'm😆

And in your case your brain is in a worst condition as you believed that I will believe you if you tell me that boss likes to take coffee with 5 teaspoon full of sugar...and you thought I would believe it? You must be used to consuming such horrible coffee...not my boss.🤣

See how my Boss is enjoying every sip of his coffee...because I made it...not you 😉😛

Sasha sees thro the blinds that MK is enjoying his Coffee..How can that be?

She leaves from Geet's Cabin...

Ma'm...Ma'm...Tasha follows her.

Sasha doesn't know what to do...she thought of telling MK all rubbish about Geet...she is about to open the Maan's cabin Door and not aware of the fact that Maan is just standing next to the door...scanning some files kept in the cabin near the door and sipping coffee at the same time.

MK...She opened the door and accidently banged on Maan and during this process coffee spils on both their official dresses.

MK...I'm really Sorry😕

Maan all angry screams at Sasha...

Sasha...kya hain yeh? You didn't knock the door before walking and cant you see? Look what have you done? Dhyaan kahan rahtha hain aaj kal tumhara? We have such important meetings lined up for the day with Emerald & Co and Hegde & Sons...what shall we do now?

MK...I have a spare dress for myself I will change right away.😳

And what about me? Do you expect me to keep a spare dress for myself so that someone will spill coffee on me one fine day and I can change...😡

Yes...No...SORRY MK

Maan Screams for Aadi...AADI

Yes SS..S..SSIR

Come to my cabin

Ms. Sasha...you shall leave now and concentrate on your work and meetings lined up today...Sasha leaves from there fully embarrassed.

Aadi...I have an important client coming into office in next half an hour and I cannot attend the meeting with this soiled shirt. So, we need to exchange our shirts for some time.

Sssure SS...SS...Ssir. 😕

Sasha on her way to her cabin fuming with Anger...😡

Saashaaa...Mera matlab hain Ma'm...you never told me that you planned to spill coffee on yourself and MK?😕

SHUT UP!!!Sasha Screams loudly and Tasha gets scared😲

Geet has been a silent observer...she had a eventful sight thro the blinds...😆

Maan calls Geet to his Cabin...Geet on the way to Maan's cabin passes by Sasha-Tasha and makes a pityfull face in front of them.

Sasha Maam...you are an intelligent person right? Have to be as you are an Architect by profession and that's what you are supposed to do here. Then use your brain in right place and right situation instead of doing such childish acts. Firstly, you need to GROW UP. Henceforth stop interfaring unnessesarily in other's business...and leaves with a smile.😊

Listen You...Tasha stops her and controls her.

How dare she talks to me like this? GEETIKA...I will not give up till I pack you from here.😡

Precap: Geet's Second day @ office continues😉

PART 12 😊 PART 14

Edited by Vaidhumom - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update vaidhom ...👏👏

plzzz update soon ... 😃
Edited by khansangel - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it
smart geet and dumb tasha sasha😆
cont sooon

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