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After that horrible incident… ABHIJEET and DAYA tried their BEST to came out with some information about the CULPRIT…. Using every SINGLE aspect… every CLUE…. every NEW arrival in the CITY…. But found nothing…. ACP asked every time about their investigation procedure…. But there was nothing much to tell him…. the remains of that incident showed it glimpse on every member attitude… DAYA became so QUIET and TENSED…. His mind still not came on his regular SHARP shine….. KAJAL instantly got destructed and lost her attention after that incident….  SACHIN regular touched his fingers on that WOUND… which had dried now….. the whole team tried at their side…. But still their hands were empty……

07 April 2011

Ting tong….. ting tong…

DAYA: aa raha hun….. kaun hay???

VOICE: courier….

DAYA opened the door…. Took courier…. When he tried to sign on receiving… courier guy pen was not working…. DAYA entered inside to take the pen…. Suddenly his head felt a high pain…. and the courier slipped from his hand and total black out…. The courier guy checked his pockets… turned off his cell which was on the table…. Took that courier which he brought from the floor and moved outside… he dialed the number…

On way to bearue…. He felt some unusual…. He got a call…. He picked it up…

VOICE: Sir main 56/F VICTORIA ROAD say bol raha hun.... yahan courier lay ker aaya tha… wo sahib ander gayey…. Aur ek ceekh ki aawaz aayii…  abhi tak lauty nahi…. Main bahar khara hun…. Kya ander jaon!!!

ABHIJEET: nahi… ruko… main aa raha hun….

He suddenly dropped the call…. He knew that it DAYA's residence address…. He called at bearue and immediately called them to be at DAYA's residence with Ambulance….. he reached at DAYA's house…. Saw a courier guy… who looked very scared…. ABHIJEET instantly step down… rushed there

ABHIJEET: tum bahar raho… yahein…. abhi Ambulance aa rahi hay….

He moved inside…. DAYA was on the floor…. blood came out from his head backside… he touched his head… feeling unusual and fell down on him without any voice…. Courier guy took out his cell…. Delete the call and powered off it… then took out his watch and checked his pockets as well… took out everything and placed it on the side table.…

 All the team rushed there with Ambulance…. Nobody seen by them… door was bit opened… they saw ABHIJEET coat and all rushed inside without hesitation…. After their entrance… the door locked automatically… and all smelt a bad smell…. and one by one out of the conscious state…..

Here courier guy came on Ambulance side and casually talking with the Hospital staff…  gave cigarettes to the driver and two ward boys… they smoked it and in few seconds…. totally vanished….. the courier guy whistles…. 4 men came out… took all CID members one by one… putted them on Ambulance and moved….  He took out all cells…  checked every member call list… sms… but found nothing so powered off them and placed all four cells or any metallic thing on ABHIJEET jeep dashboard…. The three hospital staff left by the culprits lying at the road side….

CID bearue got a call… nobody was there to pick it up…. So the security guard entered and picked up the call… ACP was there on the other side… the guard told him that due to a call all team moved very fast…. ACP hanged the call and again dialed ABHIJEET cell number… the cell was powered off… he again tried every member cell but the result was same… his intentions went him ONE Month earlier incident and now he felt GOOSE BUMPS……   

All opened their eyes…. felt familiar with the surroundings…. Felt same feelings which they all had felt ONE Month earlier….

FREDDIE: baap ray… phir say….

Same cushion…. Wine bottle broken pieces and wine spilled traces with faded touch presented at the floor…. the KEY was also there… same machine…. low light with locked door….

VIVEK: oh no….. not again……

The same complete cemented walls with high roof…. Key was also at the floor… DAGGER was there and same spot light and door absence….

 SACHIN: ye drama phir say!!!

Same bed spread… marbled floor with same slippery texture… but this time much dirty and lots of marbles balls…. KEY was there… Marbled stacked pieces were shuffled here and there… gloomy touch of light also seen and same door…

KAJAL: oh my GOD!!!

Same well decorated room with sofa…. But looking dusty… all things had a BURNT look and smell…Door as usual locked…. Light turned on n off … and the same scary feel she felt again…

ABHIJEET: is baar sach mein teri baari hay…..

Same dirty floor with dirty smell but this time much dirty… same mirror walled room but mirror was dusty this time… door was locked… lots of KEYS filled the floor…. dim light also same as he experienced earlier….

