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Ramisa

@Ramisa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#131

OMG ITZ SOOOOO NOT TRUE.....:(....DIS CANT Happen....aft readin dis im totally numb....how can da f**king loafers beat my baby sooo badly....hell noo!!

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anumeha khanna

@anumeha_rajat

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Posted: 14 years ago

#132

u brought tears in my eyes yaar..........

.i really started crying reading this.....

gosh hw u wrote this.............

very well written.........but heart wrenching..............

all the best for ur exams.........

thnx for the pm............

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jiyaa_m

@jiyaa_m

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#133

i will not comment anything about ending

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Sonya

@Ianoconic

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#134

hey dear,

loved all the part...

fab work..

thanks for the pm..

love

sonu

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Samica Mehta (Mrs.Mallik)

@ksgforever10

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#135

hmmmm...m sowie to dissapoint u guyzzzzzz.....!!!!🤔

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sweety7395

@sweety7395

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Posted: 14 years ago

#136

hey the part was so sad......i cant believe armaan died......they beat him up so badly......but the way you wrote it was really good

thanks for the pm

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unknown.

@unknown.

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#137

hii

da last part was sad :(

but ur ff was awesome

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shaaz_91

@shaaz_91

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#138

hey
amazing ff................just got it a while ago frm dat ff competition for IF magazine.................read it one go
it waz literally paining me 2 read dat
u r c'riously an awesome amazing writer
hats of 2 u👏
n d way u showed AR's cond specially ridz ....... it waz as if even i cud feel der pain
u explained everything sooooooooooooooo beautifully..............i just luvd it
n d last words frm armaan wer sooo touching.......can't really express wat my heart felt dat moment i read his last words
wonderfull ff
well done
tc
shaaz

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