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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing updateee!
cannot WAIT for the next part!!
continue sooon xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
loved it
yay they are engaged
sorry 4 late comment
have exams innit u know Foz
cant wait till geet see's the phone
wonder hw she will react
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
Muahhh
Xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey,,,,usually u gv an update every two days,,,,,,,,,,,,,,then y soo late update this tym.update sooon dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
Updates will be later than usual because of exams coming up & other busy stuff going on, so do bear with me guys! 😊

*** - IMPORTANT, READ THIS! - Ok, so I have over 100 of you on my PM list for this FF, but I've been noticing that a lot of the people I PM don't even bother to like the update, let alone comment. It doesn't even take two seconds to hit the like button guys, so from now on you'll only get PMed if you press the like button - that way, I know who's genuinely interested in my FF & it saves me from sending PMs to people who don't even bother to read it. So if you want to remain on the PM list, hit the like button for this update & future updates!

By the way, thanks to the guys who always like/comment, I wish I could list you all! Much love to all of you!



Chapter 11:

Maan went back downstairs to see the party still as lively as he had left it. His eyes wandered to Geet, who was with her parents, talking to some local people from the village.

Dev & Pari were together talking to other guests - it seemed like Dev was introducing Pari to them as she was shaking hands with one of the women.

Savitri Devi was engrossed in laughter with her acquaintances from Delhi.

Maan was eager to see Geet's reaction to the phone, but he didn't know when she would end up going upstairs. Despite her views against marraige, she seemed to be enjoying herself.

After much contemplation, he wandered over to where she was with her parents.

"Ahem," he cleared his throat awkwardly as he stood beside her.

"Mrs Shinda, this is my fiance, Maan Singh Khurana."

Maan smiled to himself - he liked it when Geet introduced him as her fiance.

"My, what a handsome man," Mrs Shinda complimented. Maan just smiled politely in response, glancing at Geet.

"Our Geet is very lucky - and so is Pari, of course," gushed Rano.

"Geet, can I talk to you in private?" Maan asked.

Geet looked confused but nodded, and Maan led her through the crowd of people and up the stairs.

"Why are we going upstairs?" she asked. She glanced back to see if anybody had noticed, but it didn't look like they had.

Maan didn't reply and instead opened the door for her to her bedroom.

"Maan, what are you doing?"
she asked, then she noticed the phone on her bed with a note. Curious, she walked over to it, and picked up the phone. It was sleek, shiny, business-like. She smiled at it, then picked up the note, which had 'Geet' written on the front. She opened it up, it read:

Geet, I bought this for you as your engagement gift. Please don't reject it - it will come handy in the future.

Maan.


Geet turned around to face her new fiance, who was leaning against the doorway.

"Is this for business purposes?"
she asked, her face lighting up.

Maan's face fell a little. He had intended for the phone to be a means of communication between him & Geet before their wedding.

"Oh, well, actually-"

"I bet it has all the latest business applications on it, right?"

"Geet, I bought it so that-"

"I know that there's a lot I need to learn about managing a business - not even that, an empire like yours. I was reading an article in the business newspaper the other day, and it was about women and their role in business, and how it's becoming more common for women to go into business. I'm glad about that - I'm a little feminist, so I believe that women have more of a role than cooking in a kitchen all day. Your Dadima is the perfect example - she founded KC, didn't she?"


Maan just nodded, surprised at how passionate about business she was. He knew she had an interest in it - he hadn't realised, until now, that she actually eat, breathed & lived for business.

"Thank you so much for the gift, I truly love it!"
she gushed, placing it carefully in the top drawer. "I'll take good care of it, I promise. It will help me in the future."

She gave him one of her dazzling smiles then left the room, elated.

"I really have my work cut out with her," Maan muttered to himself, sighing.



Apologies for the short update, but it's almost 1am and I've had a long tiring day at college 🥱 I might update sooner this week because of the 4 day weekend But I make no promises, so don't hold me to it!

Chapter 12

Precap: None! I don't even know what I'm writing next, but I'm hoping inspiration will hit me soon.

Edited by WalkIntoMyLife1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome update sis
loved it loadz
gosh geet and business
maan needs to try hard to impress her
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
Muahhh
Xxx
Edited by kashndsel4eva - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
poor maan i hope he
work hard so geet can
realize its not only business
but he truly care for her
love each part
even though it was short one
but enjoy reading it
brilliant update
pls cont soonnn
thanks pm
thnak yu so muchhh
muah for making us happy
with ur update i real appriciate
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Posted: 14 years ago
Just like I expected, Geet fell in love with the Blackberry and the apps...I wish she cuts Maan some slack 😆...Bechara should get some positive response from Geet..
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Posted: 14 years ago
poor maan has lot of work at hand...leaving business aside he need to impress and seduce his wife first...and its definitely not going to be easy task...😭😭😭😭

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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update foz
awww poor maan
its gonna be quite a challenge for maan to make
geet fall for him
wow i never knew geet was this into business
cant wait for whats in store
cont soon please
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome Part dude!!!

Geet is really ignorant right? Wow wonder how Maan'll crack her shell!!

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