DAYA: ahhhhhh…………………

Same tacky floor but more tacky… insects coming out but looking much bigger in size this time…. The same big cloth contained the heads and blood or masses…. Room was filled with xtra bad smell and the black polythene bag was also there…. KEY was found at the iron door side which was locked… flash of light was also the same….

They all heard that old bit scary unusual different and difficult type of SOUND…..

WELCUME BACK OFFICERS….. tum log yaqeenun mujhay bhooly tou nahi hogay… main nay kaha tha na…. kay HUM phir milein gay…. Khair… zyada waqt zaya nahi kartay…. Is baar ka GAME bhi pichlay GAME ki tarah hay…. tou RULES tou SAME hee hain…. yaad hain… chalo main phr say repeat kr deta hun wo RULES….

1.       GAME ka overall time 60 minutes hay….Tum saaray officers apnay apnay CHAMBER kay LOCK kholo gay aur bahar aa jao gay….

2.       Pehla player Ins FREDDRICS…. doosri KAJAL…. Teesra SACHIN…. 4th one VIVEK…. 5th Sr. Ins ABHIJEET aur last player Ins  DAYA hoga…

3.       Her player kay pass 10 minutes ka time hay…. time khatam honay per tum sub ko TIMES UP ki BEEP sunaii day gi… jis say sub ko pata chal jayeyga kay doorsay khilari ka TIME khatam ho gaya hay aur khilari ka chance automatically khatam ho jayey ga….

4.       Agar 10 minutes mein kisi officer nay turn nahi liya tou wo chance khud ba khud khtam ho jayeyga aur wo  player eliminate ho jayeyga…. aur hamesha kay liyey is chamber mein band…..

5.       GREEN means LIFE…  aur RED means END….

Main nay is baar bhi poori koshish ki hay kay tum lagun ko zyada takleef na dun…. bus wesay hee CHABI dhoond ker apnay CHAMBER ka darwaza kholna hay aur bahar aa jana hay… tum logun ki zahanut dekh ker main nay is baar CHABI tum logun ki pockets mein he rakh di hain…… Simple…. Bus darwaza kholo aur bahar aa jao….

Chalo tayyar ho jao… FREDRICS tumhara pehlay number hay… aur haan Ins DAYA plz is baar meray chamber kay floor ko ganda nahi karna…. Plz….

All the best OFFICERS….. lets start… 1….2…3….

AT 09:30 AM

Gloomy touch of LIGHT changed into bright one…  FREDDIE checked his pocket and found a KEY…. He rushed towards the door….  Putted in the KEY….. But!!! NO voice……

FREDDIE: hain…. ye CHABI…… arry ab kya hoga BHAGWAAN….

FREDDIE saw the same wine machine with a COIN placed upon it….

FREDDIE:  is baar tou chahy kuch ho jayey…. Main sharaab nahi pion ga…. (after few sec) magar agar bottle mei CHABI hui tou!!!

SOUND source smile on his mental confusion….

He putted the COIN and the WINE bottle came out…. he saw the bottle..…. after few second… deviate his attention from that bottle… He searched the KEY everywhere…. He pushed the cushion…. His fingers had small cuts due to broken pieces of that wine bottle…. So he used his foot to took them aside….

FREDDIE: agar bottle mei hee kuch hua tou…..

At last he took that bottle…. Spilled wine on floor with regret ….  At once saw the KEY inside that bottel…. Spilled wine on his palm cup… the KEY fell on his palm cup… he threw the bottle on cushion…. Took that KEY from his palm cup and unhesitantly he took all wine from his palm cup… and wet his throat in nervousness… cleaned his hand with his shirt… bit happy to got the KEY…. Relaxly used it on LOCK…. NO CLICK voice again….…. the KEY fell down from his shivering hand towards the floor…. at the same moment…. LIGHT putted off…. His hand moving here n there…. At once his fingers felt a stacky and soft touch… his body hairs stand up in tension…  A scary scream came from his mouth….. and the last thing which his mind remembered before going to rest was….. BHOOT!!! And TIME UP BEEP….

 RED light FLASHED…. But SOUND source admired his smartness as well…..

