Maneet FF - GEETIKA (OLD THREAD 1 - 2011-12) IMP NOTE PG 136 - Page 20

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Posted: 14 years ago

That was nice part

Loved how Maan anwered that Sasha

She is such an ewww

Geet does so silly mistakes yaar

Becahri

Loved her take on project

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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful update
love it
pls cont soonnn
thanks pm
thank yu so muchhh
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part. loved it.
this maan na totally angry young maan.
kabhi ghurta hain geet ko toh kabhi danta hain.
loved maaneet scene and conversation.
loved the way geet gave ans to sasha.
loved conference room meeting and geet's point.
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome part

wah humari geet toh kafi intelligent hai...👏

plz do pm me😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome that was...really beautiful 👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hie Everyone...Before reading Part 12...few points to mention
Always remember...all self talks are posted in Italics
Added a photo in previous part (Part 11)...and have changed the photo in part 10
Going to post Part 12...Will check editing, spelling mistakes later...will add more photos later...hope you dont mind😕
Luv you all for all your support...🤗
Part 12:

Late in the afternoon, Geet calls her university and she was given an appointment for 7:00-8:00 PM to meet one of the faculties who will guide her throout the curriculum.

The office working hours are over and all staff are out of office by 6:00 PM. Pinky comes to Geet's Cabin munching Apple...

Arre Geet...tu chal nahin rahin hain?

Nahin Pinky...I have to be in University around 7:00 PM. Its better I finish this task today. I'll leave from office around 6:30 PM. I have checked with the security guy and there seems to be no problem

Challo then...you take care...See you at dinner.

Geet thinks...Its just 6:00 PM now...let me have a short nap will set an alaram in my mobile so that it rings at 6:25 PM....and gets into a deep sleep as it was her first day of work and too tired. The alaram rings at 6:25 PM but Geet presses "Red" button instead of "Snooze" by mistake.

Maan was away for a meeting and just back to office..Its around 6:40 PM and sees the light in the next cabin is still on...and shocked to See Geet who is seated on her chair and in deep sleep

Oops she was looking even more innocent and beautiful while asleep...He tried to push the hair falling on her forehead but held himself. He tries to wake her up by calling her and by patting on her shoulder lightly...she didn't wake up.

Finnaly, He had to call her name loudly and shakes her by holding his hand on her shoulder...GEEETIKA!!!

She doesnt know what happened...she jumps out of her seat and almost fell on Maan...Maan holds both her hands...her eyes still closed tightly which she slowly opens to look into Maan's eyes again...Her eyes just soo fresh as she just had a nap. She looks at his eyes with all confusions...they lost into each other's eyes...Soon realization stricks them and they drift apart.

Ayyo...naanum ivarum ippo officela thaniya irukome. Ippo naan enna seyya? (Oh no..we both are in office all alone. What shall I do now?)

What are you doing in Office at this point of time? Were'nt you suppose to leave at 6:00 PM.

Sir...I have to visit Delhi University where I have just started with my MBA program. my appointment fixed with my faculty today at 7:00 PM. So, I was planning to leave office at 6:30 PM.

Can you check the time now? Geet all shocked to see the time on her mobile...it was 6:45 PM already.😲

Oh no...I'm going to be late now...😕

Maan is confused...I am also going to leave now...should I drop her to the university? No No Maan Dont bother...she will manage thro Taxi...NO NO..

YES...you will be late...But I can manage to drop you on time

Geet was not prepared for this...😕

SIR...Its ok...I'll manage myself..and gets ready to leave.

I said you are already late and I will drop you

SIR I'm fine...I'll manage...I dont want to trouble you

Its ok Ms. Geetika...Anyways, the university comes on the way to my home.

She had no reason to argue now...and she simply agrees even though she was not comfortable.

They both take their respective seats on the backseats of the car. His office driver drives the car.

There is pin drop silence...

Not able to understand this Man...Angry at times...Helpful at times

I didn't want to drop her...but why did I decide otherwise and also forced her...Yeh mujhe kya ho raha hain?

