-Ehtesaab- SS maaneet THREAD 1

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manisha shibloll

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Posted: 14 years ago

#341

nice update...i feel sad for geet...dev is being a true son of a bitch here...

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Vijaylakshmi Singh

@Lakshmi86

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Posted: 14 years ago

#342

Hey!😊

maaneet meeting was amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!

different and amazing!!!!!!!!👏

Loved the feeling!!!!!!!!!!😳

Geet is so kind and sweet!!!!

Dev is so sharp and cunning...😡

he wants someone to open the door when he is back home...😡😡😡

he wants someone that he can dominate...without giving a bit of love and care...😡😡😡😡😡

I wonder what Geet will do now...😕

Dev ke hisaab se toh Geet kuch bhi kare woh galat hai...😡😡😡😡😡😡😡

ufff...😡

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vivacious_gurl

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Posted: 14 years ago

#343

chalo jaldi karo... Muski wait is killing me... its already 11.40pm... am still awake...waiting for ur update... a long week is ahead of me...pls dont make me wait so much... btw will u be updating deewangi???

ok in TM after maansi's first words, if u make me cry more i will really come to US n murder u... rofl

still TM is the best...

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Tyro

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Posted: 14 years ago

#344

😍

can i be the first one to comment on this also...

plzzz...kitna time lagega...

Edited by jyoti_l - 14 years ago

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Anupama

@beforesunrise

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Posted: 14 years ago

#345

Aah …………….again congratulations on start of a new story ……….

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

GEET IS MARRIED TO DEV 😲 ………….first time in ur FF geet belongs to someone else ………..😲

What he cheated on her for past 1 year nd she forgave him

and thinking to start a fresh😡 ………kick his arse 😡………..he din even let her complete her degree 😡 ………….why is geet acting like such mado ……..

he is so blunt to accept the fact and still din even apologized properly ……😡

What is geet thinking leave him ……😡 How weird maan was worried for some stranger nd she hugged him awww 😊 ………maneet connection ……

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monika

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Posted: 14 years ago

#346

waiting... waiting... waiting... waiting... waiting... waiting...

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vivacious_gurl

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Posted: 14 years ago

#347

muski aur bahut time lagega kya?? shud i go to sleep???

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Muskan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#348

stil typing maaneet moment now

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siroilily

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Posted: 14 years ago

#349

waiting

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Muskan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#350

-Ehtesaab-
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Geet also didn't want to force herself she believed it had to be both their decisions & they need to give a warm hearty welcome to their little love.

A month had passed & Geet was trying her best to cope with her love for him. But it was getting harder, especially over last week dev was really disturbed. She did try to confront him but he seemed really worn out. He began to be mean & totally not helping her with her loneliness. She wanted him to reassure her, but he seemed too lost in his problem. It was always been like this..her problems were never problems..actually she never faced such things before. This was way too difficult & worst she could handle. Her small small issues he could handle very easily. He actually never let any problem touch her. He managed everything well since marriage actaully always. Gave her wat ever she ever wished for even more.

They had that understanding always. He was quiet a romantic person during college days. They would spend hours together just simply walking holding hands. He could spend nights describing her beauty, he still couldn't take his eyes off her thats is if he gets time to see her. She knew all the while it was work that was keeping him from expressing himself the way he used to but he did otherwise. He really cared for her. They were each others support always, as time passed he started taking her for granted not realizing the bases of their relationship was the togetherness.

Geet was independent otherwise, but emotionally she couldn't separate herself from him. She was educated enough but emotionally not independent enough to detach from him. It was not in her to stop loving him. All those days they spent together was beautiful, how could she led go. Wat ever he was she loved him for that & he loved her for the way she was. Even now seeing him in pain & stress bothered her more than herself. She went to office to meet him. He was in a conference room. She waited. Later on she heard a heated up argument coming from the conference room between him & another lady. He never raises voice at any one. Even when they fight he may snap but not shout. But this was strange. She peeped in only to see the same girl with a bump in her stomach now & it was obvious argument was on the child she was bearing.

