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Posted: 14 years ago

-Ehtesaab-
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Lost in a world that seemed so alien now, life in ruined and bare. trust seems only like a folktale in this empty world that surrounded her filled with darkness and pain.

A week had passed & every thing was the same. Dev's office timing...her wait every thing but wat was felt now..more than ever was loneliness within. An emptiness. She felt like she had no one to share her sorrows with. She never felt a need of a friend when she thought she had dev by her. But now she missed him.. she missed his love.. his expression of love that she thought was only hers.

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Maan had been restless for last whole one week. His eyes madly searched for the glimpse of that one person in the morning. It seemed funny, but he did have a rough patch through out the week.

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every day Geet left to the gym but some how didn't make it..she sat in the park that came on her way. She always believed we don't fall in love, rather love is a state of being, it grows over time, as you get to know someone, as you get to know yourself... so for her dev was every thing. She didn't know anything about herself without him. There was no question of forgiveness she thought..because she never differentiated herself from him. He was wrong ..then she was wrong..so they were wrong together some where. forgiveness was not required.
She has been thinking over it over a week now..she could never stop loving him wat ever he be. More than him, she needs him. She couldn't felt suffocated even with the thought of living without him. But his betrayal had scarred her deeply & she didn't know how will she live her life with that. Her misery doesn't seem to end.. he still behaved like nothing happened, well thats how its been between them, the moment they patch up after a fight dev always behaved like nothing ever happened. She didn't doubt his love, but then...his misconduct was not acceptable.
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Maan 's car stopped at the signal. He was losing his senses for last one week. He just got off the car & looked around. He walked in the direction he has seen her coming from. It was wired but he just didn't know wat else to do. He had to know she was fine. But she could have moved to some other place. She could have got some other commitment anything.. how silly was he..he loosened his tie & sat in the bench. Not sure about wat he was doing, like a fool walking towards some destination he doesn't even know.

Then a sweet voice muttered - how can u hate the conduct of someone u love
he absently replied without even looking at her - It is possible, and I think its OK, to love someone and reject their behavior
she blankly looked at him
he turned to meet her eyes..It is ok to not want to be with them then.
He was shocked to see her like..this..she probably looked like she has gained some weight, still her face seemed pale & drawn in.. he immediately held her arms..
tum teehk ho na? Oh god I have been so worried for u? R u alright?
she didn't seem to register anything wat he said..actually even he was not... she just asked wat about longing then??
she still looked at him blankly .. wat about longing then?
He couldn't deny those eyes..they seemed in so much of pain...pain that seemed to wrench his heart for some reason. Longing is about loss you haven't grieved. He said it lost in those teary painful eyes
wat to do then she still questioned him
don't let go!!!
even if it hurts???
wat hurts more matters here!!!
She raised to her full height.. she just walked pass him still lost in her thought...she walked few steps ahead & she came back & hugged him.. thanks
he couldn't dare to hug her back. He just stood their with a warm smile.
She smiled weakly & walked to the gym. Oddly he was happy. Like it meant a lot to see her cross the road yet again. He did see her regularly then on.

