Maneet FF - GEETIKA (OLD THREAD 1 - 2011-12) IMP NOTE PG 136 - Page 31

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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
geet-dadi convo was nice and when she realizes that geet was talking abt maan bechari dadi ko jhatka laga...
loved the convo bw maaneet too...
finally maan battling within himself now...
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Posted: 14 years ago
supreb update.
love dadi- geet convo.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome...
daadi met geet...lovely...
ab maza aayega...😉
continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow superb
how well you twisted those serial things
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lakshmi.. I kept smiling reading dis update. Right from d beginning to d end.
Loved d convo btwn geet n dadi. She is much elder n experienced den Geet.
She knoes d best. N at last she realize geet was talking bout her grandson n also geet's secret nickname for maan.
wondering on geet expression when she knoe who is dadi actually. Tat is must to b seen.
Maan said SORRY & WELCOME in d way. N also for d first time!!!
I tot geet might force maan for dinner as well!!!
its okie better luck next time maan. He could not taste her coffe..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ajenn

Lakshmi.. I kept smiling reading dis update. Right from d beginning to d end.
Loved d convo btwn geet n dadi. She is much elder n experienced den Geet.
She knoes d best. N at last she realize geet was talking bout her grandson n also geet's secret nickname for maan.
wondering on geet expression when she knoe who is dadi actually. Tat is must to b seen.
Maan said SORRY & WELCOME in d way. N also for d first time!!!
I tot geet might force maan for dinner as well!!!
its okie better luck next time maan. He could not taste her coffe..

Thanks dear...
Well, I had answered one of the reader's post even she was expecting Maan to have dinner...
I answered her saying that Lets beggin with Coffee...dinner is a far imagination as of now 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hello Everyone...Thanks a million for your encouraging words...I started this FF with a short story in mind and now, I have whole lots to add...all credit goes to your comments 🤗
Here goes Part 17...will check editing/spelling mistakes and missing elements one by one later
PART 17:

BYE...Maan leaves from there fighting with his mind with so many unanswered questions.

Sir...Bye...Good Night

She comes back to the hall. Finds Maan's hanky fallen down on the floor. Even his Hanky shows the sign of his richness. It was sooo soo special. It was of a sober brown color excellent material...folded neatly with "MSK" embroidered in it. She treats the hanky with all special care and keeps it in a safe place.

Pinky comes in around 8:30 PM. She was just hungry like a wolf. Geet...Mujhe abhi dinner karni hain...nahin tho main tumhen khajaoongi.

Arre Pinky...jaldi se jaao aur change karlo...Dinner is ready. Pinky gets ready and they both have dinner with usual gossips.

Arre wah Geet...The idlis are so tasty. The sambar and chutneys (Side dishes) are simply superb. Must say that you are as good cook as your mother.

Geet pats her own shoulder proudly...Thank you. The first credit goes to my Paati (Grandmother) as she is an expert and have learnt a lot from her from the younger days. Ofcourse the second credit goes to my dear Amma 😊

Pinky is swalowing pieces of idlies and talking at the same time Oye Geet what happened at office? Why did you leave early? Could make out that you were very upset.

Geet narrated the entire incident that happened in the meeting room and then what continued.

Pinky...I was really upset...I dint know what happened to me that the next moment I found myself at the Ganesh Temple. Geet tells her about finding a new friend in the form of old lady.

You know Pinky...a miracle happened today. This old lady told me that my boss...That Deer Devil will apologize to me. I didn't believe what she was saying and can you believe what happend? Deer Devil came all the way here...she continued the further bit...I first told him sorry for what ever happened 2 years back...and then...Pinky the Miracle did happen...DD told me SORRY...Can you believe Pinky? Deer Devil told me SORRY!😉

Geet...are you day dreaming or what? Have you really lost it? DD aur yahan? Acha imagination hain yaar! I guess you are reading lot of fairy tale storys now a days...you meeting an old lady and she tells something miraculous going to happen and that happens...kya yaar? Geet Darling you have grown out of that age dear 🤣

PINKY...😡...you were late and you missed to see him.😕 I knew you will not believe me...here goes the proof. Showing Maan's Hanky.

