AR sesn 2 FF -kshitij ki aur- gulmohar pg 67

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anizor

@anizor

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#321

awsome sami,it was an excellent part well worth the wait.please continue soon. thanks.

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krithika

@Wonderfullife

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#322

Ragini main aa gaya hoon kahaan ho tum;he uttered those words silently and steped inside and saw her holding jhaadoo with her saree tucked in and bare feet; standing on base of stairs ;breathing heavily and their eyes met;and something shifted in his heart..that look gave him glimpse of a vulnerable woman under that exterior ,he saw shutter coming over her face and steeled himself into same composed look to match hers and moved forward.

Kaisee ho Ragini

nahi aap jhaadoo rakh dijiye pehle main upar rakh ke aata hoon..

He looked at her and she understood he was asking her if he should go back to their old bedroom or guestroom.

She shifted uncomfortably,not meeting his eyes and said Wo maine aapke kapde nikaal diye hain ; wo aap chod gaye they na aapna blue night suit.

She flushed guiltily and Anmol kept looking at her with amusement in his eyes, as if asking her where u got my night suit from?

Wo yahin reh gaya tha she added un necessarily.

He smiled a little and went upstairs leaving Ragini standing by the stairs.

Before Ragini could come forward to help him,

he removed himself from the curtains and looked at her.
was that disappointment in her eyes he thought, his gaze narrowed trying to judge her expressions

her face had faint flush and she seemd agitated .

Good he thought.....May be little bit of ice around Your heart is melting..

what is new in this ? Magar kab tak bhagogi Ragini..

he closed his eyes for a second to daydream, in his dream Ragini always looked at him with same eyes...same eyes that welcomed him today; not masked with her struggle, the eyes giving him glimpse into her soul;he smiled and rested his forehead on his arm for a second..

Ragini felt adrenalin rush through her body..she stood outside the closed door of her bedroom, trying to catch her breath..why am I acting like a teenager, she chided herself, take a grip lady ,he came back so both you and him can make your daughter happy, so don't start hoping for yourself.

But what is the harm..Came a soft voice from her heart

Wo mera pallu she stammered, he looked down and moved to side without saying anything and turned to other side and closed his eyes..

Kabhi kabhi dose milna chahiye and went back to sleep.

He came to stand behind her, placing both hands on window sill, engulfing her in his arms, not touching yet so close..

WHAT CAN I SAY SAMI ?

IN 1 WORD FANTASTIC👏

You are too good in everything be it a VM Making or FF.👏👍🏼

I am always your Fan.⭐️

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Shanti

@shanti05

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#323

Aweeeeeeeeeeeeessssssoooooooooooommmmmmmmmmeeeeee
Guru thussi great ho !! "Bows down"
Finally my wish came true..
She laid on the couch 😆😆😆

Now back to the start
Wow chopper he takes back to his house in masoorie !! And gets ready to go back to his daughter to his house he once thought was his.. But now determined to go back..
Ragini ka dil dhak dhak kar raha hai..
She knows her desires and her heart is calling out to Anmol..
Just like a teenager waiting for a love to embrace her oyyeehoyye..

When the heart and mind speak in synch thats when Ragini gets drawn todays Anmol and tahts exactly how she is behaving today excited and wants to make the best dish for him..

Aww and to her surprise he says he is not hungry and goes to freshen up good good dauda oo Ragini ko 😉

She gets a pinch of her side of upset and Anmol tho killing her softly with his sweet talks 😆😆

And sleep was the best with teh pallu held within him 😍 So sweet I was visualizing the scene.. He needed a king size bed to stretch out ...
And he just did'nt bother where he was finally got a bed in his room in his house with his Ragini near him !!😳

The morning sceen was a treat especially the last line oyye hoyee close to her but yet not touching her.. His ehsaas she trly missed these months and the closeness does send chills donw her spine

Thanks for such a long update and Hmm Hmm good Kheer yummie he must have seen her sweetness in that 😉

Now jaldi say continue kar !!!!😃

Loved it totally

Its one good epsiode I hope Dkut and Rs are reading they have a beautiful story on their plate !!👏

