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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome sara continue soon👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Me and ……….world

some steps reach her ear ………she turn to found her nanji walking toward her

N: bita u okk ? I heard about the fire ……u good na ?

Khemi her older sis walk along her twins younger sisters also …….with her brother raj who is just the younger among all of them……he is just 5 years old

All sit in circle around her ………she is step in this marriage for them all for the honor of her family….

K: u ok santo ?

The twins (prena and mira): u good sister u good ??????

Raj: santo u good? …..with teary eyes

Santo smile look at them all from her nanji to her brother to her sisters …………….for them she will did anything ……..even to act that this relation is the door of happiness

S: ha I am ok ……..hold khemi hand …………as she continue speaking ……and healthy also ……….her other hand touch raj face

As well as prena and mira faces …….

All be happy for the good news they keep talking and smiling …..time pass fast and the time for leaving come When her nanji asked

N: where is malik?

Santo put smile on her face and said

S: in his work nanji

Here her nanji look to her room as well as khemi and both act as it is normal

Here khemi said

K: he will be sooon good with u ………..keep faith and santo smile wishing that from bottom of her heart

Here her family went with promise to come back again as soon as possible

Again the room become empty………. again

no one there except she and her thoughts ….her lonely

Champo here knock on the door cutting santo lost

Ch: malkin food ……and medicine

Santo again but that smile looking to champo ….they become so good friends

Santo eat laugh had her medicine and champo left her again to her only partner ….thoughts along other partner ………lonely

Waiting for what she don't know …..but for whom she know that very well

For her husband ……….husband …..santo smile looking at the door which she kept look at for the whole day and now it is the night only……….

His family hate her but still ……they checking her by taking look throw the door but him na …………he just never even let his shadow fall on this empty room…………

But why she waiting ???? he old he heartless he ………….what he……….

Enough santo enough

His anger his kindness touched u so deeply……… his manly…hummmmm

As someone have magical touch inside u………….and suddenly u feel u for someone……….

Her eyes keep waiting for the only one she wanted to visits her…….. in some past days he was nothing and now from one touch by holding her in his arms he become everything everything…………

But hours past and no one come at all

Santo just let the thoughts drive her away along the reflection of the moon lights on her lying body

But what she didn't know that there upper opposite to her room there are a man who sit in the darkness keeping looking to the half opened door of her room keep looking at the beauty of her only look at her dark long river hair which lie on so softly way on that lucky pillow ………he keep look to her innocent beauty her …….. weakness stronger ………..he keep look at her

As the biggest fights ever keep going inside him between the new meaning of the life and the past that he keep hold it sooo tightly

Days pass and santo become better and healthier ………and the man in darkness keep staring at his wife every night…………..

Searching for the answer for the only question that keep coming

WHY? WHEN ?

Nothing change for santo who kept live in that room as family ignore her

But whoever looking far for this view of the lonely santo in that room will not see what behind it

It is seem everything is same but many things change

Nights come keep the secrets and went

………….like dm hiding in darkness ……….as well as …………..

TBC

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Posted: 14 years ago
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NIGHTS SECREAT

It is seem everything is same but many things change

Nights come keep the secrets and went…….

The nights where dm can hide himself in so natural as in same in stranger way……nights where santo lie there on the floor of her empty room

Nights where his steps taking him under the curtains of the night to her place ……where his hand pushing the door to enter where same hands hands also closing the same door behind him ………..

Every nights he walk to here…..his steps like running to where she lie alone…… closing door behind and …………..walking toward her in so much restless & happiness….. to finally he sit near her trying to figure out his feeling ……….

along wind keep blowing …….. silent covering him…..covering them……….his fight begin ……………..

he just ……………as every night slowly slowly come closer to her trying to see her…..trying to understand why he missing her ……he just go closer and closer trying to dissolve in her soul try to found himself ………..try to understand where he lost his soul……..as he try he be just inches from her …….so closer to her more then anyone in his life……..more than his gone wife ….as he just see her face dissaper with every steps make him closer to ….santo

And something in him push him more to her ……..where his lips ….his eyes….trying to touch her

As she touch him by her breath that hitting his skin his heart …………..where finally a storm of wanting to know WHY? AND WHEN?