Their silence breaks when there is a sudden break...Geet's face hits Maan's shoulders during this process...Her heart is beating faster and her breath is falling on Maan's shoulder.

Again there is a eyelock...which was disturbed by the driver and they are back to their respective positions.😳

Maaf kijiye Saab...Ek Gaadi achanak beech main aagayi.

Idhu innaiku Moonavadhu darava idichadhu...Bhagavaane...ivar ennapatthi edhuvum tappa ninaika koodadhu 😕(This is the third time I banged on him. Babaji..Hope he doesnt mistake me)

Finally she gets droped at the doorstep of her university entarance sharp at 7:00 PM. She gets down from the Car

Thank You Sir 😊

Maan is busy reading messages on his mobile and pretending he didn't listened to her. He listed but was not prepared to say "Welcome"...MSK Attitude 😆

Geet meets Mr. Sinha, faculty who will guide her thro out the curriculum. He was very understanding and told her to atleast allot one hour daily for her studies and make list of doubts that she has and they shall meet twice or thrice during weekdays or even weekends. He gave her the timetable for subjects which she needs to strictly follow. And then there will be many big and small project works which she will need to submit from time to time...for which Mr. Sinha assured to help her.

Geet reaches home around 8:15 PM. She is all happy that her day went so well at office and the University staff and Faculty are also helpful. She finds her life to move into a different dimention and she is happy for this.

Geet and Pinky @ dinner table..

She was lost in all thoughts...She had some fears about Maan but that seems to have vanished by now.

Oye Geet...Kin Khayalon mein khoyi huvi hain?

I was thinking about TODAY...it was a beginning of my new life and everything went smoothly.

Haan yaar...I could see that you were so busy on the first day itself...You didn't accompany me for a burger and coffee...and makes a baby face...😕 (😆)

Kya Karoon Pinky...Maan Sir had assigned me with lot of work...

Arreee haan...yeh tho batao...How did you find working with Maan Sir?😃

Oh yah...he is a DD... "DEER DEVIL" gave me lot of work to do and expected it to finish within 15 mins...and...and he scolded me for silly mistake. 😡

(Note from Authour: Here she uses Deer in a sence Animal...Remember in one of the previous parts...she assumes "MAAN" means "DEER" as in Tamil Language...So, I have reframed "Dusht Daanav" to "Deer Devil")

Arre yaar...All girls call him "Dhak Dhak" and you are calling him "Deer Devil". Bhagwan ne na tujhe badi fursat se banaya hain...🤣

Geet makes a cute Baby face 😳
Aur Haan...he also has a nice person hidden somewhere within him...he listened to my Point Of View for one of the projects which we discussed during the meeting and appreciated it...also, he told Sasha not to interfare...And...you know something...he dropped me till the university today.
KYA? Pinky all excited and finished one pack of chips at one go...Maan Sir offered to drop you till University? He never does this and has never helped anyone in such a manner...I am surprised 😲

Wohi tho 😊

Pinky...I have a burden in my heart eversince I slapped Maan Sir on that day. You know na..I came back to the same location so that I could apologise him. Now I found him...I want to tell him SORRY for that day's behaviour.

GEET...Tu pagal ho gayi hain kya? This incident happened 2 years back and it will look funny if you apologize now.

I understand Pinky...but what shall I do if I am getting this chance after 2 years😕

Tik hain..Lets work it out tomorrow...Tu kal Maan Sir Se SORRY bolegi...And this should happen TOMORROW...Is it done? 👍🏼

DONE👍🏼

Precap: Lets say...Geet's second day @ office 😳

SORRY...if any of you are finding me dragging the story line...its just that I want to take the story with a proper flow.😳
Please read...like...comment 😛😉
Edited by Vaidhumom - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow that was an awsome one yaar ...loved it !!!! me first to comment !!
Edited by mrk_1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow maan thu tho gaya kaam se.
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
deer devil acha naam hain...something diff...
will she say sorry to him or not...eagerly waiting for next update
Edited by preethia - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow maan singh you are gone now..devil geet aagaye ..hahaha thanks a lot for pm dear awesome part

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