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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Khushboo_AN

Arrey!!! Toh wapis laao na Tiu ko! I miss her too...I've never itched to pinch a baby's cheeks as I have to pinch Tia's! 😳 Tumhe toh pata hai, generally I avoid kids with all I have lekin that lil cutie is sooooooooooooooooooooo irresistable!!! 😳 😳 😳
COL continue karo! I'm not complaining 😉 😃 😃 😃
Ya phir apne naye FF mein AN ki shaadi karwa do aur Tia ko laao! 😉 Then we can have her holding Abhi around the neck and going, "Daddy, Daddy, kiss Mummy...I want a brotherrrrr" 😆

I am not too fond of kids but i too fell in love with Tia while writing about her!!
Continue COL 😆...ab kya hoga wqahan....saab toh kar diya.....mabbe a one shot scene with Nikki, Tia n Abhi!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: hapinezz13

I am not too fond of kids but i too fell in love with Tia while writing about her!!

Continue COL 😆...ab kya hoga wqahan....saab toh kar diya.....mabbe a one shot scene with Nikki, Tia n Abhi!!

Haan yaar kids just wail too much 😕 LOL 😆
Yeah well anyway...sureeeee go ahead, write that epilogue! Make everyone happy...give us a super hot AN scene and then a scene with AN and Tia...😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

*Why….why …why me….don't I deserve love?* she screams her anguish looking up for answers.

Strong arms grip her slim body and she stops crying abruptly. She turns in shock to see herself encircled in her husband's arms. His mouth comes down on hers hard and possessive. Nikki melts in his arms never wanting this kiss to end. Her last kiss with a man who ruled her heart…..was her heart.

"You were leaving?" he asks gruffly and she stares at him nonplussed.

*She should have left….why was he here?.....she could not face him…..her heart was breaking* "Yes" she says softly. he shakes her and she blinks

"How dare you?" he growls bringing her closer to himself.

"I….have to go" she tries to get out of his embrace but he holds her chin and makes her look up. What she sees in his eyes makes her jaw drop.

Immense love and need filled the dark eyes which looked at her unblinking. He bends his face and kisses her again. Pours his love in his kiss and Nikki's hand moves to his neck, standing on a tiptoe she kisses him back hungrily.

You crazy girl…..I love you so much and you were ready to leave me?" he growls threading his fingers in her wet hair and making her look at him.

"L…Love?" she asks him unable to believe that the words her heart was yearning for were coming out of her love's mouth.

"You make me crazy Nikki…..I can't live without you…..my heart skipped a beat when I saw your things packed….why were you running?" but before she can answer he clamps his lips on hers kissing her like a starved man.

"I ….you….told your lawyer you didn't need me" she tells him.

"Not need you….. are you mad?....How am I supposed to live without you?......I don't know how anymore" he tells her caressing her face, his eyes drinking her beautiful face hungrily.

"Then you told him that I…I would sign the papers willingly" she ask playing with his shirt buttons.

"Are you trying to kill me Nikki" he hisses and she looks up innocently. "Stop touching me like this or" he threatens.

"Or?" she asks maintaining an innocent expression on her face.

"Or this" He kisses her again moving down to her neck and she tries to push him away and he looks at her amused.

"Scared?" he teases.

"You wish….what were the papers Abhi?" she asks secure in his love.

"Those were Tia's custody papers Nikki…..you have to sign as her mother" he tells her and joy floods her eyes.

"I love you Abhi" she hugs him and his heart explodes with joy at hearing the words which sealed her with him.

"Really…..I thought you only loved Tia…..and that's why you want to stay with me" he teases and she hits him on his chest.

"You got that right" she looks at him smug "but I love you somewhat too" she concedes.

"How much?" he asks her bringing her closer and she kisses him pulling his head towards herself.

"Tia" she suddenly gasps.

"She is watching cartoons with her granddad" he smiles wickedly "We have all the time for this" he bends forward again but she makes a face and holds him at length.

"He….he was" she asks him confused.