AT 09:40 AM

KAJAL just stood up after hearing that BEEP…. LIGHT completely turned on… She instantly putted out her KEY from her pocket and easily rushed towards the door…. the door with the LOCK was there…  she putted in the KEY but… no CLICK voice… she got tensed… she moved the KEY  again… but the result was same….

KAJAL: ye kiya!!!

KAJAL(in tension): kahein koi aur KEY tou nahi hay ya koi aur door….

she instantly shuffled things… hustle bustle the whole room… checked the walls… floors… every decorated items… she putted up a VASE and when turned it upside down….. a scream came from her mouth and the vase slipped from her hand…. NO KEY was there…  She had a scary feel of coming anything bad with her…. tears comes on her eyes…  remembered that BURNT which MARKS had still on her body n face….tension increased with time running fast…  in that hustle bustle…. Her foot hit something from the door side which was moving with extreme speed at another corner…. she checked that thing…  and threw it with carelessness…. a BURNT KEY!!! she heard the BEEP and sat on that dusty sofa without any more intentions…. 

SOUND again laugh on her fear…. stupidity and lack of concentration.….. RED as usual ON…..

AT 09:50 AM

SACHIN got up from the bed spread….  LIGHT on…. got out the KEY…. Checked the door…  saw TWO LOCKS opposite to each other……. putted his KEY on FIRST LOCK… BUT!! then checked the 2ND one…. But again FAILED… he checked the bed spread again… this time did not hit the stack of marbles… he tried to move aside as much marble balls…. But did not find the KEY…

SACHIN: shit… ab ye LOCK kesay khulay ga??!!

he checked the floor KEY on both the LOCKS as well…. But not SUCCESSFUL…. He checked every small space of the chamber but…. Heard the BEEP and laid himself and all his hope on that bedspread….

SOUND exaggerated laugh filled the surrounding…. RED light BRIGHT…..

Here ACP again undergone in the bad phase of life… the CITY Hospital launched a case that at 08:00 AM, CID bearue called the Hospital and told to send an Ambulance at Address 56/F VICTORIA ROAD... where there was an emergency…. After an hour the three of their staff members found lying at the VICTORIA ROAD roadside… the Ambulance was missing….. ACP with the POLICE rushed there… he knew very well that the given ADDRESS was DAYA's House…. He reached there… found DAYA's Quillas at shed and ABHIJEET Jeep on DAYA's House in front…. The Police opened the door which was locked…. ACP and all entered…. Felt a bad smell of CHLOROFORM… they opened the windows and door… after few minutes… watched traces of blood…. DAYA's cell and all his personnel's and also ABHIJEET cell, his vallet, watch everything…. But both the cells were powered off…. ACP turned both the cells on…. Nothing suspicious found… Nothing much found from the house…. The Quillas did not get anything… but ABHIJEET Jeep contained four powered off cellular phones and all metallic items of other four members…. Now wat to do!!!

AT 10:00 AM

VIVEK started his work …. SPOT light filled his chamber with flash…. He used his KEY… but the LOCK…. where was the LOCK…. ONE month earlier he also had not found the DOOR… so LOCK!!!!…. He called out his memory and thoroughly checked the place from where DAYA Sir and ABHIJEET Sir got out him…. he spread his palm on that place and at one point his finger pierced on the hole….

VIVEK: wow….

He putted in his KEY but the KEY did not work… he saw the KEY… again used it but the result was same….

SOUND source smiled and prepared for the RED light ON process…

He tried to calm himself coz now his hands started shivering… he sat on floor…. calculated the time…  he felt something unusual… the cemented floor  getting sticky with BLOOD…. Which came out from beneath of floor…. he felt GOOSE BUMPS….  His cloths… hands… shoes printed that blood slices… he unintentionally stand up…. Moving back step by step… his eyes still focused on that blood… his body started shivering…  on his moving back process…  his shoe slipped from the upper coat of blood and he fell down on that DAGGER…. luckily the DAGGER hits his head only with its handle…. His right side face faced that bloody tone…. He got up instantly…. suddenly his eyes caught the attention… he brought back the KEY on his pocket and got that old KEY which was already at the same position where it had fallen last moment…. ONE Month earlier…. But this time gripped with blood…. He cleaned it….