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shanaya28

@shanaya28

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#324

@sami...worth waiting and its up to mark..👍🏼

so well described scenes and with the exact feelings..emotions ...

ragini restlessness..mixed feelings as anmol is coming back home..

a wait that is making her heart skip every sec..unconsciously ending making his fav dishes.kheer..wearing his fav color saree..sure ragini was in a confusing state of mind..her heart and soul waiting for him and her mind confused as wat's hapenning to her..the ice is sure melting around her heart..

anmol is back..he too feels a little agitated reaching home at last..aww the first one to run to embrace him is his princess daughter tammy..follows with the other members..his eyes looking for two persons missing in his welcome home esp hisragini."ragini mein agaya houn kaha ho tum"heart touching..he said that but ragini already heard it in her room before and ran bare feet down the stairs..could picturise everything so perfectly..

their eyes meeting each other and so much conveyed ..but anmol dont want to be weak and get back to his normal self..it will continue in their room thus leaving ragini in a confuse state about anmol's behaviour.. refusing dinner etc..

lol ragini angry anmol did not eat the dishes she prepared esp for him..she sure getting some surprises from anmol..aww the pallu scene with her looking so adoringly at her handsome hubby..too catchy this scene..at last ragini like anmol said get a dose of wat its like sleeping on a couch..😊

end scene ...anmol did melt ragini's anger and brought a smile on her face as he did ate the dinner he missed at night..

"He came to stand behind her, placing both hands on window sill, engulfing her in his arms, not touching yet so close.."so so captivating and so real..could visualise their chemistry in this scene.....

sami you are just outstanding always giving us a very gripping chapter that we cant wait for next part to know wat's happenning next..

beautifully written and i do hope creatives are reading this FF so as to get wat potential exist in angini's relationship to showcase on screen in B2..

you do deserve applause for such brilliant job..👏👏👏

Edited by savee_k - 14 years ago

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jyothi

@jyothi_cool

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#325

awesome part sami loved the way u have described everything and yippeeeeeeeeeeeee ragini slept on the couch. tooooo gud a part cont soon

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anmolji

@anmolji

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#326

Dii, my janu dii you are really fantastic.. You write so nicely dii, the way anmol sprawing on the bed is so sweet. I can imagine apu doing the same❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😍😍😍 He very naughty, finishing of all the food in the morning. Meri jaanu anmol😍😍 The pain that of losing angini is the hardest when I read your updates dii😭 😭😭 YOu know na how much miss angini. I just hope to see bidaai 2 with angini and angini only noone else. Diiiiiiiiiii you are the best of the bestest. Very well done. Makin her lie on the sofa was so devilish on his part😉 Well now allzwell that is what I wanted to see, anmol back in action and ragini bacchke rahna..............Thanks dii for this wonderful update. I cant get enough of praising you. YOu are simply out standing.

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#327

Dii a badi wali jhappi for you dii. It is superb mindblowing, fantastic, best, marvellous, out of the world and what not....... Kya likkthe hai dii aap? muaaaaaah. I just loved they way ragini behaved, becoz I want her confession so much. It must be the best of the best. I know you can do it becoz ye sab aap ke baye haath ka khel hai na. Dii what I love about you ff is the way you tempt us to visualize the whole thing. Haila dii day by day my love for angini increases. All thanks to you muaaaaaaaaah.

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apus fan

@sami01

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#328

hey gals thank you bow to u all wil reply soon

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Rekha

@rekha02

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#329

Sammy , loved the recap and FF update loads, brought smiles on my face. Lets see what goes round comes back and life is always a full circle, keep it up and great to read and imagine , waiting for the next part.👏😃

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tvmylove

@tvmylove

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#330

awesome dii... .OMG..... haw can i be so late to read this FF.... i am a stupid... you have update it on march 26...
today is march 31.. i havn't read this loving update for 5 days..... so sad.

dii you FF is just
magic..... after reading this i have a doubt that did i read this FF or watch this part... superb dii... happy to see anmol after long time in RH. it is a dream come true for me...
haaaa..... angini going to rock again....

Edited by zee10 - 14 years ago

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