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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 14 years ago

#941

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

hey shruti...
ab khamoshi se hi kaam chalana padega...koi baat nahi...dont say lost track ...itni jaldi to nahi...😆
still agar muskan updates this...then to mazaa aa jayega..😃
i hope she updates soon...any of the FF...coz juat got a call...have to rush to coll...ahhh..
but wishing jab tak wapas aaon update mil jaaye...

ghum ke aao, mujhe meeting ke liye daurna parega thori der mein.
yes still hoping for an update of tm and deewangi

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 14 years ago

#942

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

is she running for guiness book of records?

for minimum number of updates in a thread

if so I will help her

of corse along with you and Jyoti

look what have you done

I have not yet posted on this thread as I wanted to show Muskan that I am angry

and you two made me break my resolve

she sure is...

look we made u break ur resolve...😆

hum to kal raat se hi record banane me lage hue hain..😉😆

have to really run now...otherwise my friends will kill me...

will talk after i return...u carry on...pestering muskaan to give an update...

😆
yes, baad needn aagayi thi isliye chale gaya kal rat nehi kal hi iye 150 cross ho jata
yes ofcourse

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zubi123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#943

frm part 128 to 132 everythng was awesum, superb ndd i hope maan will soon get to knw ttht mk is her daughter nd once again maaneet will be bck nd update the nxt soon

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muskaan_cute19

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Posted: 14 years ago

#944

hey muski darling now wanna update here tooo plzzzz
b4 i gocan v get 1 update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
waiting desperately since nyt😉

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muskaan_cute19

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Posted: 14 years ago

#945

Hey was just listening radio ryt now
sum 1 requetsed 4 this song
n i tnk this suits our geet ryt now so perfectly

Log kehte hain pagal hoon main yeh na janu
Dil lutaya hai maine ab kisi ki na manu
Chain de kar ke maine bechainiyan yeh li hain
Neendein uda ke maine tumse wafaein ki hain
Kasam ki kasam hai kasam se
Jee rahe hain hum tere dam se
Ab yeh pyar na hoga phir humse😉

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maansee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#946

WE LOVE U MUSKI....................... THANKS FOR UPDATING..........

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 14 years ago

#947

yes come back from meeting and see the status updating.

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Muskan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#948

i thought i made it clear...

to maan mk looks 4-5 yrs...

2 reasons..1 she doesn't talk fluently 2. she behaves quiet young to her age..like always asks him for godi.. easily mingling with strangers

A SEVEN YR old kids talk more fluently & behave more maturedly

they know whom to talk & whom not to..they may not just

hug total stranger..which mk did when she first met him

-truly magical-
part 133

Ayur snapped & threw the files infront of her - god dam.. why don't u get it. We cannot conclude anything unless we have solid evidence. See these people are far from our reach.
She was no were to get intimidated. She flipped the papers while he continued.
Ayur - they didn't call for ransom
Geet - umm
ayur - actually they couldn't we where too fast
not no twitch on her face
ayur - there are few high profile gangs who have grt connections, so we can't even touch them. We know it is them but we cannot openly point at then because they don't leave any loopholes
she roared - you are not seeing well enough then
she marched into the interrogation room & scanned the guy with a bandage around his waist & blood oozing out of it & his pale body in just short was shivering on the ice he laid on. She gave a threatening look to the constable.
Constable was scared - kuch nahi bol raha main, 2 bar bhehosh ho chuka hain
ayur followed her unsure wat she might just do to the prisoner. For his surprise she was calm & she told the constable to dry him & change him into a warm cloths.

She went back to her cabin & she looked at her phone there was three missed calls from nanny. She immediately called back. It was 12.
Nanny - mk nahi so rahi sab ko pareshan kiya huwa hain
Geet - usse phone do
mk - mama da...da...dy nahi aayen
Geet was expecting that & with so many people to play with she may not sleep that easily. She had think about new excuse now.
Geet - sweety u have to sleep now, otherwise how will u play in the morning
mk - daddy
Geet - daddy busy hain na jaan
mk - sab busy hain...mk..se koi pyar nahi karta
Geet - karten hain daddy - mummy ki tu jaan hain
mk - nnnn......aaaa...hhhh...iii cried & went to raji's room.
Raji was fast a sleep. She didn't want to disturb any one so she went to her room. She looked at the table it had geets belongings. Rano & nanny came behind her. Mk was busy digging into the drawer. She found geets old phone book. She flipped the pages & found maans number in that. She took the land line & called him.
Maan saw the number & picked it almost in one ring
he didn't know wat to expect she was calling him after 7yrs ..he relived every bit of her love in that moment...how much he missed her..he hated himself to have missed her calls... when she was there he took her for granted but now he can't make this mistake ..how much she loved him...literaly to madness hieght..least did he know wat he still meant to her