VIVEK: ye yahan…. Kyun!!!

he putted in that KEY inside the LOCK and CLICK….. he was so happy… urgently got out from the chamber with scared and tensed feel… his exit ended with the TIME UP BEEP….. his hands and cloths were sticky…. He cleared his face and hands with the clean parts of his shirt…..

The SOUND murmuring something in rash and GREEN light pressed…..

ACP shattered… SALUNKHY heard that and instantly came out… TAREEKA was on BANGLORE to attend his cousin wedding…. both ACP and SALUNKHY felt unusual…. From the last experience…. They easily felt about the weird they handled…. KAJAL was so scared from that experience… and especially after that incident… DAYA was very quiet… his laughter and spontaneous nature was bit slow down…. He came xtra closed to ABHIJEET…. and only ABHIJEET handled him very well after that experience… ABHIJEET as well DAYA did not discuss anything about their experience… even ABHIJEET also did not tell about the culprit, his ware bouts and the DAYA experience to ACP… so it so difficult…. ACP moved to ROTTEN where he had found his soldiers last time… the villagers took him the place where they got the CID members but this time… only a blast ruins found there….

AT 10:10 AM

Light flashed at its high peak… ABHIJEET stood up… putted out his pocket KEY… but before he putted in that KEY inside the LOCK…

ABHIJEET: nahi…. Kuch tou garbar hogi…. Itna taiz aadmi… aur itni aasani say humein nikalnay day… impossible hay…. (he moved his face direction to that point where he had seen last time) (in smile) hain na!!!

The SOUND sources really appreciated his intelligence….. and praised him in heart….

ABHIJEET putted the KEY inside his pocket again….. sat on floor…. calmed his mind and recalled the last time every small bits…. His eyes focused on the dusty MIRRORS and his mind shuffled his intentions… assumptions…… clues in appropriate manner…..

ABHIJEET: pichli baar sub kuch in mirror walls mein tha…. is baar kuch naya hona chahyey…. (again saw on that direction) tum ko bhi tou nai cheezain karna pasand hay na!!! kyun!!!

 bunches of LOCKS at every wall…… and a weird thing…. BLOOD DROPS came out from every LOCK hole and fell drop by drop at the KEYS and MIRRORS pieces filled floor….. he released a tensed voice…. The all four walls filled his CHAMBER with blood like the water filled up the bucket…. ABHIJEET shoes…. His jeans getting sticky bit by bit…. His nerves felt pressure and this time the load of that pressure hammered on his mind and emotions forcefully…. ABHIJEET now recognized the mind n intention of CULPRIT…. The CULPRIT just played with them… not want to TRAP or KILLED the PLAYERS…. Just SCARED them…. He got some KEYS from the floor… but his fingers had CUTS due to mirror pieces and turning its color into RED cz of BLOOD drops… his beat raised bit by bit with every second…. he calculated the TIME….. tried to calm his mind…. and started his best to use KEYS on every LOCK…. After two minutes…. He stopped his hand and mind….….  his mind felt pressure of BLOOD…. Bit shuffled to think about DAYA's experience this time as well…. after a second….

ABHIJEET: nahi kuch nahi ho sakta…. kuch nahi… us nay koi CHANGE nahi kiya hay…. warna wo batata… (moved his head on that corner) hain na!!!  itnay kum TIME mein sub KEYS ko dekhna namumkin hay…. kuch aur….

Only 1 minute left…. He trying to leave the CHAMBER urgently…. cz now the CHAMBER really played a role of impossible place to stay although jus for micro second… its filled with more speed…. the tacky smell and sticky touched irritated ABHIJEET a lot… he was moving around… his mind working on xtreme speed…. Suddenly he remembered that on his last experience…… he opened the different LOCK due to mirror reflection… he checked the old LOCK and now his pocket KEY worked out… TIME UP BEEP and his STEP OUT at the same second…. He came out…. managed his sinus… tried to cope from that bad phase of his experience…. cleaned his hand with his handkerchief…. still feel tensed…. had that pressure on his nerves…. … tried to compose…. worried about others… specially DAYA…..

The SOUND source clapped for his shine memory and his calmed tone… GREEN light ON…..

After exit he saw VIVEK moving here and there to find others… he called him… VIVEK rushed… he looked happy and hugged ABHIJEET with scare effect…. ABHIJEET saw him… his face and cloths with blood and felt his shivered body too…. did not ask anything…. Just greatly composed his anger and pain and moved for all other as well…

AT 10:20 AM

LIGHT showed his appearance… DAYA got the KEY out…. tied his shirt on his mouth earlier… but this time….