Making his lips touch the softness of her along the wind sounds hitting his ear as he feel it on his face along feeling her lips between his

Softly slowly he feel her …………….it is need ?.......it is curiosity?.........it is the unwanted feeling ?................whatever it is he loved it make him feel life

To suddenly scared in him make him back off with the memory of subdrah and guilty make him running outside her room

With promise that he will not come back ………………….

As soon as sunrise up ……………..

Dm body …….soul……….keep feeling that kiss or it can be called the almost kiss

…………..for week all went like that as santo be just in sooooo deep sleep and dm lost in her beauty …………..in her innocent

After 7 nights and 8 days

Someone call …………baa pick up and smile…..after some time call cut

As baa have wide smile ……gust coming to Mahiavanshi village

………and santo be better no need for all that medicine

Night fall dm dyeing to feel her again after the long unmoved day

But steps just freeze …………dm eyes catch her tiny body sit near the door staring at the moon

And slowly dm turn back to his emptiness………..and lose………….

And ……………

His loss of her closeness make him release finally what happened at the whole past nights mean one thing only …………he fall in love

This answer for his question come along his reflection on the mirror and as a reaction of this shock

Dm scream and broke the mirror with his hand ……….

Non hear except her ……..her feet took her in so faster to where he is………….

TBC

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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
Amazing Sara keep up the great work👏
and write next part soon 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: mimi10

Amazing Sara keep up the great work👏

and write next part soon 😉

u sooooooo sweeet
:D
willl posttt sonnnnnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww sara nothing can be best then this its awesome........ now waiting for next but loved the idea love of sanraj so soon 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome partssss👏👏
continueeeee soonnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
awwwwwwww alll i willl for all who read my parts my ff
in love of sanraj
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Love and ……impossible

Santo run sooo fast …her heart beat in faster way ever and in scared too as she know from where that sounds come she know it is from his room …where she was lie there on his bed earlier where she was feeling him throw his bed smell his fragrance from his sheet santo run racing the time to reach him ………..and finally she there

For her seconds were the longest hours……but she there ha she enter his room her cham cham music reach him before she do

The pain of losing her just dissolved in the happiness of feeling her coming to him……as her cham cham be closer dm put the plan

Ha …..Plan to make her here….to make her spend this night in this room only……..santo finally opened the door and enter to see that……

Dm sits on his chair trying to remove some small piece of mirror which came in his hand after he hit the mirror

Dm look at her with his eyes edge only as in same time pretending that he not knows that she is here……….

Without thinking santo run to sit on her knees near him his eyes raise to settle on her only as she hold his hand with careful and scared also

He can see that in her eyes many things but nothing likes coldness or hate for what he had did by throw her in that room

She make him feel that he small that he just a man who need this women in front him more than anything in the world

With slowly slowly santo start removing the pieces she not thinks she just does ……all pieces now on the table

And she left his hand tear her sari edge and took the disinfection which is there on table along other medicine ……..santo start cleaning his wound …..But what she doesn't know that she make the wound inside him recover

He soooo happy she here his eyes eating her while santo just concentrate on his wound

Finally since she enters this room santo raise her eyes to meet his …….

She stand and in same time sink in his eyes totally many emotion are there many talks many feeling exchange many words said and she try to stand up moveing her face away when

Dm suddenly falls on her santo shocked feeling his head on her shoulder ………she just holds his body on her arms …..Hugging him

S: u okkk??? Malik u alright???

All what she get is

Dm: hummm…aa……..and unclear words

Santo here just stand and happy in same time

Feeling him here is happiness but the reason for that is scary………….she try making him sit but he know what he doing as his hand holding her tightly to him

And a smile appears on his face as santo have no idea what is happening on…..

TBC

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sara awwwwsome part i love it 👏👏👏
it's so emotional❤️ and i wish we see this in Bandini 2😉
Edited by mimi10 - 14 years ago

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