*~ DreamGirl~*AVINA FF#2.Thread#2,*link post:2* - Page 47

Hello everyone, thank you for the support.. I will meet you here hopefully like this with your support, there are so many reasons for me to end this FF, and only two reason for continuing…(one: I dreamed more, before ending it, two: the readers response).. believe it or not, if I count the reasons for not continuing it, the weightage of that side will be way more than this two reasons… But as I am getting very good responses, I am giving value to that than any other reasons… so I thank you for that support ..

sugarandspice

didi, sorry for not comenting for soo long, but i was reading. i read all and loved them. old radhika is coming back, and dev will get back his radhika. loved all the parts and please update ASAP

No sorry yaar.. If you are reading and liking it then please do acknowledge it, that's all. But should be your decision dear., not a forceful response. So no worries, ok. I have seen your like buttons almost with all the updated part, so Vasha you don't need to ask sorry dear.. yes old Radhika is coming back… but old Radhika is not just the girl who was loving Dev blindly, she had her own likes, her own small small dreams, that's where I want to take her, don't know, I want her to be herself back, I don't know what is meant by that, but yes, I am heading somewhere , which is still a cloudy picture, need to get there to see it clearly.. so let see.. thanks dear for your time to comment.

v3gradev09

Wow mind-blowing updates! Love the latest one and I feel so bad for radhika, dev please cheer her up! (:

Thanks v3gradev09. Radhika, yes, she changed, if anything not changed is her love for Dev, but otherwise her daily routines itself changed, so, it may take some time, I want her to dream again but living in this reality…. Thanks buddy

radhika5

This was a treat after a long day---and love your comments too--
Many a times you really go in to the feel of your FF and take us in to that feel too, through your comments...
Although actions sometimes speak louder than words---they can be misconstrued and therefore --ultimately the words need to be said---
As you said lot has happened between Dev and Radhika--unknowingly it may be--and in spite of their love for each other, --the needs were different...they both are hurt and once you are in that state, it may take a while to open up--I see that with your Radhika. She will be cautious---but I am sure with Dev's caring and love--she will come out....

And this Dev of yours---I like him more everyday--the little things he does--shows his love..is just so lovable........--but again as you said, he needs to be there for Radhika emotionally too....and now after traversing this path--he understands her....

He still has an important decision to make--what will be his future--what will be their future---He has to be happy with his decision and not feel he has to choose between Radhika and his career....

The whole "pinching" episode, along with the flashback was very cute..nice to see a little spark in Radhika--especially with her interaction with Dev---and the blushing Dev was just too cute (especially needed that today after the heart wrenching CB episode)>......and will Radhika ever tell him about Surender's past?.....

Looking forward to Radhika-Dadi interaction--will she talk about Sita and Urmila with Dadi?...

I can't wait for RaDev to go back to the meadows of Chandenpur, with the flowing river and the butterflies--and all the beauty---

And Lechu---she really lightens up the atmosphere...just since she is back, the whole mood has changed--the teasing, the prank---

And Surender sleeping taking a nap--.....yes men are very blessed that way--they can take a nap anytime, anywhere...

Are you ready for more treat.. I don't know whether I can call it as a treat.. but only radev moment with their talk and their inner thoughts… the support is working, pulling me back here.. he he … maybe the next part will be little of those words that you were waiting for, don't know how much I was able to bring it out, but yes, Radhika is trying hard, so let see how much the care from Dev can bring her out. You know what, the pinching episode, it helped me so much to relax myself, and it guided me to next part.. so I hope now it has some more meaning than just a fun episode.. so read and tell me..ok..

chalhov

Devika a light hearted naughty and cute update touching the small cute points Dev worried about his unborn baby when traveling on the bad road Radhika pinching Dev Dev feeling shy and Lechu teasing and Surinder napping and Radhika looking at dev face and not saying I am fine OK Will the nature and Chandenpur partially make Radhika talk