"Well I asked him to babysit her……told him I had a wife to take care….who runs away at the first sign of trouble" he can't stop himself.

"I do not" she tells him hotly.

"Yes you do….I stopped you "he fights back and she sticks out her tongue at him.

"How? "she asks naughtily.

"By kissing you, begging you and marrying you" he replies ticking it off on his finger, eyes twinkling.

"Abhi….stop" she laughs happily.

"Are you ready to live with me forever Wifey?" he asks his eyes suddenly serious "because even if you are not….I am not letting you run away….ever." he tells her and she smiles shyly.

"I don't want to go away now….ever" she replies back looking into his eyes.

"Will you be my forever Nikki?" he asks her cupping her face and she replies by kissing him passionately.

"Forever" she replies.

@red...I love this part...he was so teasing in this FF Honu...I loved it 😳
@green...hahahaaaaa @underlined! 🤣 He can be so cute at times 😳
I still feel like I'm about to burst with happiness when I read these parts...I dunno why but I just gives me this feeling like I've just had a chocolate fantasy with ice cream from CCD 😳 And that pastry makes me feel like I'm on top of the world 😆 So you can understand how much I love this...
Honey I really miss COL....I miss Tia...I miss this wonderful, wonderful Abhi that you etched here with so much detail...bring it back yaar...give us an epilogue...or a scene that happened somewhere in between maybe...like that "unseen flashback" we got on 29th June where Nikki was sort of seducing Abhi to get the diary from him 😉 Ya know what I mean, don't you? 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
You know something? I read the ENTIRE thing all over again...started it last night and finished it now...
And man, I just realised exactly how much I miss this FF...I had stayed up till 5am even just to res my spot for an update...
Everytime I read this, I laugh, smile, giggle, roll my eyes, blush, get mad, feel sad, feel on top of the world...there's something about this FF Honu...and its not just with the story or with the characters. Even the comments made here make you laugh...
There's a reason this is my fav...nothing makes me feel as good as reading COL all over again...and I'm never bored!
I'll say that this is THE BEST among all that you've written...and all credit goes to the characterisation, really. The story, of course, is amazing...but we've learnt to take it for granted in everything that you write. The charm of COL lies in the characterisation and the pure sweetness with which you have portrayed it. This is our AN...forever fighting, forever loving, forever caring and forever misunderstanding 😆
Once more, I give you a standing ovation. You touch my heart everytime with every word of your every update.
There's a reason I'm biased 😉 😆
Love you 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ohhh and did you notice? You have almost 58000 views! Congratulationssssss 🤗
This deserves a celebration...in the form of a new part! 😃 Yeah yeah I know I'm always looking for new ways to make you write more AN stuff 😆
Par sach mein! Its an achievement! *applauds*
WRITE SOMETHING!!! 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Khushboo_AN

You know something? I read the ENTIRE thing all over again...started it last night and finished it now...

And man, I just realised exactly how much I miss this FF...I had stayed up till 5am even just to res my spot for an update...
Everytime I read this, I laugh, smile, giggle, roll my eyes, blush, get mad, feel sad, feel on top of the world...there's something about this FF Honu...and its not just with the story or with the characters. Even the comments made here make you laugh...
There's a reason this is my fav...nothing makes me feel as good as reading COL all over again...and I'm never bored!
I'll say that this is THE BEST among all that you've written...and all credit goes to the characterisation, really. The story, of course, is amazing...but we've learnt to take it for granted in everything that you write. The charm of COL lies in the characterisation and the pure sweetness with which you have portrayed it. This is our AN...forever fighting, forever loving, forever caring and forever misunderstanding 😆
Once more, I give you a standing ovation. You touch my heart everytime with every word of your every update.
There's a reason I'm biased 😉 😆
Love you 🤗

