-Ehtesaab- SS maaneet THREAD 1 - Page 53

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Posted: 14 years ago
i hate dev...😡😡😡
bt d update was awesome...
bit of understanding,bit of misunderstanding,bit of betrayal,bit of frndship n a lot of confidance of maan on love...tat really overwhelmed me...😊
thnx muskan 4 this one...😊
Edited by nisha_bh - 14 years ago
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me still here typing😳😳😳
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me waiting pateintly ...take ur time hun! 🤗
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😳Status updating woweww:-)
am waiting...countdown begins 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
-Ehtesaab-
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She sat their silently wondering and thinking if all this pain and frustration is worth it, and began questioning self every minute of the day, if this relationship is really worth the suffering despair of hurt feelings and harsh words.

Adhi called his office & asked for leave.
Maan - yaar aaj xyz client ke saat meeting hain
adhi - I shall make it for the meeting
Maan - thats cool then
adhi - thanxs
Maan - dabyat teek nahi hain kya?
Adhi - nahi something personal
Maan - take care
adhi - umm

adhi reluctantly knocked the door of geets room.
She wiped her tears & tried to smile.
Water
she nodded
he got her some water.
She cried again & buried her face in the pillow.
He softly patted her back sab teehk ho jayega
she couldn't stop herself, but still tried not too break down in front of him.
Next day geets papaji & mamaji came to adhi's house to speak to her. They tried to explain to her it was not right to stay away from her house. She belonged in dev's place once she is married, this is totally not acceptable. They tried a lot to convince her but she got more frustrated at their attitude. They all seemed more concern about the society, dev being alone at home, his parents. No one..just no one was bothered wat pain she had in her heart. her loneliness
She cried papaji..woh aisen kaisen karsakten hain
u only chose him
they snapped back at her.
Had it been an arranged marriage the whole community would have supported u.
jo bhi hain u should sort it out within the 4 walls not like this shouted Rano
4 walls .. yah!!! rightly said.. that was now just 4 walls..nothing more.. she stepped away from them, turning her face now to look outside the window.
U r not a small kid now.. u r married behave responsible.
Beta dono ghar ke izaad ka sawal hain Geet!!
she kept quiet.. wondering wat she has done that they all are making so much of a fuse. She just told dev to sort his things out with that girl & then talk to her. Where were they when she cried to then about wat he was doing!!! they never questioned him.. actually no one questioning him.. why is she accountable always!! how is accountable for her lose!!! her heart..that is in pain.. her feel of failure..her feel of being deceived. Yes dev was her choice.. she never regretted it. Even now she is only wanting him to sort out every thing. But wat is all this..
papaji -first u left ur studies & career for him & now u r leaving him. Grow up Geet!!! learn value wat u have in life!!
Rano - darji kitne naraz huwen the jab tumne aage ki patahi ki baat ki thi.. we both stood by u, but u did, u simply left it for him. This is wat happens when u hurt ur loved ones.
Papaji - come we will drop u home
she kept quiet. Her silence was her refusal they knew it.
They tried a lot to explain her but she didn't say a word. They gave up finally & broke their relationship with her & walked away.

She took her bag & decided to leave adhi's place. He blocked his way.
Jab tum yanha aayen main ne tumse kuch nahi pucha, I knew if it was something I need to know u will tell me. But since ur leaving..I know u r leaving because of .. he didn't want to mention it.
She too looked away
kher !! ek friend hone ke nathen mujhe itna tho haak banta hain ki I should know u r safe.
Can I borrow some money
he looked at her, knowing her exact situation now, she had no place to go, no money on her.
He took her & her luggage, went to his colleague sasha's place.
Sasha was young smart project manager in KT.
Adhi - she is Geet my friend just come from HP small town in Pumjab, she needs a place to stay
sasha scanned her top to bottom, she no way looked like a village girl. But why did she come to delhi
he cleared his throat - she needs a job
sasha - humare office main vacancy hain na
adhi - that is for mk's assistant, no no ...it won't be for her.
He couldn't imagine an IT engineer doing a assistant's job, that would be demeaning her.
Geet - I don't mind
adhi pulled Geet aside - Mk himself won't like that
Geet - why?
Adhi - he doesn't like talents being wasted..& u r over qualified for the job
Geet - but I need a job
adhi - Maan will not agree he is very particular about his staff members.
She pleaded I need a job.. waisen bhi I don't have any experience
sasha just interrupted them - its not necessary, she gets the job

Maan was already having a horrible week since he has not seen her for last 3days now. He had waited pointlessly at the bench. It was getting on to his nerves now. It was the third time she has done this to him & now he was getting angry at self to let her effect him to such an extent a complete stranger.

