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Nidhi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Nice intro Nikky...!! But Abhay's a werewolf nd Piya's a vampire!!! Nice change... I wouldn't have imagined this ever otherwise... I'm loving this one..!!
All The Best!!
Luv,
Nidhi. 🤗

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Gals

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Awesome Intro Dear.. :) Loved it..
M always ready for heartattacks ;)
Plz Add me 2 ur pm list..
Continue soon.. lolz.

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Nikhat

@blossom1234

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: elizaa
nikko!!
sirf intro hi likha hai??

i was like ek mast bada part hoga!!

plz strt soon noWW

lve the whole idea of it

:D

ya,jab bhi time milega i will update,soon😃

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Nikhat

@blossom1234

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: N_NS
Nice intro Nikky...!! But Abhay's a werewolf nd Piya's a vampire!!! Nice change... I wouldn't have imagined this ever otherwise... I'm loving this one..!!
All The Best!!
Luv,
Nidhi. 🤗

thanks nidhi😃

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Nikhat

@blossom1234

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Gals_11
Awesome Intro Dear.. :) Loved it..
M always ready for heartattacks ;)
Plz Add me 2 ur pm list..
Continue soon.. lolz.

thank u😃

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Nikhat

@blossom1234

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

hey guys,sorry don't have much time so will just give u a short part now,will come back on wednesday and will give a long update then😃

part 1

today is the first day of mount college for piya,she is getting ready,wearing clothes which will protect her from sun light...

piya-(to herself)u r soo late piya,get ready soon

came from behind piya's mom and dad who adopted her, chand raichand and haseena raichand🤣🤣...

haseena-good morning piya

piya-😃good morning mom

haseena-u know now that u r a vampire,not a full vampire but still,u r a vampire...u have to hide your identity from the world

piya-yes mom,i totally understand

chand-and piya...remember one thing,u have to be careful at your every move,because they must be behind us

piya-😊yes dad,i will be

haseena-ok...so do u think u will get her in mount college?

piya-i guess...because we all had a photo with us and i think,i will be able to find them

haseena-ok then,go

piya-ok bye mom,bye dad

then piya goes from there...

here abhay is talking on the phone with his master...

master-abhay

abhay-(rudely)now what do u want?

master-now u have to do just one work for us,and then...u r totally free

abhay-but...

master-no but...we don't want any carelessness,u have to do is just...bring a weak vampire for us...and for u to make it easy,i will tell u who u have to bring,bring piya raichand,she is newly made vampire and she is not a vampire totally,she has been bitten only once,so she is fresh...just bring her,and then...u will be completely free from us

abhay-ok,i will do it

master-and remember one thing,be careful as chand and haseena can be dangerous for u,they r very clever

abhay-ok,i got it...but where will i get her?

master-she lives near your house only and she must be now going to mount college,we could get this must information only,now u have do it all yourself

abhay-ok

then he cuts the call...

here,misha got a news that two new students r coming in mount college so she runs to kabir...

misha-kabir kabir kabir...

kabir-whta happened misha???does any girl wants me?

misha-ha ha ha very funny,now listen u dumbo...two new students r coming in our college

kabir-what?wow

misha-yup...and now,this is our chance to rag them fully

kabir-so what's the plan

misha-hmmm...let's think

kabir-ok let's go

then they both go to think for a plan

here panchi and sid r fighting with a jewel thief...

sid is punching him and panchi is trying to snatch the jewel bag from him which he was stealing...

sid-panchi be careful,he is having a gun

panchi-ya sid...u do your work,i am fine

sid kicked him and he fainted😆...panchi picked up the jewel bag...

sid and panchi-case solved😃

sid-wow panchi,we r the best team

panchi-i know...now let's give this bag to the police

sid-u know what panchi...sometimes i think we should get an award for these awesome jobs

panchi-keep dreaming

sid-no i am serious,day and night we solve cases,fight with all criminals,but what we get at the end of the day

panchi-gaajar ka halwa?

sid-my favourite

panchi-i know,so today u will get this in sweet

sid-awww,thank u so much,u know what i want and when

panchi-and why shouldn't i...i know u since childhood,i know everything about u...and i know this also that from the jewel bag u r taking out a diamond behind me😆

sid-o...oo...

panchi-sid...when will u grow up?

sid-sorry

panchi-let's give this bag to the police

sid-ok😆

to be continued...

next update-misha and kabir will play a prank on abhay and piya and they also don't know but by that they will only bring them close😳

Edited by blossom1234 - 14 years ago

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mansim

@mansim

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

wow the first part was too good 👏 chand and haseena being piya's vampire parents as too good 😆nice change👍🏼 we always think of them being with abhay😆

also loved sid and panchi's entry😆

nice precap😉

thanks for the pm😊

update soon😉

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Silvy

@SilverBell

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Aww Wow your Story is very good I like it. update soon. i will work on mine too.

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Sanjna

@--sunshine--

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

nikky i love ur writting and siggy
and u made perfect couples and kabeer playing prank
haila

and love u nikky 4 writting so well
p.s---> i read it today only

aal d best 4 future writing