DAYA(thinking): CHABI munh mein ho sakti hay boss… magar koi CHANGE tou hoga!!!  Warna… baat kuch samajh nahi aati….

SOUND source liked his sharp mind….  waited to enjoying  from his next step….

He putted the KEY inside his jeans pocket again….  checked the IRON door…. No LOCK was there…. He remembered very well that he had the LOCK last time… which CLICKED released him from that weird experience he handled…  He saw the door again and found that there was a RED BUTTON on the head of the door… he did not remember either that button was presented on last time or not… the button was very high… even his 6 Feet 2 Inch height was not fulfilled the criteria…. He calculated the time… checked every head with the same feeling… but this time the head was much like skeleton so the masses and blood was very little on DAYA's hand….

He again saw that BLACK polythene BAG… the BIG cloth and lots of HEAD… his mind glued on that RED button and its height…. He felt bad… but that was the only way out…. he tore a big belt like piece from that cloth… and then placed all the HEADS on that cloth and tied a knot then grabbed that cloth contained heads on the bag… and at last he tied the bag mouth with that belt piece of cloth….

DAYA(watery eyes): I m so sorry…. Mujhay maaf ker dena…. Plz….

After that he took that bag on his hand and threw it on that RED button…. His aim was not correct… the bag came down on the floor with a voice… DAYA's heart hurt with that voice….

The source of SOUND not really happy with the step…  bit upset now….

His hands now shivering… he did not want to do it again… but!!! After few seconds… he calmed himself… again got the bag and now tried hard and this time fortunately the RED button pressed… suddenly he felt xtreme pressure…. cz after RED button pressed the BLOOD drops fell on him like the rain… he moved his head upside…. his eye got a blood drop… his eyelid shattered in reaction…. picture faded…. he tangled… his foot bit slipped and in slippery tone… he fell on his backside and a splash sound filled the chamber… DAYA's head… mouth and whole upper body felt a scary…. fear…. tacky texture of blood surrounded him inside a tub…. His intention worked at high point so there was a speedy recovery of his body from that fluid…. His body was shaking…. He untied his shirt which really did best…. cz that YUCK BLOODY fluid was not went inside his any face opening except the eyes…. a scary scream came out from his throat in high pitch and volume….He vomit everything OUT….  he did not understand either that tub was there earlier or appeared after pressing that RED button…. Now he did not want to think or watch more behind him… he rushed towards the door…. just wanted to OUT as early as possible… the LOCK appeared… DAYA putted in the KEY with shivering hands… the CLICK voice…. TIME UP BEEP pressed at the same time… he rushed out…

SOUND slowed down….  So much angry….. wanted some more…. BUT…. GREEN again ON…..

ABHIJEET and VIVEK saw him and moved to his chamber side…. His body was shivering with high speed…. His body and cloths were sticky with blood….  ABHIJEET grabbed him… he wiped his face with ABHIJEET coat…. His tears and BLOOD droplets mingled with each other… he hugged ABHIJEET so tightly… even ABHIJEET easily counted his PULSES and shaking of body…. he was not good… both of them did not understand… ABHIJEET wanted to went inside of his chamber but the chamber was again locked after DAYA exit…. After few minutes he low down…  his body calmed down… he set ABHIJEET free… wiped his tears…. asked about the rest of…. But both moved their heads in NO….    

They started calling everyone… suddenly heard TWO voices…. All three moved at the chamber from where the voice was coming out….

DAYA: KAJAL…. Koi MATCH BOX hay wahan???

KAJAL(in scary voice): nahi DAYA Sir….

ABHIJEET: dekho wahein kahein hoga…. Usi mein CHABI ho gi…

KAJAL(with cry): nahi Sir main nay her jagah dekh liya…. koi CHABI nahi hay…. aur jo CHABI meray pocket mein hay wo tou lug hee nahi rahi hay….

VIVEK(with himself): wo tou lagay gi bhi nahi…. (in high volume) KAJAL jo tumharay CHAMBER ki purani CHABI hay… us say hee LOCK khulay ga….

KAJAL: magar yahan koi CHABI nahi hay VIVEK…..