She dressed up in a simple suit. She was nervous, perspiring.
Adhi - Geet relax yaar.. it is just a assistants job

Maan walked in a foul mode. He has been like that since last few days.
Sasha - aaj bhi mode kharab hain
Pinky - its been like this the whole week.
Adhi knocked the door
Maan - umm
adhi - placed geets file in front of Maan
Maan - wat is this
adhi - candidate for the assistant's job
Maan doesn't see much just glances through the experience bit & ditches the file - she doesn't have any experience
adhi couldn't have argued not when he was in such a bad mode.
adhi comes out feeling disappointed. geet gave a weak smile..
Sasha - shall I try
adhi - please that will life saver.
Sasha tries to speak to Maan. - mk she really needs that job.
He was shut to any thing, any suggestions. He just continued to distract himself from her thoughts. Her painful eyes. He knew she was definitely worried but wat pissed him the most why was he so stressed. Dam!! he doesn't even know her name. He walked out to the reception to collect some files from Pinky. He stood shocked to see her. She blankly stared at him.
Wat are u doing here?
Before she could reply sasha tried to answer she is here for that job
both sasha & adhi were scared with Maans reaction.
He wondered why she needed to get a job... she looked worst than he had ever seen her before.
Sasha - this is Geet she has just come from HP.
Geet closes her eyes. Her only hope was shattered now.. off course he knows that better...
He took the file & now read the file in detail, looked at her one last time & walked to his cabin.
Sasha & adhi told geet to follow him getting excited.

He walked in & held the door. As she walked in he shut the door & bolted it. She dipped her head & stood quietly. She tried to look every where but at him. His eyes where like piercing right through her, like they could read her pain, like he could feel her pain. Feel her pain, may be because he felt the pain when ever he saw her in pain, the hurt she had, he held himself guilty like he broke that heart, the heart don't know why he cared so much for. The pain she try to hide from the world around her, still he could feel it not being around her. The care & compassion she saw in his eyes. Within second she broke down in tears & hugged him crying ..crying like a baby. He cocooned her. She held him tight as she cried shaking & screaming.


Precap
coping with life!!

-PREV PART 5 NEXT PART 7-
Thanxs for all the beautiful comments
it really motivates me & helps me to write more
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
yippiee...me 1st me 1st...


u made me cry yaar...
😭😭😭
poor geet...
but i m happy for her now...
she is in safe hands now...with maan...😊👏
😭😭😭



Edited by teju2292 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Luved the update...parents were correct in one way but wrong in other way...they culd have cared for their child in a situation lyk this instead of their dignity in the society...asking her the reason for her coming off from dev...dev is really a brat...a real male chavanistic...😡😡...it always happens this way...noone questions a man for his wrong doings...but wen it comes to a gal...they wuld be the first person...😡😡..!!really luv maan ...still he is not revealed in fully...jus a part of his character is revealed...waiting eagerly for the next part...luved the last hug...poor geet....!!

Rohini

Edited by Rohini20 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome and geet going thro' so much pain is very well written. thats what happens most of the time, people try to push the girl to edge and make her surrender to the so called society rules just to make their own identity clear. god knows when this will change.Maan's understanding towards geet is very well put in words. we can see there is more sort of emotional bonding developing b/n them unlike a typical physical attraction from the start.
Edited by scorpiodreams - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! nice update dear...
OMg geet hugged maan n started cring😛...unexpected...loved it...
maaneet in same office😳...interesting...looking fwd...

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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update..
Very emotional...😭😭

I don't like Geet's parents scolding her for Dev's Fault... 😡😡

Maan is restless for her pain... and
Just by seeing care in Maan's eyes she broke down... 😭
Very heart touching...



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