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saira

@hibbaamir

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Posted: 14 years ago

BEAUTIFUL ADORE..

HI!guys...DIS is my first ff...nd going to rite from where de most romantic scene of prem heer was broken up by VEERA...nd veera says tat NIHAAL has killed her child...

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ALL de characters ill remain same...nd if any entery required ill tell u...

HOP u all like it...nd do comment nd if no time so jus click de small button NAMED as LIKE...

if u like de starting let me know...den only ill start writing...plzzz😊😊😊😊😉😉

CHAPTER1...pg 3

CHAPTER2...pg 4

CHAPTER3...pg 5

CHAPTER4...pg 7

CHAPTER5...pg 7

CHAPTER6...pg8

CHAPTER7...pg10

CHAPTER8...pg11

CHAPTER9...Pg12

CHAPTER10...pg14

CHAPTER11..pg16

CHAPTER12...pg21

CHAPTER13...pg23

CHAPTER14...pg25

CHAPTER15...pg32

CHAPTER16...pg33

ENJOY READING

hi guys ...read dis ff too...

LIFE TAKE MANY TURNS...😊😉

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kis-desh-mein-hai-meraa-dil/1739862/lif3-take-many-turns-ch5-pg7

Edited by hibbaamir - 14 years ago

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swati

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Posted: 14 years ago

pleaseee start will be waitinggg

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Mrs. Gossip Monger

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Posted: 14 years ago

wow...plzzz start updating soon...love the beginning...!!

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S.B.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Would love to read... continue soon and add me to ur pm list...😊

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Abigail (Abby)

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Posted: 14 years ago

Please do continue soon!

will be waiting for the first update! 😃

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saira

@hibbaamir

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Posted: 14 years ago

thnxxx alot for ur valueable comments...guys ill update soon...tomorrow or after tomorrow...thnxx alot for encouraging me...

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saira

@hibbaamir

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Posted: 14 years ago

HEER nd meher cums holding FIRST aid box

GAY3"humein koi zaroort nhi hai tumhari marham mati ki... heer"maa ...wat r u saying? maa"i know wat im saying... prEm"u cant talk like dis to my heer... MAA"yeh hi to wajah hai keh teri behein ko bey izaat ker ker wapis is ghar mein bhej dia...tujhe ab bhi apney pyaar ki padi hai... PREm"maa aisa nhi hai...mein janta hoon NIHAAl aisa nhi ker sakta... VEERA"wah bhai wah...to aaj aap ney mujh ko jhoota bola...maa mein ney to aap ko pehley hi kaha tha...soteyla bhai sotela hi hota hai...huh...(gives a wicked smile to heer nd meher) LALIT"VEERA moon sambhal ker baat ker... VEERA"kyun babuji...aap ko itna dukh kyun...cuz yeh dono maharaniyan aap key dost ki betiyaan hain...is liye...

jus den only sum one enters...every one sees...nd r in shock...saying LOUDly VEERA...

den only NIHAAL cums in nd gives dem a leteer nd calls de doctor...

DOCTOR reaches wid in no time...nd tells lie tat nihaal has killed de child not veera...

AND letter contains sumthing very very important...nd lalit reads nd fells down...

iknow its small bt ill update long one next time...cuz i m hving no time today...

HOP u all like it😊😊

Edited by hibbaamir - 14 years ago