All are really worried… ABHIJEET pressed his memory button on his mind… Suddenly he remembered that BLOW OUT handled from her last experience…. He added….

ABHIJEET: dekho KAJAL… koi JALI hui CHABI… ya us jesi koi cheez hay….

KAJAL: nahi Sir…. (she remembered something)  aik minute….

She moved there… took that BURNT KEY shape thing from the corner of the room…. Putted in the LOCK  moved outside… wiped her tears and felt really happy…. Then moved towards the next chamber….

ABHIJEET: SACHIN…. dekho CHABI hogi?? us say LOCK khol ker bahar aao…. us CHABI ko mut use karo jo tumhari jaib (pocket) mein hay….

SACHIN(in tense voice): magar Sir yahan DO LOCK hain… main ny DONO LOCKS ko DONO CHABIYUN say check kiya hay…. magar kuch nahi hua!!!

DAYA: tum nay achi tarah check kiya hay na!!!

SACHIN: jee Sir… sub kuch dekh liya hay…..

DAYA(again): acha DONO CHABIYAN aik sath laga ker dekha hay…

SACHIN: nahi Sir…

ABHIJEET: tou lagao na… (bit anger) bethay kyun ho!!!

He used both the KEYS at correct order and all heard CLICK voice…. moved out… saw everyone in bad phase with BLOOD shades on everyone cloths… hands except KAJAL and himself……. they moved forward…. and call out FREDDIE name…. NO response rebounced back…. ABHIJEET noticed that at regular intervals DAYA wiped his tears and face with his hand…. He threw his shirt on that CHAMBER while now only wearing T-SHIRT…. VIVEK body shivered and KAJAL tears came out from her eyes ….. he really worried about his buddies although his nerves also had a bad impression… but he tried his best to composed and not burst his intention on that point…. Suddenly SACHIN smelt a WINE aroma…. They call FREDDIE but he did not give the answer…. They all got tensed…. This time NO XTRA KEYS at ABHIJEET coat pocket which had released them liked last time…. They all stand with tension…. HOW could opened FREDDIE CHAMBER…. suddenly VIVEK revised his memory and took out a KEY from his pocket and used it just for chance on that LOCK…. CLICK sound lit up the light on everyone faces….  When the door pushed by DAYA… saw FREDDIE again in unconscious state lying beside the door…. SACHIN took him on his hands this time…. All heard the TICK TICK sound…. They all came out and moved fast on the exit point…. Only SACHIN followed the rest one cz he had no traces of memory on his last experience…. They moved out one by one…. ABHIJEET tried to watch every point carefully but not found any CD this time… They all moved out…. at last… ABHIJEET gave his hand to DAYA on that small exit…. DAYA did not grab his hand…. ABHIJEET shocked…

DAYA: nahi boss… tum log jao….(in rash) Main aaj isay chorun ga nahi….

ABHIJEET(in xtreme tension): DAYA nahi… plz… hath pakro mera….

DAYA tried to untied ABHIJEET hand tight grip….

ABHIJEET(in wet voice): DAYA…. aa jaa… plz… main mar jaonga….. yaar… plz… hum baad mein dekhein gay…. Plz yaar….

DAYA felt few warm drops on his hand and totally lost on those drops… he again tightens his hand grip on ABHIJEET hand and in few seconds… he be with all…. ABHIJEET hugged him… DAYA saw his palm… lots more CUT marks were there… but ABHIJEET took no interest on them…  DAYA was not happy with his decision….  A BOOM sound splashed the silence…. Lots of smoke…. Dust… fire…. After all washed out…. they walked towards the Road…. They heard a sound of vehicle…. They stopped him…. and asked him about the area…. The GUY said that they were not very far from MUMBAI…. ABHIJEET asked him about his cell….

ABHIJEET: aap ka mobile milay ga… humein ek call karni hay…

The GUY gave his mobile…. ABHIJEET talked to ACP and told him about the whole scenario… suddenly he heard the voice of falling and scream… he moved around and saw that DAYA and VIVEK fell down on the road… he hold the call and after rushed there… said ACP to brought Ambulance with him too…. ACP ended the call….

