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-pixie-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#61

Way to go Nadz and Undisclosed! Whatay lovely Holi....

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Aditi

@adoremevirgo

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#62

i am not gud at FF....never tried my hand at it....but i am enjoying every bit here....thanx for the pm...

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

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Posted: 14 years ago

#63

lovely update..........

atleast Geet serial is not going great guns, atleast your writings will help us rekindle the romance..tx

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Pallavi

@QueenbeePallavi

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#64

mr/ ms. undisclosed you write fantastically!!! wud love to read more from you and that was a great episode in 3 parts!!!

keep it up and HAPPY HOLI!!!

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#65

@Nadai Why does Annie hav to always enter at wrng tym

If Maan culd read Geet's thought toh kya baat hoti hehehehehe😉

Maan is full talli

Now Anni cum or Dadi he wont leave Geet

Geet wil hav to run to safe her life frm drunken Maan now 😉

Continue soon

@Undisclosedsorry dnt knw ur name

Ur 1st part was fab

Esp Maan calling Dev Rat hehehehehe

I drunken state also he was thnking Dev was the reason behind Geet's smile

Loved how he was trying to get his Geet back

N he succeed

Becahri Geet phas gayi😉

Hop u write more OS's

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divan_arshi

@divan_arshi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#66

Ahhhhhhhhhhh!!😳
😳
u guys made my day... now holi seems to mch more colorful..😉😳

very very well written..loved d way u guys wrote... 😳😳

Nadia waiting for u 2 complete d part 😳

Thanks alot for writing and PM 😊

N Happy Holi to u guys 😉

Edited by kash_arsh - 14 years ago

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RiMa_972

@RiMa_972

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#67

Oh My My! I'm intoxicated without the Bhaang after reading this! @Undisclosed.......that was......haaayee..so so wonderful! You have put down Maan's feelings and passion and essence so very well and it was hot and romantic! Nadia...waiting eagerly for your continuation😍 It looks very promising and smoldering Hot!

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579908

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Posted: 14 years ago

#68

Come on peeps, I'm seeing lots of excuses along the lines of 'I'm not good at writing fan fiction'...the purpose of the thread was to share your ideas, even if it's in bullet point format or just a few random sentences !!! 😆

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579908

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Posted: 14 years ago

#69

Part 4

Throughout the celebration Geet was on edge. Sure she had escaped Maan, but knowing his stalker-ish tendencies, she knew he must waiting around the corner, to continue from where he had left off.

She jumped in shock as she felt a hand on her left shoulder.

"Arre Geet, what's wrong, you seem to be on edge dear?" Asked a concerned Dadi.

"Oh it's nothing Dadi" Geet replied plastering a smile on her face.

As Dadi went off to meet and greet other guests. Geet continued looking around for Maan. It was then that she noticed Maan walking up towards her with determination. Even in a state of intoxication, Maan still had that intimidating aura emanating from him.

Geet didn't miss the mischievous and naughty glint in his eyes as Maan was only two steps away from her. Geet turned around in an attempt to escape yet again. But Maan was having none of it.

Grabbing hold of her hand he pulled her back towards him, making her back hit his broad chest.

"Geet" He nuzzled her neck, while everyone around them continued with the celebrations. One hand slyly slipped under pallu to gently stroke her navel, causing Geet to gasp.

"Maan" she sighed, "people are watching!"

"So let them"

To be continued...

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579908

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Posted: 14 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: undisclosed

Marvellous ⭐️

Particularly the ending ☺️

thanks 😆...it was fun to write after you provided the inspiration...can't wait to read the next parts of your drunk maan take...👍🏼

feel free to post any other ideas you might have 😉😆
you have talent for writing my lovely 😊