Thanks chalhov.. ha ha.. little naughty episode, where our dev forgot himself for few minutes.. he he … ..maybe this time dev will get mad by hearing to radhika's 'I am fine " slog.. I think he is already, so only he is giving that warning stares when she about to utter that word and she is changing it with a "better' or "ji" slog.. ha ha… nature, that's what I am also waiting for.. how she will react.. because she was silent when she came , she didn't feel like running around.. remember she used to call and used to run around on her heels around, this time, she refused to take a small walk even, she preferred that closed room, than the open air… so let see will she the nature the ssame way, she was looking at it earlier… but next is only radev….. he he he he

anu17

di love this part as always...wow like the fight of Lechu and Dev...its gr8............I think RaDev will spend good time together in chandenpur......
di superb and waiting for the next part.................

radev will spend time together.. um..um.. let me think,,,, think,,, think…. Maybe.. maybe they will be back to their old self.. but I know what will be next part.. it is only radev.. hopefully you will like it… lechu and Dev.. I love them too, I like sisters when they annoy their bro's. I used to get nice scolding from my mom too.. those days are gone, now all are serious around me, so I am also trying hard to pretend to be one.. but mostly I won't fit in that category, even my eldest daughter is more serious than me… sometimes when she advice me, I ask her, are you the mom or I am … even she made me to cry one day with her so called big advice. But tell you, she was right, as I was little in my mad world, so… cheers to bro's and sis

laxmi_avinafan

very touching update but i liked dev more than radhika you have done it very well Devika loved it this part so much you have done it in a very nice way , A shy smile appeared on his lips, and he turned his face away to hide from his family. But then suddenly the lines reappeared thinking: did anyone saw it? did dad '. Ye, no , how can he see, did he turned back, did he, no chance. But then the lines disappeared with next thought: even if someone see also, what is there to hide, it is my baby, why should I feel shy on it, or should I? did she? But then why should she, it is me, then.In those lines he is showing very shying & caring for radhika so beautifully.

updated part 96.. page 56.

very nice & touching update thanks

You did great in bringing out the complexity of Radhika's mind set--her relationship with Sushma made it possible for the "dam to finally burst".....
Loved Radhika's "monologue"----yes, she did not connect with her baby--as in her mind she was trying to disconnect with everything----something both of them had dreamed of together...

its feel good after reading ur update,its very emotional and takes us to another world and gives tips to face our life calmly peacefully

SO radhika told to sushma buva and dev also listened to that hope dev will be able to bring his radhika back soon and live their life like before

Thanks dear.. ha ha…. So you love our Dev more than Radhika.. let me see what you will say with next part.. um..maybe still it will be Dev only.. I think the reason is it is AVi…. Ha ha… thank you for appreciating my little talks… that just comes with that moment, the talk or the thought.. both.. so , thanks dear…. And yes Radhika told to sushma buava, and dev heard it.. so he heard her mind thru her words .. and maybe she will say it out to him too, he tried by asking her to tell a story to him too, but failed.. so let see how he will be able to bring it out…. Thanks for your time dear…

vijayarjun

HELLO DEVIKA LOVELY UPDATE.THANKS 4 PRAISING MY LANKAN TEAMS.AM GLAD WE WERE ABLE 2 REACH THE FINALS.WE PLAYED WELL.CONGLATS 2 INDIA TEAM.AS NEIGHIBORS WE ALWAYS HAVE BEEN IN GOOD CONTRACT.COS MY PARENTS R 4M BHUJ N I AM BORN IN LOVELY LANKA SOIL.AM PROUD BE A SRI LANKAN.WAITING RADEV TO OPEN UP 2 EACH OTHER.ALL THE BEST 2 U .U R A AMAZING WRITER.KEEP IT UP THE GOOD WORK.

Wow.."I am born in lovely Lanka soil' .. I love it, in my native language there is an old song " bharatham ennal parin naduvil kevalm oru pidi mannallo, jana kodikal namme namay mattiya jenma graham allo".. bharath is a small land under the big world map, but that small land is the birth- home for millions .. same way, it is not how big is a country, it is that small space where we born cherish the beauty of it… where do we all belong.. thanks vijayarjun for sharing it… yes they may open up, in their own way .. soon. Hope you will like it…

DAIRY25

Its becoming more and more difficult with every update to find words that not appreciate your great work as well as present our true feelings..this is what we get from this part ..INSTEAD OF THINKING ABOUT WHAT YOU ARE MISSING... SOMETIMES IT IS GOOD TO THINK ABOUT WHAT YOU HAVE ...you present perfect picture of a family along with all emotions to which every reader can easily relate ..not for single second we feel as we are reading any story .. it comes as we are travelling with them ..THANK YOU ..

