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Posted: 14 years ago
#11
nice update devika di, loved the way dev showed his concern for radhika and the police coming to the house 😆.......cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
nice update devika di,loved the way dev showed his concern towards radhika and the park and police coming to thier house😆......cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13
lovely update!
Police infront of the door........ 😆
Can we have another update today?
PLEASE.....................................................................
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
wow...the emergency call was too cool....i liked the expression of radhika and dev...heheh...especially radhika....dats was very nyc
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi,
Thanks friends for the comments. I am really thankfull to you for taking that time to letting me know. really appreciate it.
Hope you will like next part too.
Thanks for all the support
Devika.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16

"Life is full of beauty. Notice it. Notice the bumble bee, the small child, and the smiling faces. Smell the rain, and feel the wind. Live your life to the fullest potential, and fight for your dreams."

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Part - 75

The days were passing by, quick, and it passed the weeks to years. The color of the leaves changed from light green to its dark shade and then to yellowish to red and it spread out its wings with the force of the wind and then loosing the balance it fallen on to the ground. The kids enjoyed playing in that racked red and orange leaves hill and soon somewhere around the U.S. people were waiting for the snow flakes to shower from the heaven.

It was bright and sunny outside the galss covered 60 storied office building in S.F. and the gathered group was rejoicing with the success of their project. Finally they were able to fix all the major issues and the program got launched fine and running smoothly without any issues. The team manager arranged the big party for the group and he praised the project lead in front of everyone, which was very unusual. Yes he has to, because it was his day and night hard work, he was prompt with all the actions. He was awake and alert at any minute to monitor its progress, its problems, and solve the issue. Finally the CEO presented the amaze award to the team lead , Dev Bhatt for his hard work. Dev was smiling at his best, he was seeing the happiness of his colleagues, he rejoiced with them. Time passed by and the group dispersed. Dev walked through that narrow pathways connecting few many cubicles replying thanks to the congrats words of his friends and got back into his cubicle. He placed the cirtificate over the table and looked at the photo frame that was holding the smile of the most beautiful girl in his life, his Radhika.

Sitting on his revolving chair , he paused for a second, he took the photo frame and tried to bring a smile. I know you will be the most happiest wife in the world tonight, when you hear about this. He smiled to self imagining the smile on her face. Soon his phone rang and with a smile he placed back the picture on the table corner and attended the call. Hanging up that call, looking at the smiley photo he said: sounds like a happy news for you" and then with a smile he went out the manager's cabin.

Dev just knocked at the door and showed his face

"Hei, Mr. Dev, come on in"

Dev walked in and sat on the chair in front of Mr. John

John with a smile: so what's up? Ready for the good news

Dev with a smile of expectation looked at Mr. john's face.

Mr. John: Yes Dev, Finally your vacation request got sanctioned, for next six weeks. I know you were waiting or this desperatly.So when are you planning to leave?.
Dev getting up from the chair with the most happiest smile : as soon as possible

Mr. John: great then, go ahead and have fun.

Dev: thank you Mr. John saying that he extended his hand out for a shake hand and Mr. john wished him all the best.

Dev came out from the cabin , he almost ran out to his cubicle, packing all the stuff back in his bag , he conveyed his leave sanction, his trip to India, to his colleagues and exchanged their "have fun", safe trip" comment.

On his way towards the car he called Balaji, who was on tour, to inform about his trip.

Dev: No balaji sir, the first available, Need to call Thomas, he kind of knows as I was kind of expecting this, so yes, hopefully tonight or by tomorrow. .. yes, yes, yes.ok.. tell to Rema di too. Sure. Ha

He hang up and drove quickly to the apartment. He called Mr. Thomas, the travel agent . He waited while packing his stuff into a small suitcase. He could hear his pounding heartbeat while throwing his shirts and Tees into that open bag. He waited for the bell to ring. He looked into the mirror, seeing the thick facial hair, he smiled self, 'look at you Dev' suddenly he took the trimmer and then shaver and did a clean shave and looked at the mirror and loved his new clean look. Few times he rubbed on his chin skin to feel the smoothness. Took a quick shower and then dressed up in white formal shirt and blue jeans, which is her favorite.

He looked at her smiley photo on the wall and said 'how long you will keep away from me, now when you see me in front of you, what you will do? Run away, or run into my arms, in front of all ' he smiled with that thought ' I can't wait for that moment , Radhika' . his thought continued ' remember, last time I kept the distance as the mehandi function was going on, but this time, I don't care who all are around, and that will be your punishment to get embarrassed in front of everyone, being in my arms. I am sorry Radhika, because you didn't leave any other option for me." His attention got diverted as he heard the bell ring. Fixing his wrist button he walked towards the receiver and then listened to Mr. Thomas and finally said " thanks a bunch". Yes, I need the return too...., in six weeks,... two,.... yes for Radhika too., ok. Ok. Yap, no problem, ..will check out, ...yes, thanks".

He combed his hair well. He checked on his passport and then checked his mail and found the ticket info, he called back again and talked to Mr. Thomas and then quickly took a print out and after verifying everything one more time he put that inside his backpack.