Suddenly the woman he was shouting to fell silent. He felt someone just pulled the floor off his feet when he followed her view to meet the painful eyes of Geet. Jaan jaan meri baat suno please. Please. Geet just left from there. She didn't know wat to do. She called up her parents. She got the most unexpected answer. U decided to marry him, now u should try ur best maintain ur relation. Her papaji was disgusted. Don't even think about divorce. Phir raji se kaun shaadi karega?

Geet couldn't have spoken to her in-laws they were not that close to her.

Dev couldn't get back home. He tried his best to call & leave message but she didn't bother answering. She was way too hurt. Any explanation was not acceptable. Wat disgusted her the most was it was his baby that women bearing. Tears couldn't stop flooding her eyes. How could he do something like this.

Next day
she was just packing her bag.
Dev - Geet meri baat suno..
she was no where listening to him
he tried to get his parents speak to her, but they had a different stand all together..humne tumhe pehle hi kaha tha..she is not good for our family. Kisi ko pata chalega tho kitni badnami hogi
he smashed the phone.. he couldn't bare to hear a word against her.
Dev - Geet tum kya kar rahi ho?
She simply continued packing her bag.
Dev - where do u think u r going..
she didn't respond
dev - damit u r my wife!!!
Geet - oh really!!! how can that be?? she gets to sleep with u..she gets to bear ur child ..she gets to work with u... then how can I be ur wife
dev lifts the black chain in her neck..wat this jaan
she snaps it off.. & thrust it in his hand ..I guess suits her better...
dev was shocked.. she not once removed the chain since their marriage. He was angry now. Geet u r crossing all limits.
Not more than wat u did
Geet .. I love u
I love u too
he hugged her phir yeh sab kya hain..
I can't take this any more.. I can't take ur betrayal
I never meant to cheat on u..it was just a causal relation, nothing serious
thats why she is preganant
he closed his eyes in frustration.
She just walked out
where will u go..u don't know anyone here. He blocked her way..
when did u ever care?
Damit u stay one day on those streets u will know how hard the real world is..
she looked at him painfully.. how ever bad it is it won't be worse than this ...this hell
he dragged her inside & locked the door behind..
u r not going any where. U r my wife.. he hugged her tightly.. U r not going any where ...samjhi tum!!! I love u damit!!! I realy do...

strangely those words still had the effect to melt her heart. She couldn't even hate that baby.. because it was his. She was heart broken at her plight. She hated her condition, her helplessness. She couldn't bare the thought any more.. she missed her gym for another week..

Maan began to get restless yet again. This time every passing day he walked around that bench where he saw her the other day. It was ridiculous he thought.. a week later Maan was still looking for when he suddenly saw her restlessly, angrily walking towards him. She came & held his collar..aapne kaha tha na..don't let go

it took him a while to register wat she was talking about. He was bit conscious as the people around were looking at them strangely. Though he was not part of Khurana empire but he still was the eldest son of khurana family,..basically an eminent personality.. but sure enough she was oblivious to it.
She again shook his him holding his collar ...aapne kaha tha na..don't let go??
he thought for a while & tried to frame it right...that was because u said wat about longing waise bhi I said it depends on wat hurts more.
She broke down in tears why does it hurt??? why ???
may be because u learned to associate love with pain and loss, so you interpret the familiar feeling of longing as love. This is dangerous. It can lead you to choose painful relationships. Remember, love doesn't hurt. Only loss hurts. Love doesn't cause pain. Loss causes pain
then why is it so hard to let go of a relationship that doesn't have all the things u you need..she asked painfully
The answer is longing. He said blankly .. You don't want to face that pain. you're filling up feelings of emptiness, which come from not having a sense of your own self, by obsessing. she looked lost at that word..Obsession is an addiction. Obsession, in relationships, stems from fear of loss. It also creates more pain. he couldn't bear the pain in her eyes...At times pain you feel by facing pain and grieving is sweet and releasing than the pain you feel by denying the pain itself and obsessing is hard and enduring.
He slowly held her hand that was holding his collar.. You have to chose between love and longing.

Precap
will she be able to take a stand

-PREV PART 3 NEXT PART 5-

Thanxs for all the beautiful comments
it really motivates me & helps me to write more
love
muskan

Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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