Hi buddies.. so nice of you dear…. Ye, don't say it is difficult and run away , ok.. I am loving the quotes so much…. Instead of thinking about what you are missing, sometimes it is good to think about what we have… same like "don't live in your past, don't get anxious about your future, try to live today, because the past is a memory, future is unpredictable, but present is wht you are and where you are.. so jiyo is do pal mei, jo sirf hamare sath ho…. he he…. I know you are rolling down on that ground reading my sayari… lekin what is that old song "mei …sayar tho nahi….magar….. " ha ha ha… oh dear… ye, thanks buddies..

vinianil

Devika i couldn't comment for last two episodes as i was little busy but Thanks for PM dear...

Lovely update Devika....Dev and family taking care of Radhika...lechu and DEv's talk was very interesting Lechu's tease and Dev's shy smile and Surender 's nap liked all parts...

When Radhika pinched Dev the way he reacted and Surender's teases loved this part a lot...Dev was talking to himself that part brought smile on my face...

I hope Dev and Radhika will have good time in Chandenpur...

Expecting a nice conversation between Dadi and Radhika...

Edarithu!! Vanakkom suhurthe.. kure nalayallo kandittu.. evide poyi… (look who is here!! Welcome friend.. havin's seen you for long… where where you?).. ok thanks busy girl… but I am glad it didn't take you so long to come back, otherwise I should send my doves with the message… I thought you are taking a nap like my surrender, he he… glad you came back… hopefully you will be awake for next part, which will be coming later today… so catch you .. bakki vannittu parayame, eppo ethiri thirakka, orungi erunno...

radhev

A VERY SWEET COOL LIGHT ENJOYABLE UPDATE

SO as u say u write what comes in mind at that time ,it was showing u were out of burden,free from all tensions and it made us so also during reading update

that pinch,i was laughing also with all others and was happy for radhika's returning back and our dev is so so so good so so so caring he made us love him more and more with each update

keep it up and its don't need to tell WAITING FOR THE NEXT

thaaaanks… yes dear, I write as it comes to my mind and fingers as I type.. so by any reason anything got delete unexpectedly, then the rewriting portion will be totally different… many times that happened.. I can't even think the same dialogues after that moment.. so… out of burden,, yes, I really needed that light part,, so that I can move forward…. I am so glad to see that laugh on your face dear, it won't be with next part, maybe it will bring different emotion.. hopefully, a sigh relief… let see… yes, next part coming soon..

suwin

Lovely update Devika....dev's caring and loving towards radhika is so cute...enjoy reading all the interaction between the family........

thanks dear for the pm .....looking forward to the next part

thanks for liking the interaction part chechy…. Anything to bring that smile on your face, caring and loving Dev. I think that's why we all are in love with this character DEV (and AVI defined it beautifully thru his face, his eyes, his look, his smile, his each facial muscle, that went so deep in most of us, to love this character more)….you welcome for accepting my PM.. he he… next part… ufffff… coming up soon…

imarti_rubi

Groupbie

yes diiiii i mback ..................really nice update..... yeh nail ka chakkar kya hai

nail ka chakkar… you know what comes to my mind "ye, ilu ilu kya hei, ilu ilu" have you heard of that song… Ilu ka mathlab I LOVE You.. ha I love you.. so Nail ka chakkar kya hei? I want you to imagine…. He he he.. so I am leaving some place for you to go wild with your imagination too….. I want all of you to dream once I finish this FF, and then we won't be needing another one, or maybe you all will start writing one…. WOW ! great na..

sweetfamily

Devika di an other v good update...loved the way dev showed unknown concern towards rads and his baby and also smiled shyly after realizing that..also loved the nail mark part...cont soon will be waiting for the next

Ayesha

Oh dear… your PM list is full, delete few.. I send again, but it bounced back, so hopefully you will read it here, or you might have noticed it already.. so delete few from the inbox, ok… thanks for liking the update dear…. Nail mark.. he he.. I am feeling shy too… yes continuing with next part .. soon

abhilasha_dream

Poor Poor Dev !! was so lost in protecting his wife and the baby that he forgot the atmosphere where he was and for that recd a pinch frm Radhika... OUch that hurts !!

and even after the pinch poor guy was nt able to comprehend y he was punished so bitterly for long moments..