Thank U Khush for all the sweet and encouraging words!!
It was sooooooooo much fun to write this FF.......trying to update almost everyday that if i didn't write, it made me feel soooooo incomplete.
I thank whoever's original idea Abhimanyu Modi was....such a solid personality, upstanding and true to his work.....his kind of people are so hard to find and also Kudos to AT for doing a wonderful job with him.
I love the fact that you are biased 😃😃 ....am so glad you enjoyed this FF so much and we met thru this FF!! The sweetness is all Tia 😊 n Nikki....I wanted to portray a sweet but complicated love story!! I think a simple love story is always complicated and special for the protagonists....trying to sort thier feelings.....n that is what I wanted to Portray!!
Once again....thanks a ton 🤗......will def write a small scene for the family again!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: hapinezz13

Thank U Khush for all the sweet and encouraging words!!
It was sooooooooo much fun to write this FF.......trying to update almost everyday that if i didn't write, it made me feel soooooo incomplete.
I thank whoever's original idea Abhimanyu Modi was....such a solid personality, upstanding and true to his work.....his kind of people are so hard to find and also Kudos to AT for doing a wonderful job with him.
I love the fact that you are biased 😃😃 ....am so glad you enjoyed this FF so much and we met thru this FF!! The sweetness is all Tia 😊 n Nikki....I wanted to portray a sweet but complicated love story!! I think a simple love story is always complicated and special for the protagonists....trying to sort thier feelings.....n that is what I wanted to Portray!!
Once again....thanks a ton 🤗......will def write a small scene for the family again!!


You left me no choice than to be biased 😆 With such a lil cutie, you won my heart...even though I generally avoid kids, you made me love one with all that I had...I've become quite protective of the tot! 😲

And yes...agree with you 100% @bold.

Abhimanyu Modi was a masterpiece. The other characters were manufactured to perfection. But this one...this man was created bit by bit...and in his imperfection, he won our hearts. Really - here was a man who wasn't all good...he wasn't all bad either. He had grey shades...he made mistakes, let his ego come in between his problems, misunderstood, didn't always do the right thing or say the right words, he regretted but couldn't apologise, he wanted to be held and comforted but couldn't express the same, he had his demons and he fought them. He was impulsive at times, emotional, sensitive, sensible yet sometimes he got frustrated and flew off the handle. He was everything we are...a man of flesh and blood, someone who you could relate to. And that's why we love him so much.

He's not perfect. Therein lies his perfection as a character.

Whoever made him deserves a standing ovation. 👏

And on a lighter note, YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY my pleading worked! We're getting another sceneeeee *sings*

Jai ho to makkhan maroying! 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Honey!!!
I just realised i have not commented on the last part of the FF! 😲... I'm really annoyed fr that...
I loved the AN date!!! n
u fulfilled mine and choti's wishes of seeing AN's child!🤗
Sorry for the late comments! I still rem u asked me abt the update in Jan 2010 n had told i loved it but couldnt comment since i had just got the job n would comment later as i had no access to net at new plc!😔
Its already been an year!😲 good God!...I just miss those days Honey!
Keep Writing for us!!!😃
Love,
Shachee.❤️🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Honey and Khusboo ur discussion inspired me to write a one shot ..... will post it soon .....
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Posted: 14 years ago
*sigh*
Was churaofying poems from here to spam on the ANFC and...ohhh, I couldn't help but rpve my eyes over the updates at lightning speed (I don't even need to read, I know what's where already LOL) and I feel so good again!
Honey this is one FF I'll never grow tired of! 🤗
Hayye hayye these two are so nice:
When did enduring love begin?
The day we became man and wife

There is patience and understanding
We try to be unselfish and kind
Though not a fairy-tale romance
No greater love will we find

Sharing dreams, passions, and desires
Building each other up when we fall
We've learned to say I'm sorry
And I love you through it all

Our two hearts beat as one
Cherishing what we have from above
Dance with me forever
Dance me to the end of love
and
Day by day,Night by night
Kiss by kiss,Touch by touch
Step by step, I fall in love
A love so incomprehensible
So vivid, So unique,So wild,
that not even the reign of God could control
A passion so deep,A need so necessary
A want so strong
The universe would not handle
I love you today
I'll love you tomorrow
I'll love you forever

And the rest of them too...😳
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful...I lost count! 😆

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