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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hello everyone.

I am munaza , i am very much in this forum from lots of days , well i am writting FF ...
All credits goes to my friend Naqiya(whom i lost 3 months ago) , she always asked me to write nicks this goes for you in ur style, i am posting first part , if i got nice response i will post other parts too

here it goes....

As sid's eyes fell on Mr.Chand Raichand , his anger rose and fire grew in him , as he remembered how he was threw out of house by Chand just because of one mistake , a small mistake of helping any human … They knew they were vampires and had to make some distance from humans but Sid thought some where in him a human is still alive and if he had some chance in his hands to save someone so he did. Remembering the bitter past but still wanted to know how much rude and arrogant person Chand has gone till now so he walked down to Chand who was busy getting congratulations from the bidders .

Sid: (smirking) Hey DAD remember me your thrown out SON

As Chand saw siddarath , whom he didn't saw from years , many years , turned around to him , he knew better to ignore him , he had lost him and didn't want to get him back now , he fitted between them , Chand was truly monster no emotions , he had his calm expressions on his face , which he had always , he never showed anyone what he felt it was a mystery what Chand thought or felt when he was quiet .Siddarath who was standing infront of that person , whom he wanted to take revenge of all.

Sid: Come on DAD , Don't give me those looks, I know you well , well I am here to destroy you , you may be knowing that (taking a sigh) its so good to be home.

Chand : its not ur home siddarath .

Sid : It is , you have taken away a lot of MY THINGS , and I am here to take it back .

As siddarath said this , entry was made by abhay , who watched a glimpse of bidding on TV and saw siddarath , whom he found atlast, his brother , his elder brother….

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hei munaza,
nice start..but in ur FF sid was kicked out for helping out a human?then it is not a bad thing..then sure he is not supposed to b evil r grey watever..so will abhay n sid be in gud terms in ur FF?u can continue but not too short..
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ramani
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey really nice
do cont....n update soon
btw very gald to hear tht ur writing this for naqu di 😃

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