What a lovely and naughty memory he was getting which was again interrupted by the equally naughty (in a different sense ) Lechu... Poor Poor Dev can't even think about his wife in peace.. LECHU next tym no interrupting specially in these type of NAUGHTY scenes, we readers will not SPARE u, if u do so..

Yes abhi.. it hurts ouchhhh but I want him to ask her again, to get those words out from her, to see her reaction, because it took him to their private moment, so he also want to know whether she thought about it.. right… let see.. and yes, I heard you.. no LECHU or anyone to come in between their private moment… sorry, except the little one inside, we will take her away too once the baby is show his/her face to the world… then it will be only radev, but till then, ou little one grab little attention… from dad and mom..maybe more from dad.. he he he.. so ready for radev part.. coming up soon..

zorinatm

very nice

thank you friend… hope you will like next part too..

gauranitai

i loved 2dya epi! Radev scene was mega cute an adorable an dev teasing Lechu was so cute. it reminded me of d fights i hav wit my bro. ur story's goin great. keep up the good work!!! ........

so thank you… radev scene mega cute… um… thanks.. hair in position , happy for it… the rememberence… that's it… thanks… yes, I win… glad you had those days to cherish forever… thanks for appreciating my work dear…

sweetrubi

hi chechi
thanks 4 ur update.....i was busy with exms,thats y i didn't commented...........
so hope that chandenpur will bring back our old cheerful radika......waitng 4 her complete transformation into old rads.....
hope dev will also stay back with her.............

thanks molus.. vallppozhum engane onnu mugham kanikku ketto… I hope the exams went fine and you are free now… thaks for showing that patience with me dear, yes Radhika will return to her old self, hopefully…. Dev will be with our Radhika only.. no doubt… but how// will depend on his decision.. so let see… thanks dear and welcome back..

palak13

sorry di for not replying back for ages read the parts that i missed and i loved it i hope radhika is herself again be being in chandanphur as there seems to be a lttle improvement but still want the old radhika back update soon and thanks for the pm

thanks palak , good to see you here dear.. yes I am still here for some more time, in this dreamland.. am waiting for the safer exit… so.. thanks for liking it, yes, once she comes back to her self, the story will end.. so… I am fully spirited to get there with the support… thanks and no sorry… just give that smiley face, that will be great…

thank you so much for the PM andThe following 32 member(s) liked the above post:

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for liking part 97..

ok friends.. so next part coming up soon, after my dental appointment.. so painful, just went for a cleaning and they did something bad, and can't tolerate it anymore… so will be back quick to post he update..

so next update… little words and little action for few those who are waiting to unburden it..….thoughts and realization for those who waiting for those past moments, connecting dots & untangling knots for who actively reading it…. All in one moment.. radev moment.. coming up after the dentist fix my aching tooth…need to go.. bye, catch you later today… it is ready.. so cath you all….

Devika.

Part 98

He climbed the stairs fast and closed the door quickly as he entered into their room.

He looked at the empty bed, where her duppatta was laying in a wavy manner and tightening his forehead he scanned the area , and it got stuck as he saw her figure standing near the window with the towel in her hand, which was drying her neck down to her arms, with the gaze fixed on outside.

Dev took his soft steps near to her, and then reaching behind, he wrapped his arms around her waist line and resting his chin over her shoulder he asked: what are you looking at?

Radhika jerked with his action , but then comprehending back she just said: nothing

Dev: no, you were looking at something

Radhika holding onto his arms that was resting her waist line: Nothing

Dev: then tell me what you were thinking about?

Dev: no, you were thinking about something, or some one!

Radhika throw the towel on her shoulder and turned and looked at his posture and held his hand in concern, asking: kya huva?