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qh5axPU7JRc&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]

maan - hello
mk was thrilled to hear him answer the call, she giggled & looked at Rano.
Rano - itna raat kisse phone kar rahe ho beta
mk told her to be quiet showing her finger on the lips.
He heard her giggle & knew it was mk. He smiled, relaxed closed his files - aap soyen nahi aabhi taak
she shook her head
Maan - dinner kiya
she nodded

Maan - kya khaya
mk - chicken
Maan - wow that is my fav
mk - aap office main ho?
Maan - umm
mk - mk hate office
he smiled thinking even geet hated his office - aapko neeind nahi aarahi
mk - story sun na hain, mama bhi nahi hain
he wondered where Geet was at this hour.
Mk - da da da da da................
Maan - haan sweet heart
by now he understood she addressed him like that..da..
she loved it, he called her sweetheart, she had only heard mama tell her that she was her daddy's sweetheart - sto sto sto sto sto ...ry
Maan - story sunni hain
mk - umm

INTORROGATION ROOM

It was 1am the prisoner was not in physical condition to bear any pain. She told them strap him to an inclined board, with his feet raised and his head lowered & bind his arms and legs so he can't move at all, and also cover his face. She then repeatedly poured water onto the his face. The setup was such the water won't enter his mouth or nose, but the physical experience of being underneath a wave of water seems to be secondary to the psychological experience. his mind was forced to believes he is drowning, and his gag reflex kicked in as if he were choking on all that water falling on his face. He got scared petrified & accepted his intentions.
She didn't stop it still.
Guy - we wanted to kidnap him for ransom.
Geet -WE??
guy - I can't say his name
she splashed another wave of water on him
guy - Davis

she left him & walked back to her cabin to study in detail this guy Davis.
Ayur - koi phayda nahi hain
she looked at him puzzled
ayur - no one can touch him & threw few paper cutting on the table.
She scanned the paper he was very highly distinguished business man in Mumbai. Basically underworld links types.
Geet - why is he behind Maan? she cried furstration
Ayur - thats his business specialty.
Geet - ransom?
Ayur nodded sadly.
Undoubtedly she knows the wealth Maan holds under his name

precap,
endless call
vm thanxs to favrit4ever

-PREV PART 132-

hope u all like the updates. Love all your comments.
Really love reading them
please do keep commenting'.
Love
muskan

Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 14 years ago

#949

me first 🥳
awesome, brilliant part👏. loved it😳. ummmaaah to muskan.
loved the interrogation part. loved gk.
aww mk is not sleeping , want to meet her dada.

loved this whole part mainly.
Maan saw the number & picked it almost in one ring
he didn't know wat to expect she was calling him after 7yrs how much he missed her..he hated himself to have missed her calls... when she was there he took her for granted but now he can't make this mistake - hello
mk was thrilled to hear him answer the call, she giggled & looked at Rano.
Rano - itna raat kisse phone kar rahe ho beta
mk told her to be quiet showing her finger on the lips.
He heard her giggle & knew it was mk. He smiled, relaxed closed his files - aap soyen nahi aabhi taak
she shook her head
Maan - dinner kiya
she nodded

loved this part , cause maan realize his mistake almost and accept it to himself.
Maan saw the number & picked it almost in one ring
he didn't know wat to expect she was calling him after 7yrs how much he missed her..he hated himself to have missed her calls... when she was there he took her for granted but now he can't make this mistake - hello

father-daughter's fav food also same. hmmm. mk also hate office like geet.
like mother, like daughter aww both same. bless them. loved father- daughter convo. it's cute , sweet, loved it, ummmmaah
precap is endless call, hmmm means father, daughter convo continue , good good, mk beta lage raho, aap hi aapne parents ko close la sakte ho😆😉😛😃😳😊.
mk is totally combination of maaneet😳😆

oh this for some random business guy who want to kidnapped maan for his wealth, aah kill that devis😡

beatuiful part. loved it.
update soon.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago

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Huner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#950

Awiieeee.. Da da da da yyy 's sweet sweet talkies.. shooo Cute.. Oh god! MAAN!! what wrong with him.. why cant he understand.. She' s calling him DADDY!! still.. sooo adorable!! LOVED the part..
Precap is ofcourse really awesome too!!
cant wait! Cant wait! Can't wait!
Thanks you so much for the update di.. and plzz Continue soon..

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