AR sesn 2 FF -kshitij ki aur- gulmohar pg 67 - Page 35

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: .Doe.

OMG !! This was so niceeeeeeee, and fresh :-)))))))


You are so amazingggggg !!!

Update sooooooooon deee....& please, don't keep us waiting, hehe 😆


yaar... in this forum there are many FF... All will take at lest one week to update the next part... i think you should wait for some times.sami dii will will be with her update...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zee10


yaar... in this forum there are many FF... All will take at lest one week to update the next part... i think you should wait for some times.sami dii will will be with her update...


I don't like waiting, so I asked her not to keep us waiting. And more likely, it's a compliment to her. Besides that, I asked her.
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi zee and kezia dears will update soon in 2-3 days thank you guys ..appreciate ur love and comments
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: .Doe.

OMG !! This was so niceeeeeeee, and fresh :-)))))))


You are so amazingggggg !!!

Update sooooooooon deee....& please, don't keep us waiting, hehe 😆

kezi shukariya dear means a lot
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Posted: 14 years ago
Please update your next part
Anmol is back in agra ....Now there is so much longing for ragini ..
He knows that and you have to make her happy ..

I hope they get closer soon..
Also we need to know why Vasu is annoyed with Anmol you need to reveal this to us !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Dee, kab tak update karoge ? I just can't wait. Last time, you took long. Don't take that long this time as well.
But that said, please update as per convenience, ok ? 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
CONGRATS SAMMY !!!👏👏👏👏👏👏

YOUR FF crossed 10000 views !!

I am sure RS ji is reading it and ideas for season two le rahey hongay !!😉

Now that you have reached the milestone ..Please continue with the next part and get us with Angini relationship...😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shanti05

CONGRATS SAMMY !!!👏👏👏👏👏👏

YOUR FF crossed 10000 views !!

I am sure RS ji is reading it and ideas for season two le rahey hongay !!😉

Now that you have reached the milestone ..Please continue with the next part and get us with Angini relationship...😳

aww thank you dear.........i am really honoured,specially when i have made so less updates ..i feel this honour is great.......and am humbled by ...will see to uodate soon guys just thoda block hai brain ko
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Posted: 14 years ago

Ragini felt secure and content ,as if cocooned in his warmth,her heart sang songs with birds and she sank back against him,hiding her face in his shoulder,he kissed top of her head softly and both of them stood listening to sounds of nature. They were so lost in themselves that they did not hear approaching footsteps or sudden halt and sharp intake of breath.

Vasundhra felt betrayed ..angry .....she couldn't bear the contentment this picture portrayed,it reminded her of peace of mind which she did not have.....she cleared her throat and both looked back ,startled; Ragini was flustered ,she tried to move away from Anmol but he held her softly by holding her waist and looked at vasundhra , she looked disgusted and opened her mouth to speak but closed again ,instead she looked accusingly at Ragini.
Ragini struggled to move away from Anmol and mumbled mummyji wo bus chadhta suraj dekh rahe they.........pointing to wards golden rays of hope who were playing hide and seek with dark corners and shadows....
anmol kept her close,forcing her to stop struggling while never leaving vasundhra's eyes..there was hint of challenge in his eyes and his lips had a soft hint of smile; he saw a struggling woman, a mother; a unhappy mother and .smiling photo of his mother and Nani flashed in front of his eyes; he blinked;his gaze softened; after all he loved this woman whole heartedly ;.and then pointed her to wards the golden rays again,sun was up even higher now and all the shadows had disappeared.she looked at the display and looked back at Anmol ,her gaze confused and questing,
Anmol left ragini's side and moved forward and grabbed stunned vasundhra's hands ,his eyes intent he caught her gaze and said Please Mrs Rajvansh lets look for wards to wards golden future...our future....and smiled indulgently at beaming Tammy who was running full speed into kitchen into his arms,pushing him back wards ;he held her close and closed his eyes.....
to be continued soon guys,...sorry about delay
Edited by sami01 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
@sami...wat should i say..you made me loss of words..
i was so captivated by this preview...
tit-bits of the chapter till you give us the full one and no doubt you already get your readers interest..👍🏼
first scene i'm in awe already...a picture perfect scene you have described for us.😍
vasu appearence and wat a scene...could picturise every expression and emotions the three of them going through at that moment..
wow anmol is back and no way he will let go of his ragini now...this too could visualise anmol daring act and looking so confidently at vasu..
heart touching his love too for vasu and how he pleads to her to look forward for the future and at that moment you showed his daughter coming at full speed to hug him..
now i'm greedy for more .😳
do continue soon..
as usual an up to mark job..👏👏👏
Edited by savee_k - 14 years ago

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