Radhika : dikhayiyena, kya huva?

Dev trying to hide his smile and enjoying her concern for him : vo

Dev with broken words: vo,...... its hurting

Radhika: what is hurting? I don't see anything!

Radhika coming back behind him, throw that towel onto the rack and went closer to him and tightening her forehead she asked: show me what is it?

Dev: chodiyena, I told you it is nothing, and you take rest, I will come later...

And in a very serious way she said : show me what is it?

Radhika forcefully took his hand in hers, giving a burning stare at him, Dev looked at her with his poor masoom chehra.... and Radhika returning her gaze back, looked at his hand, and she didn't see anything.

Radhika's facial expression changed from that burning stare to remorseful face and her eyes dropped down fractionally unable to meet his.

Her sudden change of facial expression brought light dark clouds over his bubbling heart of Dev, feeling that loosening grip on his hand , he said: why did you pinch me so hard? As if completing the the sentence that he just said

Dev felt some relief and asked again with a complaint face : you don't know, it really did hurt me, and dad also saw your nail mark and he teased me, and then to make her believe he continued: and you know how embarrassing it was for me to face him, all because of your action na, you should have told me clearly what you want , instead of pinching. Taking his hands off from hers and turning towards the bed he continued: at least you should have given me a clue that you are going to pinch, then I won't be making that noise na. so only everyone came to know.

Radhika : I was eating that apple piece because mom gave me and I didn't want to disappoint her and I tried to tell you ...to take your hands away and you were not even listening to me. Coming near to him.

Radhika: how many times I called you..

Radhika sitting next to him: I know, I tried my level best, but

Radhika: I tried to move my hand within you..

Radhika: then I tried with touching on your leg..

Radhika: I don't know, and then you tried to make those comments and made mom feel bad...

Dev interupted suddeny : when did I make mom to feel bad

Dev: that is right na, i saw you trying to tell me somehting...

She sat with her dropped head unable to continue

Radhika looked at him!

Dev: heina, what is wrong with it, I was worried about both your condition, then I forgot to look around and see what is going in your mind, I am sorry...

Dev with a wet voice: No Radhika, I am glad you did that, I prefer that pain instead of seeing you silent. Yes it did hurt me, but that pain gave me so much happiness too.

Radhika looked at him in question?

Saying that he just wrapped his arms around her shoulder and took her into his arms. Radhika rested her hands on his chest. Closing his eyes he tried to feel her closer to him, he tightened his wrap completely taking her in his arms and then with rolling of few drops he said near her ears: I wish you pinched me earlier , just like this , and wake me up before,....... and brought me back to reality to realize what is happening in your mind and around you.

Radhika was unable to continue further..., but her arms just moved and sliding across his sides she wrapped it around him, and as the words failed to say further... she just tightened her arms around him, her cheek was touching his skin in that open part of that blue shirt and he felt the wetness as she let it go from her.

The wetness of his skin brought him back to senses and he realized what he just said and what she replied. Unknowingly it went so deeper than he thought. He just made it up to see her reaction but knowingly or unknowingly she spoke to him with this incident. He wanted to move back to see her face, to wipe those tears, and to tell her not to cry......

She didn't say anything back but her hand just moved up to his back of neck and just pulled on those short hairs.

As the time passed, Dev slowly released her soft lips and rested his over hers , his fluttery heart was not allowing him to move away, and her hand just rested on his upper back and she tried to gasp for the breath and suddenly he just fused his lips with hers and then releasing it he placed another peck near the corner of her lips. He didn't get the satisfaction as unknowingly he was thirsting for it for long, for this moment, to be close to her. Their faces rested onto each others, with the eye to eye, nose to nose and lips to lips.. they felt that aura of that intimacy circling them....