Pinky all shocked with what she just listened...she imediately opens a fresh packet of potato chips and starts munching...
Oye Geet...kya sach much DD yahan aaye the?

Haan yaar...You trust me right that I never lie to you?😳

That's true...you never lie to me. But how come? I must say that the old lady is a super woman. In se tho milna hi padega.

Haan Pinky...I must visit Ganesh Mandir tomorrow...Main ne Ganesh ji ko aaj bohuth sunadiya...Must say Sorry and thanks to Him and I must meet this old lady...I mean Daadi...she is a very special person...😊

At KM:

Daadi is restless waiting for her grandson...

Patha nahin Maan ne kya socha hoga...I really wish that Geet's job is secured.😕

Maam just parks his car. He has been lost in the thoughts of Geet. Unable to understand what's going on in his life...All reputation he has built around people surrounding him have changed in a fraction of seconds...Maan Singh Khurana...saying SORRY and WELCOME...Yeh kya ho raha hain...Why am I not able to hold on to my life any more?

Maan bete

Ji Daadima

What happened dear? You seem to be exhausted

Oh God...please give me a clue about what he has decided.

Haan Daadima...a very tough day today...lot of meetings and lot of unexpected things happened around and things didn't go as per my expectations...😕

yah...me saying SORRY and WELCOME was not expected out of me...Huh.

He leaves from there with a confused note. 😲

Dadima is all tensed and marching left right left from one end of the hall to another...Oh no...It means that Maan is really upset... What shall I do? Badi challi thi na Geet ko advise dene aur...kya kaha tha us ko? us ka boss usse SORRY Bolega... Geet ki naukri pakki gayi samjo. Poor Girl...How will I ever face her again?

Oh god please load some sence into my Grandson...when will he stop behaving like this...Now that I agree with Geet...My Grandson is Ravan and the only difference is that 9 extra heads are missing 😡

Maan gets into his ti-chi room...with flashes of events happened today...

Eventhough he is not having a proper mindset...still determined to go ahead with the excercises...

On one hand...he is fighting with his mind demanding answers...On the other hand, he is just thinking about her and only her...nothing else is coming into his mind...

He is missing his steps on the Huh-Hah...

Her eyes...Her lips...Her curves...Her long hair...Her touch...Oops...Her touch was so magical...Her talks are strange mix of maturity and innocence. He recalls her face which was dipped with embarresment while saying SORRY...Which forced him to say SORRY in return...Yeh kya ho raha hain? Yeh ladki mujhe itna pareshan kyon kar rahin hain?😕

Missed more steps...he gave up...Enough of Tai-Chi session today. 🤢 (Enough? He had just started 😆)

Next day at KC...

Geet begins her day with her usual prayer to Ganesh ji.

Its 8:55 PM...and Boss will be here any time. She prepares 2 coffee mugs...one for the boss and one for herself. She was sure that her boss will not schold her this time for preparing coffee for him.

Sir Good Morning...here is your coffee.😊

Hmm

She left from there before her boss change his mind and starts scholding..

Maan is enjoying every sip of it...and then realised...Oh no...I had told her not to make coffee for me and she still made it...look at me...I am not angry at her for this.

Anyways...nice coffee...let me enjoy it for today...will schold her if she repeats it tomorrow...😡and he looks thro the blinds to see Geet is enjoying her coffee and as usual doing multi-tasks. He can just keep watching her for the whole day.

He snaps out of his thoughts when Mr. Ravi calls on his mobile...

Mr. Khurana...Good Morning! I am Mr. Ravi, from Hegde & Sons.
Good Morning...How are you? I heard that you have hurt your feet.
I'm still not ok with my feet. Will take few more days to recover completely. But sir...Thanks a lot for meeting Mr. Hegde. He is all happy after meeting your team...The only name he was repeatedly mentioning was that of GEETIKA. Myself and Mr. Hegde were worried what will happen but Ms. Geetika made him feel at ease and did full justice to the meeting and that too during your abcense.👍🏼

Thank you sir...its my pleasure.