She had made up her mind. She knew they loved each other. She couldn't let go the relationship like this. She did her best to sort things out. She wanted to talk to dev & solve things.
She finally got to speak to him on friday.
Dev we need to talk
umm
.still flipping some files
I want to spend more time with u
bolo kya karna hain
kanhi chalten hain na..like a holiday
he pulls out his blackberry & shows the meetings lined up for next whole month.
Aacha main office join kar loon?
He snapped so that u can keep eye on me..tumhara bhi ne ghar main rah kar dimaag kharab hogaya hain..
she was terribly hurt..she didn't even think on those lines, she was genuinely wanting to spend time with him. He was always sharp tongued but his words seemed to hurt more now.
Shall I join some other place
wats wrong with u?? u know I don't like all that..waisen bhi u r a college srop out wat job u will get??
that hurt..but not more than wat she was already hurt..main ghar pe rah kar bore ho jathi hoon
wat happened to all of ur classes?
Dev u don't get it do u?
He yelled WAT?
I feel very lonely
all these years u didn't ..now all of a sudden u do
thats because all this years I thought u r there for me
I am still there for u
no ..at least I don't feel u r there for me
thats ur problem
when was her problem different from his..she thought. She looked at him confused & puzzled.
Does my problem matter to u?
I have given u every thing ghar gaadi.. pasen..all the facilty..wat more do u want now
I want u dev..not all this
I am here with u
not any more
she said sadly
I have clearly told u about her.
I am not talking about her
she screamed..why r u then??
DON'T SHOUT
she calmed herself, she seldom raised her voice in front of him. She took a deep breath
dev can't we plan about babies, don't u think it will be good for us.
Why do u always come up this topic?
U had said ki ek bar business set hojayen ga we will.. abhi tho sab teehk hain na
I need some more time
Geet also didn't want to force herself she believed it had to be both their decisions & they need to give a warm hearty welcome to their little love.



Precap
pushing to the brim

-PREV PART 2 NEXT PART 4-
Thanxs for all the beautiful comments
it really motivates me & helps me to write more
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
YIPEE ! Me first . . .

Update was not good , as Geet is still wife of Dev . .
Jokes apart . Update is really good , why cant it after all this is Maaneet first meeting .

Ab bas jaldi se DIVORCE karva do .
I really hate to imagine Geet with Dev .

We want DIVORCE .

Waiting for next part .
Edited by Swaatii - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

I waited

so what if I am second
and now that waiting bore fruit
will read it and comment
so thats it
he made her drop her studies
she could have completed her degree
what a man? he really is the typr who belive in making their wives a slave
he made sure she did not get to complete her course so that she could not move out of him
ridiculous man
about Maan, no doubt he worried about her
I liked the way you explained it
and made the two strangers ionteract keeping them still as strangers
Dev sahi hain biwi ko ghar do gaadi do paisa do aur khud doosari aurato ke saath waqt bitaao
in sab ka hisaab kitaab khoob rakh hain Dev ne
he deserved an illeterate wife who would nag and sack him, whose brothers would come in and beat him for doing this to her
but ...
waiting for more
will she move on?
how will she manage?
will her family support her?
will she try to complete her degree? its only been 2 yrs she still can purue her degree she still has 2 yrs remedial time
will she in coming future be helped by Maan?
who was the woman with Dev?
Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

what is the problem with Dev..why is taking geet for granted??😡😡

love mannets convo 😊
great update👏
cont soon
Edited by -memorable- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks Muski for a terrifc and a mindblowing update...
I am still numb with the chain of event u r showing in this FF.
It is as if I am reading what has happened right before my eyes...
This is exactly what most of the control freak do...
Initially they emotionally blackmail their other half and make them feel that their love is out of this world so that with those emotional weakness they could dictate their terms...
He slowly and gradually makes her cripple so much so that she never realizes that she is no more SHE but a mere picture of SHE whom her husband wanted to be...
the first thing he wants is to make her dependent in all senses...whether it is finance,emotion, social or any other aspect of life...
Geet is sailing in a boat on which 2 people were going to to one direction... now both r moving to opposite directions ,she is trying her bestest possible way to redirect the position of the other person ...on doing so she will go through all kind of damages which one could hardly think of ...😭
Edited by Dilsay - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww that was terrific part Muskiii...👏
loved Maan n Geet's convo...
Geet is trying her best that her marriage works..but that Dev is behaving like a jerk...hope she leaves him soon...wanna Dev to realise his mistake but I don't want Geet to take him back in her life..as Geet is only Maan's
😳


Edited by namita25 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing part...i loved it...maan n geet bit was awesome...am hating dev now...that fool...continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank u muskanp for the great update, the story is lovely, waiting to see what progress comes in dev and geets life.
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it yaar...i hope geet would soon realise that she should come out of the relationship...continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

gr8 update... finlly maneet met... nw waitin fr geet 2 join maans office nd waitin fr geet 2 leave dev nd move on


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