ACP came as early as possible…. He brought Ambulance with him as well… all moved towards the city… ABHIJEET thanked the Local GUY as well… ABHIJEET and all told their experience to ACP…  ACP felt that ABHIJEET was also looking not good… in talking his mind shuffled and he lost the attention and started whispering and talking with himself about something…  ABHIJEET, DAYA and VIVEK… all contained BLOOD specimens on their SKIN, CLOTHs…  ABHIJEET did not have anything to tell about the culprit, VIVEK and DAYA's experience…  ACP after watchin his mental health stopped him and tried to deviate his tension and relaxed his mind from the incident….

They got all THREE of them to the Hospital… FREDDIE came out earlier from unconscious state and told everyone that this time he did not experienced a wine but there was a GHOST on that CHAMBER… and he touched that GHOST with his fingers and in scare went to sleep…. ACP did not take any specific interest… his fingers only have wine traces and some blood…. DR advised ACP after checked them all to give mental rest to all his OFFICERS… so he stayed all of them at Hospital and gave them SLEEPING PILLS to calm their minds…. While in whole unconscious state DAYA murmuring…. and used his hand to clean something from his face…. DR released all of them after a sound sleep and called ACP and ABHIJEET both on his chamber… He said…

DR: Sir aap kay dono OFFIICERS ab theek hain… kuch mental pressure hay…. magar DAYA ko buhat shaded mental stress hay aur koi emotional hurting bhi hay… buht khayal rakhna hay un ka…. Warna brain per buhat bura asar paray ga…

Both moved their head in YES… Next day both released from the Hospital…. VIVEK was quite good… told about his experience to ACP and ABHIJEET while DAYA was still in pressure so ACP n ABHIJEET both avoid to discuss with him anything about that matter…. When he be at home with ABHIJEET…. KARTIK came and said…

KARTIK: hello DAYA…. kesay ho???

DAYA: theek….

KARTIK: DAYA ye tumhara ek PARCEL aur do LETTERS aayey hain… courier wala yahan daal gaya tha tou main nay utha liya….

DAYA: thanx yaar…

KARTIK: aur ye thoray say NOODLES bhi hain… aaj banayey thay tou socha tum say bhi share ker lun….

ABHIJEET(in sad tone): KARTIK kya sirf DAYA ye NOODLES share ker sakta hay…. thoray main bhi kha lun…. Buhat bhook lagi hay….

KARTIK(with smile): ABHIJEET Sir aap bhi na… sure…. Kyun nahi… ok bye DAYA…. take care….

DAYA opened the PARCEL and got shocked to saw the CD…. He exchanged glances with ABHIJEET… started the CD PLAYER and play that CD… same BLACK screen with SOUND…..

SOUND: hmmmmm…. CONGRATS OFFICER…. ye LEVEL bhi tum logun nay mushkilun say hee magar cross ker he liya…. wesay tum logun ko nahi lagta kay tumharay kuch OFFICERS ki CID mein jagah hee nahi banti….. haan DAYA is baar tumhein kesa laga!!! maza aaya na….

ABHIJEET saw DAYA… his face and body showed his anger and pain… if the CULPRIT was there… its impossible to save him from DAYA's hands… he pressed his hand… and his body came in calm state after felt his touch… they again REWIND the CD and played it….

 SAOUND: magar mujhay kuch zyada nahi aaya….  tum dartay buhat ho…. mujhay nahi malum tha kay tum itnay SENSITIVE ho… aainda main khayal rakkhun ga…. main bara hisaab kitaab wala aadmi hun… pichli baar un teenun ko NUQSAAN hua tha… is baar tum teenun ko…  aur tum teenun tou thoray SHARP aur EXPERIANCED ho… is liyey main nay apnay LEVEL ko thora aur mazaidaar bana diya…. Kyun Sr Ins ABHIJEET tumhara kya khayal hay???

ABHIJEET(in xtra anger): tu mil ja…. Saaray khayal bata dunga… mil tou saheh….

Again continued the scene from where lost the focus….

SOUND:  hisaab baraber…. Haan FREDDIE… us ki qismut hee kharaab hay ya shayed ACP ki tarbiyet… hahahaha…

The CLIP of all members showed one by one…. ABHIJEET again shocked to see DAYA's experience… DAYA just closed his eyes….

