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Posted: 14 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: muniza75

@ Nadia - Ok i am ready to write 2 lines, but you have to write 2nd part, deal or no deal?



Muniza



Deal... i posted the 2nd part on page 5 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
my ideas???? am numb..lol...numb after reading your part 2!!!

am bad at writing tooo🥱
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Posted: 14 years ago
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......last part
as geet drank maan in she found herself feeling intoxicated herself...she had completely forgotten her sorrows as maan took over her body and mind...he pulled away from her lips as he slowly decreased the suction hold he had on them ...he looked at geet's face to see her eyes closed...she looked as if she had drifted to a pieceful sleep as her mouth formed a slight smile...
maan was still dizzy from the mint liquor...he felt glorious as he recognized the face of the girl laying underneath him...it was his old geet...he had managed to pull her out from the trenches...
as geet lay their soaking in the sensations maan was creating in her...she slowly let her eyes flutter open...maan had by now sat up while still on top of geet with both his hands and knees on either side of her...he looked intently at her waiting for her to make the next move...geet slid her hands up his arms ever so gently...causing maan to shutter in electrifying excitement...
as she reached his shoulders she pulled herself up until she was only a few inches form his face ...maan closed his eyes in anticpation of what she would do...he felt her soft breath hover over his mouth...and then his eyes shot open as he felt geet smear color on his cheeks...she slid from underneath him with the ease of a cat...and the next thing he knew she was making her way to the door...
but again geet underestimated his drunkness...maan grabbed her just in time...pulled her towards him and threw her over his shoulder...he smirked and with a lound clamor slammed the door closed...and made sure geet heard how fiercely he turned the lock...she was now his prisoner and he would make sure that no body could save her...
The End
Edited by undisclosed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Neetu2825



OMG! That was beautiful👏⭐️ Loved it! You portrayed Maan's feelings so perfectly and still left the things to come to our imagination.😳😉




Neetuuuu... missy, I want to see some of your ideas tooooo !!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Lip-a-Licious



Deal... i posted the 2nd part on page 5 😆


Ohh ooh tooooo late, no deal....

@ Nadia - sorry have to go, definitely will come up with something promise.....

You keep continuing your, it's fun to read.....






Muniza



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Posted: 14 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: undisclosed

......last part

as geet drank maan in she found herself feeling intoxicated herself...she had completely forgotten her sorrows as maan took over her body and mind...he pulled away from her lips as he slowly decreased the suction hold he had on them ...he looked at geet's face to see her eyes closed...she looked as if she had drifted to a pieceful sleep as her mouth formed a slight smile...
maan was still dizzy from the mint liquor...he felt glorious as he recognized the face of the girl laying underneath him...it was his old geet...he had managed to pull her out from the trenches...
as geet lay their soaking in the sensations maan was creating in her...she slowly let her eyes flutter open...maan had by now sat up while still on top of her with both his hands and knees on either side of her...he looked intently at her waiting for her to make the next move...geet slid her hands up his arms ever so gently...causing maan to shutter in electrifying excitement...
as she reached his shoulders she pulled herself up until she was only a few inches form his face ...maan closed his eyes in anticpation of what she would do...he felt her soft breath hover over his mouth...and then his eyes shot open as he felt geet smear color on his cheeks...she slid from underneath him with the ease of cat...and the next thing he knew she was making her way to the door...
but again geet underestimated his drunkness...maan grabbed her just in time...pulled her towards him and threw her over his shoulder...he smirked and with a lound clamor slammed the door closed...and made sure geet heard how fiercely he turned the lock...she was now his prisoner and he would made sure that no body could save her...
The End




Marvellous ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Particularly the ending ☺️

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Posted: 14 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: undisclosed

......last part

as geet drank maan in she found herself feeling intoxicated herself...she had completely forgotten her sorrows as maan took over her body and mind...he pulled away from her lips as he slowly decreased the suction hold he had on them ...he looked at geet's face to see her eyes closed...she looked as if she had drifted to a pieceful sleep as her mouth formed a slight smile...
maan was still dizzy from the mint liquor...he felt glorious as he recognized the face of the girl laying underneath him...it was his old geet...he had managed to pull her out from the trenches...
as geet lay their soaking in the sensations maan was creating in her...she slowly let her eyes flutter open...maan had by now sat up while still on top of her with both his hands and knees on either side of her...he looked intently at her waiting for her to make the next move...geet slid her hands up his arms ever so gently...causing maan to shutter in electrifying excitement...
as she reached his shoulders she pulled herself up until she was only a few inches form his face ...maan closed his eyes in anticpation of what she would do...he felt her soft breath hover over his mouth...and then his eyes shot open as he felt geet smear color on his cheeks...she slid from underneath him with the ease of cat...and the next thing he knew she was making her way to the door...
but again geet underestimated his drunkness...maan grabbed her just in time...pulled her towards him and threw her over his shoulder...he smirked and with a lound clamor slammed the door closed...and made sure geet heard how fiercely he turned the lock...she was now his prisoner and he would made sure that no body could save her...
The End


👏👏👏 Lovely, simply lovely, now i will sleep in peace, with such sweet dream of MaanEet....

Thank you and Nadia for making my day 🤗🤗🤗....





Muniza
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
Night Night Muniza 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49

Marvellous ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Particularly the ending ☺️

thanks 😆...it was fun to write after you provided the inspiration...can't wait to read the next parts of your drunk maan take...👍🏼
Edited by undisclosed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
hiiiiiiiii
awesome yaar
loved them
2 good
thanks 4 sharing
thanks 4 da pm

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