-Ehtesaab- SS maaneet THREAD 1 - Page 66

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Posted: 14 years ago
finally after 3 long days muski...hope things r fine @ ur end...normally u dont take such breaks in update...take care
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muski updating laga dala...😉 toh life jinga lala...😆
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muski updating laga dala...😉 toh waiting jinga lala...😆
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me waiting...

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waiting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😍
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-Ehtesaab-
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the care & compassion she saw in his eyes. Within second she broke down in tears & hugged him crying ..crying like a baby. He cocooned her. She held him tight as she cried shaking & screaming.
They stood their hugging each other. His soul was at rest having her close to him, still the ache of seeing her in pain something he couldn't reason it, but the instinct was he wanted to be there for her, as if it was more for him than for her. She didn't know wat is it about him that she could just easily pour her heart out to him.

He tried wiping her tears, she still hugged him back & buried her face in his chest. After long time, he made her sit in the couch & made her drink some water. She was still not able to breath normally, as she was shaking & trembling with occasional hiccups. Her hiccups were taking his breath away. He walked around restlessly pushing his hair behind, not able to bear her like this. Just stop it..!!! he checked her file..geet!!! oh !! plz for heaven's sake stop it!!!. she looked at him in shock. Still in tears..no one has spoken to her in such high tone since she has been married. He closed his eyes sat on his knees.. Geet plz don't cry ..plz. He took her hand in his, buried his face helplessly ..plz..I can't see u like this. Plz..

she reluctantly pulled her hand away & took her file. As she walked towards the door
u don't have experience as assistant he tried reasoning
she didn't turn to face him I will do my best ..

wat is ur typing speed
30-35words
thats bad
I will pick up
would u know short hand?
She though for a while..I shall record & work on it
I can't pay u much
umm..I understand
I want u to start now.. no looking back..
he looked at her intently.. she had to face him now.. she turned to meet his gaze..umm.. he nodded.. she accepted with a weak smile.

She learned her work & managed to join the college back to peruse her Mtech. She did her work exceptionally well, though her typing speed was not upto mark, but she was definitely improving as a month had passed. Maan was really a tough boss to work with. Highly professional & his temper was totally something different from wat she was used to. He was fine & quiet at ease now, since he knew where to find her, he had her number, her address above all he saw her every day in the office. The whole day actually. He was still not aware why he gets restless when he doesn't see her.

It had been couple of months now. Geet couldn't believe she actually staying without dev. It was getting painful for her as the days passed. She missed him more & more. Dev did come to adhi house looking for her, only to find she had shifted to an apartment. He stocked her. He wanted to beg her to come back home, but his ego stopped him. His restlessness increased & finally decided to play his final card to break her, as he knows she can't stay without him niether could he.

After a long tiring day in office & college, Geet finally came home at around 8pm, just to see an brown envelope lying near her door mat. She opened it & fell on her mattress ..cum devan in her only room. She lived in a studio flat. She was shocked..she couldn't breath. It was a divorce paper with acquisition. Dev wanted a divorce. There was pain in her heart as she was seeing her soul split apart. Things will never be the same again.. the thought was giving her tearing pain..betrayal !!! there are tears in her eyes. She asked herself why? why does it have to be this way? why did it turn out like this? she didn't want it to end oh no not today..not ever!! how could dev let betrayal ruin their love. All see could feel was knives stuck in her back in return of years of love & togetherness. she cried herself yet again, there was pain in her body that she called hers...but she always thought was his!!!


pain that she can't get out she would yell across the sea, across the ocean
but instead she kept it bottled up..inside the pain it hurts, through and through, they were family.. meant to stick together not be torn apart, now I might never see the joy and the laughter she thought. She couldn't not take it.. she ran in her night salwar to her house.. she thought it was still hers.. she barged into him, just see him smirk at her.. I knew it will bring u back. She stood at the door shocked!!! he was playing games.. games with her feelings!!! with their love.. with their marriage!! with their everything.. who was accountable !!!!

The pain and anguish it created, rippled her. Being played on.. being taken for granted.. being not loved.. even after seeing her after 60days, all he could do was have a victouries smile instead of taking her in his arms & showering her with kisses. She signed the papers & threw at him & walked away. He stood their dumb stuck with her action. A minute ago he had seen her eyes filled with love & passion to see him as he opened the door & now... it was filled anguish.. questions..asking ehtsaab!!!


Precap
realization!!

-PREV PART 6 NEXT PART 8-
Thanxs for all the beautiful comments
it really motivates me & helps me to write more
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
res
ufff superb muskan di!
loved the way maan is taking care of her... finally geet realized now its left for maan to realize his feelings... waiting for the next one!!! 😍
Edited by Maaneet_09 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
great...finally she threw dev out of her life... nice update muskaan 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it... loved it... loved. it..
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Posted: 14 years ago
it was heartbreakin!!! but am happy finally dev is out of her life!!

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