SOUND: FREDDIE agar PURANI wali CHABI hee use karta LOCK mein tou LOCK khul jata… magar bechara BHOOT say darr gaya…. halankay tum dekh rahay ho… wahan koi BHOOT nahi… sirf MAIN tha!!!

SOUND: Hahaha…. wesay tum log itnay bewakoof niklo gay…. main nay socha nahi tha… acha yaad karo… main nay RULES batatay huay kahein ye kaha tha kay jo CHABI tum logun ki pocket mein hay… LOCK usi say khulay ga…. (both remembered that phase but !!!) NAHI na…  magar tum log… ABHIJEET tumharay sharp zehn ki tareef karni paray gi…..

Suddenly a BIG QUERY clicked on both minds at the same minute…. They exchanged glances and heard…

SOUND: haan mujhay malum hay… tum log kya soch rahy ho… kay tumharay CHAMBERS tou tum logun ki POCKET KEYS say hee khulay thay… magar kyunkay tum log apnay PEHLAY LEVEL mein apni KEYS use ker chukay thay… tou kaya main LOCK nahi badalta…. Ab itna bewakoof tou hun nahi (take pause) tum logun ki tarah…..

Acha OFFICERS…. Chalo… phir milein gay… kabhi bhi… kahein bhi…  bhoolna nahi…. Kuch bhi….  Ok….

GAME OVER

LEVEL 2: Finished

Extra preparation for the NEXT LEVEL OFFICERS

Again same GAME OVER sound and SLIDE hammering on their heads with great pressure....... and this time DUO's did not take normal inhale and exhale process…. They started to feel that pressure on their nerves from the moment….. 

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hmm... good one😊! but I expected some changes this time. it's almost same yaar! kuch naya socho next level ke liye! and why so much blood? I really felt uneasy while reading Daya sir's experience.😕 otherwise, nice story. quite thrilling.👏👏 waiting for next part.😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hmmmmmmmmm....... matlab not as good as first one.... but i really enjoyed to wrote dis one.... SHREELA.... in first phase... NO GRASS ROOT was there... magar 2nd level main usi grass root level ko he lay ker chalna hoga na.....
chalo thora wait kartay hain...... could U really uneasy with that phase of DAYA Sir.... even i watched it.... infront of my eyes.... that splash sound really hit my ear drums.....
bhae.... i said kay EXPECTAION itni HIGH na rakkhein..... chalo.... i'll try to wraped it up in coming days......
thank YOU SHREELA...... thanx alot........
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Well,Gadhadada, even this was really too good!!! My God, I really had goosebumps!!!! And yes, now I can feel that there'll be a real start in the story!!!! Waiting for your next level soon!!! And as usual, a fantastic job done!!! Just, reduce the amount of blood you use.... kind of freaks me out!! Otherwise, keep up the good job!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it's really good too. but change the type of game next time, please! i would like to see a different one!

 otherwise, it's superb!!!!!!!!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank YOU RASHIDA..........

yaar in both LEVELs..... wat i want to creat.... its created..... and i think its.... my SUCCESS.....
nahi yaar..... i'll wrapped it up soon.... cz phir aap log hurt ho jaogay... cz jesay jesay LEVELS aagay barhein gay..... its going more freaky n uneasy.... n i dunt want to HURT any of my CHARACTER... my READERS INTENTIONS......
i really appreciated UR feedback......  THANX ALOT..... champ.....
thank YOU.....
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i have a suspicion...............................


             That someone is testing CID officers' abilities...............


       probably DCP.............

                   or DIG Shamser............... the most possible..........



                     it's not ACP sir, i think. he cares for his fellow officers so much, he will not let this kind of pain to them, especially Daya.


        
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank U DARKNIGHT.....

no buddy... now i'll make my mind to wrap it up.....
BUT may be PPL feedback change my mind too.....
thanx again.... DARKNIGHT.... i m really THANKFUL....
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Posted: 13 years ago
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U suspicion was too GOOD..... DARKNIGHT.......
excellent JOB.......
U really come close to my MASTERMIND.....
THINK BUDDY.....
may be U'l find it soon..... and ya
how could U even think (either for a sec) abot ACP Sir..... he is DAMN careful specially abt his team mates....
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@Gadhadada: First, for a moment I had a feeling it was ACP, but then I realised it was impossible!!! He loved his colleagues very much!!! So my full suspicion is on DIG Shamsher!!!!!!