Wriiten+Video Update:9/4:Pyaar ki ek kahani..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hello..WELCOME to POETIC SATURDAYS'thts wht I will call them..till I am there..once ur prayers are answered and anjana is back'u can have SARCY SAT back'hehe

MMM now todays epi'nothing happened'it was just DREEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAMYYYYYYYYY'

Sorry but really there was a seq and truly I went into OMG mode'

Ok so now before u all kill me lets start..

MAAN COMES TO RESCUE, OH COME LETS DO DISCO'

Geets calls driver BALWANT SINGH to halt,

In that shirt he is looking too hot,

Lucky comes to rescue and takes him away,

Shows him the room and asks him to stay,

He keeps on talkig non stop,

Maan wants to murder him atop,

But he cant murder his saala at any cost,

Kya kare he has only one and other is in jail to rot,

Geet thinking why is driver not showing his face,

Thinking must be maan her brain catches up pace,

Maan talks in English nd gives lucky a Heart attack,

He is so proud that his reputation will be saved coz of this quack,

Teji wants to see BALWANT SINGH'S driving license,

Maan calls Adi to help him out of this nuisance,

Adi comes in disgusise to be saved from pitayi,

But his bad luck specs fall down and he meets Teji bhai,

Ready to be beaten all again,

Saved at the last moment Maan the sane,

So her comes the savior and drags him out,

And adi is thankful for maan being fit and taut'

Geets Dream and Maan's Scream

Maan lying down in the bed thinking about his love and life,

He is sad that he cannot talk to her because of the strife,

He decides he can see her though,

And walks up the mansion on tip toe,

He climbs the ladder to see her sitting on the window sill,

The tears in her eyes make his hearts swell,

She sees him standing next to her with his hand on her cheek and making no whim,

He asks her if she cannot live without him why does she separate herself from him,

She is shocked to see him there,

He addresses himself as "tumahara maan" upon being questioned,

And asks when she loves him so much why this separation,

She answers coz he has hurt her so much and given her so much pain,

And from the truth of it she cannot refrain,

She cant forgive him this easily whatever happens,

He agrees to it but asks her about her love and passion,

She refuses that she loves him anymore,

Though her eyes tell a story of a different galore,

She could not meet his eyes when she lies to him,

Though she tries her best to hide the the hurt and pain within,

He senses it all and pushes her against the wall to be pinned,

She pushes him back and wakes up with a start,

Just to realize it was a dream not a fact of her heart,

She gets up to walk into the room,

When she feels faint and is about to fall,

Maan sees it and screams for her without a stall,

His screams are heard by JUGNU mama,

Who rushes to the spot the see the hungama,

Maan rushes and catch her in her arms,

And she feels safe and faints in his embrace with aaraam'

Precap:

Teji comes there aksing whts happening,

And the new promo is ultra shocking,

Lets hope they go back home happy happy,

Or we will have to bear the torture of lucky,

Lets wait and watch the show on Monday,

Coz sadly and happily tom is Sunday

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mchopra thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Finally finished..sry for being so late...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks for the update!! ooooh...so he held her when she fell? ☺️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thank you, it takes skill to write a poem on that!
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Thank you for the poetic updates love it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thank you for the special update...
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thanx so much for the update....it really takes grear skill to write a poetic update.....loved the last line particularly.....,
She feels safe ......fsints with aaram.....too good..... 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I simply love ur poetic updates on Saturdays.......needs a lot of telent to write the episode down in this form.......i especially liked the last bit......"

"Maan rushes and catch her in her arms,

And she feels safe and faints in his embrace with aaraam'


Superbly written with so much feeling.........thanx a lot once again....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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shreya,

Congratulations on the poetic update. 👍🏼

ps - how many times do you see the episode before you write the update. 😃
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@nanny: Thnks girl...it does take some time//but all ur comments mke it worth it...sacchi,..
@usha: Just once at 9:30 or 11...if needed..if i have to quote dialogues then i need the youtube videos coz when he is saying the dialogue only then can i write it down..if i love the epi then its innumearble no of times..hehe..

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