He felt the happiness inside, he felt he is getting his life back....It had been so long, since she held him tight in her hold, her lips were frozen and he forced his hand to get it open , but all his effort was a failure at the end, her lips remained frozen, .... but ...... but this moment, where she gave up herself loving him, he felt the warmth of her love, her lips parted for him to feel it, and her hands moved tight on him to bring him more closer, more deeper. he loved this moment ,

Whereas Radhika was feeling some relief, somewhere inside her , the moment let away that heavy burden she was carrying inside for long, she lost the pleasure of that intimacy in that long run of silence, she felt the irritation as he tried to pull her towards him, her mind asked many questions inside her,

.......Is my thoughts were wrong, what I am seeing different now that I gave up myself into his arms. Is this called true love, but I loved him every minute of my life, with every beat of my heart, with every breath that I took, then why I went cold, and now why I want him to feel me, or is it was me who wanted to feel him, is it he who awaken me, or did I awake myself, did I starved for his touch or did I starved for his love........

......He loved me so much, or as mom said, maybe he trusted me so much like Urmila that he never felt me away from him, I was within him all the time and he wanted me to realize it to myself, but that won't give me any peace, I wanted him to listen to me, I wanted him to smile at me, I wanted him to wait for me, I wanted him to hug me just like a friend, and I wanted him to love me madly, ha, I want him to love me, I want him to, I was selfisha dn I am selfish.... her heart cried out silently , and it came out as another drop of tear from her eye which just touched his soft lips.

The eyebrows were drawn to the center, and he tightened his forehead muscle and slowly he opened his eyes to see her silent cry. Wiping it off, he touched her chin, requesting her to open those eyes and slowly her lashes parted from each other and she opened her eyes to meet his......

The silence engulfed them and her dried eyes slowly dropped down with a shy smile on her lips. Dev's inner heart smiled seeing her hiding. His heart skipped few beats.

Radhika didn't say anything.

He just got up from the bed and made her to lay on that bed comfortably. He looked at her, and her eyes just stared at him.

He didn't feel like leaving her alone like that and he was able to see that in her eyes too. Coming around the bed frame , he crawled next to her. She just looked at him as he came near again. Propping up his head on his arm he touched her cheek with other hand. Stroking on them softly he said: do you know what I was thinking when I saw those marks on my hand

Radhika looked at him curiously

Dev with a smile: you only tell me, what I might have thought about...?

Radhika just shrugged her shoulder as if she couldn't guess

Dev: try na

Radhika : I don't know

His hand stroked down to her neck to the side to behind her ears and then just started rubbing on those soft lobes : try to remember Radhika

Radhika: I don't know...

Taking his hand away and laying on his back , he said: it was a moment, the remembrance of it can bring a shy smile on your lips and flutter my heart beat. Taking her hand in his he continued looking up at the ceiling: which can be shared only between us, and the memory of it can bring that warmth to our mind.

Radhika also looked up at the ceiling and just listened to his talk..

Then again lifting up his upper body and moving over to her , wrapping his arm around her shoulder , he rested his face near her neck space and softly said : In short, I just want to love you Radhika, and that love grow each day with passing of time, and I want you to be near me. And then his hand slide down to touch her tummy, he stroked over his little one inside. and then as if remembering something, he looked up Rahdika's face and then moving his head down to her tummy : and I love my little princess, sorry beta,

Radhika was trying hard to listen to him but she was unable to make out anything.

Dev continued: I know beta, I did hurt your mamma , but not anymore, now your papa knows na, I know your mamma very well now, but you need to help me to change her, change her to come back to papa the same way she was. see if it was our old Radhika, do you know how she might have behaving?.. do you want to hear, ok then listen

"she will be pulling on my ear and force me up to face her and ask me "what are you talking to your baby, your baby comes second only, you should talk to me, oh oh.. , you listen to me, with a smile he said : then papa just have to say um... um.... um .....with all her talks, doesn't need to say anything back. Oops, I need to , right, so only she felt bad,...

Radhika just nodded her head . Dev placed another kiss over her forehead and then giving a smile , got up. He went and washed his face and adjusted his hair well. He saw her eyes on him as he moved around grooming himself..

Radhika just gave a smile with that question!

Dev: I know, I am..... ok Radhika, take rest , ok

Radhika just nodded her chin down agreeing with his comment. She saw him walking away and unknowingly her arm went down and stroked over tummy "what was he talking to you, are you really hearing him, can you hear? Can you hear what I am thinking?' her thought flied along with her baby, and then shifting to her side, she closed her eyes for few minutes'.