AR sesn 2 FF -kshitij ki aur- gulmohar pg 67

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@sami01

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Posted: 14 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: zee10
Dii if RS read your's, shanti di's or rehan's FF.. He might be jelause.. Such mein dii.. He will think ' oh... God why i didn't join sameera, shanti and rehan to my dkp....? '

aww yaar it means a lot

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Posted: 14 years ago

#272

Originally posted by: sami01
aww yaar it means a lot

zeena is right

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Posted: 14 years ago

#273

Originally posted by: anmol2
zeena is right

i was hoping he could give a khatka like styart of my FF and it could have generated curiosity in viewers like leap did..but he is going for somethingelse totaly brreaks my heart par kya karein😭

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Posted: 14 years ago

#274

Originally posted by: savee_k
@sami...wat to say you just know how to get the reader's interest..👍🏼

sooooooo beautifully penned down scenes from vasu..anmol ..ragini.

here you just hit the nail vasu/anmol confrontation scene..

the inner feelings of vasu to let go and hug her son esp when anmol took his nani/mom pic and put it close to his heart but still she turned stone hearted in the end..

how much more vasu will blame anmol for ranveer death?..the way you have described this scene it touches the heart for real and feel anmol's turmoil /pain he was going through at that moment..so very very well written with the exact emotions needed for both in that scene.

ragini/anmol scene.. must say anmol has always had two soothing factor in his life..his daughter tammy and ragini.they always bring a smile on his face...one touch of ragini on his forehead and he just forget his pain and get his smile back..

awww lovely the end scene..everything seems back to normal..he wants his adrak wali chaai and ragini is all smile to get it for him..it did brought a smile on my face too..😊

the one person he wanted most to ask him to come back home was vasu and she did so though a bit harshly ..now i just hope things change once he is back in agra..

ragini is more than happy as hope is there that life is going to change once anmol is back home with her/tammy..

superb job as usual..will wait for next update as its really getting much more interesting now..😊

keep it up...👏👏👏👏👏.

btw the creatives should read the FF and get wat potential is there for a season 2 in angini's story and the rajvansh family.

savee ist always treat to read ur replies thank you dear they r treasure sachi....

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Posted: 14 years ago

#275

Originally posted by: zee10
Dii if RS read your's, shanti di's or rehan's FF.. He might be jelause.. Such mein dii.. He will think ' oh... God why i didn't join sameera, shanti and rehan to my dkp....? '

Zee so sweet of you to have said that
I think RS and DKut has a lot of storylione from all the FF's written here,
They can use that and bring more twists and give us a complete Angini story !!

I am sure if they visit our forum they will get enough story like to kick start season two !

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@sami01

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Posted: 14 years ago

#276

guys sorry for delay but am updating this week and moving story back to agra...

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bhondu2010

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Posted: 14 years ago

#277

Wow I am so excited..
Where is Shanti ji she has'nt upfdated her FF
I hope you can give interesting twists,...

Waiting for Anmol back in Agar and Ragini getting closer to himn

He deserves happiness in your season tweo !!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#278

Originally posted by: sami01
guys sorry for delay but am updating this week and moving story back to agra...

waw...... then must get rady to read... dii.... please don't forget to update... this week...

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Posted: 14 years ago

#279

Originally posted by: zee10

waw...... then must get rady to read... dii.... please don't forget to update... this week...

pucca re god willing

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Posted: 14 years ago

#280

a preview to tomorow episode😆

i know am bad with capital B....but kal ko I wil pucca do ful dose......😉

yeh chota sa i hope aap ko acha lage.....

thoda surprise hai is mein....😆

Ragini left the room with a smile on her face,forgetting the outburst of Vasu ,though while making tea she started to think and suddenly she felt very small,she remebered his constant back aches and neck pains,how she would find him half sitting almost and trying to comfortable on that fasionable sofa in their bedroom.

She remembered how she had chosen new sofa about 6 months after her marrige to anmol;she wanted sofa to match decor of room.forgetting the old sofa was bit more comfy though old fashioned,but he had just smiled and had not complanied even once about her choice.Why couldn't she see? She was angry with herself and banged the counter with sudden hand movement....

Beta chai ka pani sookh raha hai...

oh dai maaa haan doodh daalti hoon...

she put milk in tea and drifted back again......

She tried to think when had she thought of his comforts as a wife,but he had stood beside her like a pillar ;but now something was different about him,she was noticing some subtle changes,specialy towards her.She was getting glimpse of a new Anmol,a bit distant and also very determined.a shiver ran down her spine when she remebered how he had pulled her into his arms to dance with him,showing perfect harmony to everyone,yet daring her to step back.This challenge in him was something new........

yeh lo lejao beta..

o chai ubal gayi thee ....

Beta tum theek to ho na.....a soft old face had so much sincerity and warmth,Ragini's eyes watered and she tried to open her mouth but suddenly her throat was tight with unshed tears and she swallowed...

she nodded abruptly and gestured towards study......and left ...

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Anmol saw Ragini leaving the room and once door clicked shut his expressions changed back to weary and thoughtful.He dropped the file on table and started to think about life in general.Why was he feeling this restless now a days.Why had Ragini's total surrender become so important.When had he decided that he wanted all or nothing. He wanted complete trust and her heart.Was he aiming for impossible.? He sat back in chair and closed his eyes.A film of his life started to run at full speed.

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Ragini entered the room and saw Anmol laying on chair ,so still ,she was mesmerized by perfection and sheer magnetism of his features.She felt hypnotized and drawn towards him.She slowly put the tea tray on side table and bent close to his face trying to study his handsome features,in soft glow of lamp and monlit light his face looked ethereal,she saw lines accross his forehead and frowned...are they new she thought....soft lines only visible under artificial light and close scrutiny.she felt uncomfortable,is it stress and may be we all of us.she sighed and lifted her finger......

anmol had heard the moment Ragini had enetered the room ,her soft fragnace was filling the room and making him dizzy,yet he forced himself to keep his eyes shut,he had felt her come closer to him and now he could feel her breath on him,she was so close and he had to stay still and breath normaly.

Suddnely his control snapped and he opend his eyes to find her face inches away and she was tracing those lines on his forehead,as if trying to erase any signs of worry and stress.Her face had intent expresson and soemthing shifted inside his heart.

She felt a change in him and stilled...their eyes met.....and he saw what she could not say from her lips, he saw her concern for him,he saw her need and her struggles......

wo chai layi thee...maine socha aap so gaye...

she tried to pull her finger away ,he held her hand and softly kissed it,his eyes never leaving hers, branding her as his...forever his....

he suddenly let go and his face transformed into so normal that she blinked in confusion for a second....did she imagine all that......

he smiled knowingly and said

Raat bahut ho gayi hai tum jao

haan jaati hoon she blurred and turned away

he held her hand one more time,her heart fluttered and she held her breath

Ragini Thanks

and he let go of her hand...and saw her hurried seff leaving the room...and smiled and started to whistle softly to tune of...

Wo subha kabhi to aayegi wo subha kabhi to aayegi....

Edited by sami01 - 14 years ago