Comming to the project, I request you to provide us with your first hand information in a form of report about what all was discussed during yesterday's meeting.

Sure...will do the needful

Will meet you soon Mr. Khurana.

Sure...you take care and get well soon...and finishes with the call.

Geet's intercom rings

Yes Sir

Need to discuss few things come to my cabin...Also call Sasha and inform her.

Yes Sir

She calls Sasha and leaves...remembers to take her note pad and pen

Geet and Sasha happen to knock his door at the same time

Come in

Seeing Sasha...Maan tries to keep his coffee in a safer place.😆

Sit down both of you.

Sasha looks at Geet and is all surprised...MK ne abhi tak isse job se nahin nikala?

Geet..I need the following to be done

Another Shock for Sasha...GEET? Till yesterday, MK was calling her GEETIKA...and now GEET...Something has surely happened between yesterday evening and this morning.🤢

Mr. Hegde & Son's yesterday's meeting notes, More highlights about their company, projects...anything and every thing. Prepare a nice report. Will have a meeting in next half an hour.

Sure sirand leaves from there.

MK...this girl did such a blunder yesterday and...😡

Sasha...I have called you for some important points to discuss...lets not waste time in discussing what happened and useless things

But MK...she interfared in my work...Why was Mr. Hegde quite till the time I was there and later started talking when I went out?😡

Because Mr. Hegde doesnt understand any other language apart from Kannada...and Geet was the only one there who could speak with him in Kannada.

Sasha is speechless...How can that be possible?

Does this answer your question?

Yes MK...will prepare for the meeting and leaves from there.

Even though MK has a valid point...but still, why is he supporting Geetika to this level?

She goes to Geet's cabin..rests her right hand on table and left had folded on her waist.

So, Ms. Geetika...Na Na Ms. GEET...so, boss is addressing you with this name...interesting.😈

Mam...You can also call me GEET henceforth...she answered patiently

Sasha expected Geet to get embarrassed...inturn Sasha is getting embarrassed now...She doesnt give up...Then Geet...Your self respect is appreciable...you are still continuing to work here inspite of what ever happened yesterday. How can you work here after being insulted so much.

Sasha Mam...All what happened yesterday is for good...so many unanswered questions were answered...and I was not insulted...I was mistaken...and there is ocean of difference between being insulted and being mistaken...Boss was not wrong at his point of view neither was I...and all our misunderstandings got cleared yesterday. I guess I have cleared your doubt.

May I request you to leave me alone for sometime? I need to prepare report for the meeting.

Sasha leaves from there with jealous filled face. Wondering how come MK and Geet are supporting each other.

At the meeting room...Maan, Geet, Aadi, Sasha and Tasha are present

Sir...We had a very brief discussion about each other's company and the Mysore project plan...May I give a presentation with the help of the white board and marker.

Sure.

Geet is busy giving the presentation.

Ofcourse maan is lost in Geet..her every moment...her action while she is explaining each and every point...He is least focused on the presentation.😍

Sir...is it OK?

Maan was quite. What shall I say, I didn't even listen to her...I was lost in some other world.

Aadi...your comments

Sir, If you are taking my opinion, its 100% perfect.

And Sasha...your comments

MK...if you are convinced, I am convinced too. Waiting to meet Mr. Ravi.😳

Fine...and Geet...good work done...keep it up!😊

Thank you sir 😊

Aadi, Sasha and Tasha are surprised...Boss is praising someone's work...😲

Aadi is happy for Geet...but more fuel is added to the fire of Sasha-Tasha's jealousyness. 😆

Precap: Geet Meeting Daadi again.😉

PART 16 😊 PART 18

Edited by Vaidhumom - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome yaar...i was waiting for ur update till
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
sasha ki muh kaali huyi...
now she will b after geet every sec...
she cant tolerate maan and geet supporting each other...
i just hope their relation is stronger to withstand this sasha's cheap tricks
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowww loved it maan lost in other world with geet n the way geet answered sasha was awesome n precap is awesome

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