He called for a taxi. He was about to walk out grabbing his things , but then with a second thought, he paused. He came near the phone and dialed the Delhi number, but then suddenly got conscious of the time there , so hang up quickly and waited for the taxi. He saw the Taxi parking down and soon locking the door , he ran down towards it.

His eyes were seeing the passing trucks and fast moving cars. His heart was pounding faster thinking of stepping into his house soon. His lip was holding an unknown pleasure. The taxi got stopped at the parking ramp. He paid the bill and went inside. He got checked in quick. He looked at the ticking watch, still there is two more hours. He just roamed around and then as if remembering to call home, dialed the Delhi house number again, he heard the bell ringing, his heart started pacing faster, who will pick the phone, its been months after talking to someone.

"hello" Suchi's voice reached his ears

Dev with a smile and from within his heart called out: "mom"

He could recognize Suchi's disbelief tone: dev!!!

Dev: Ha mom, I am coming, will be there by tomorrow evening

Suchi with her wet voice: sach beta?

Dev felt the heavines too: yes Mom

Suchi: but

Dev: no more mom, will after reaching there ok, and ha don't tell to Radhika, I want to give her surprise.

Suchi: but...,....'

Without giving time for her to respond , Dev : see you soon mom, love you, bye.

Dev hang up the phone, he came back to reality after listening to his mom's voice. He felt his eyes wet too, he took his grey glass out and put on his nose, to mask the sudden change of shade on his face and the wetness of his eyes, from the unknown people around. He knew she might be crying now. First time he is away from her this long, first time he is talking to his mom after months. Yes, it was like that, especially after marriage, whenever mom called , he just say 'hai and how are you' and then give to Radhika, and Radhika filled all the gaps, but after she left to India, I didn't get much time to talk, or I was too busy with my work and now, when I hear her wet sound , I am realizing what I missed. He walked with his heavy heart listening to the announcement. He passed through that tunnel and tried hard to pass a fake smile to the greeting crew at the door, but failed and walked in , looking at both sides for his seat number. Yes he found it , a corner one near that oval window. He sat back there after settling his backpack in that cabin.

This time his eyes just looked out through the oval space to the ground. He remembered last time, his Radhika was sitting near that space and was looking outside. After fastening the seat belt , he rested his head back on the seat. He closed his eyes for a moment, to feel the arms wrapping around his right upper arm. He got used to that for now; but then for months , he felt that emptiness while walking alone, while working from home, the absence of her resting head on his shoulder. How many times she slept in that position, and then when he try to awake her, she walk with waddling legs and many times she needed support form him completely to reach that bed. Is she missing me now? How badly. I know her nature, she won't even pick that phone when we are apart, so only purposefully I didn't try any calls , she refused to talk to me until I met her again for our marriage. So this time, I know she will act same, but no Radhika, I won't let you stay away from me anymore like this Radhika. I am coming to get you. You don't know how I pushed the days without you. How can you Radhika, when you were around me, may be I ignored you few times , that is because of my job pressure, but how did you fail to understand me, but now, nothing like that will happen and I won't let you walk away from me that easily. He thought his lips are stretching out with that thinking. He was unaware of the take off, he didn't see the passing clouds just near him, his mind was preoccupied with Radhika, his Radhika and only she, rest of the world was dark around him.

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At the same time, Suchi was kept on trying his cell number again and again, nothing was clear to her, what did he say just now, is he coming? Really coming, my son is coming to Delhi. The tears are rolling down, but then why he said not to tell Radhika, and how can that be possible? She should be knowing, and I am sure Radhika will be the happiest to know about the india trip and he can't keep that as a secret from her , how can he? and Radhika is intelligent enough to understand it and then why he said like that? He can't leave her alone there and come. Suchi tried to reach the home phone number and then later found Rema's phone number , but nothing was going on. She was unable to move from near the phone rack, what if he calls back? Did I hear right? Did he say it? She folded her hands together and closed her eyes, the tears rolled down and she prayed,. Kanha , whatever it is, take care.

Suddenly the phone rang, Suchi grabbed it with her shivering hands and said: hello
"Suchi, this is Sushma, I need to talk to you?'
Suchi: Sushma, what is it?
Sushma: I prefer to talk in person.
Suchi: anything serious?
Sushma: ha, maybe or may not be, but I need to talk to you. When can you come?
Suchi: today, no tomorrow, but then suddenly she recollected Dev's call, and said" may be day after
Sushma, listening to her confused sound : you ok!
Suchi: ha, ha, I will be there day after
Sushma: ok, Lechu left on time , right?
Suchi: Ha, one week trip to Bangalore. so
Sushma: Ok then, will meet you soon.
Suchi: ha Sushma, everything is Ok there, right?
Sushma with a smile: ha, everything is fine.
Suchi brought a smile: ok.
She hang up the phone and questioned self "why didn't I tell Sushma about Dev's return?, everyone should be happy to hear it, after two years they are coming back, but then why he confused me, so only unknowingly i was not able to tell them, does Mohan bhayya knows it?, no there is no way, I talked to Rohini and Maaji yesterday when they called to talk with Lechu before she left, then? what made me to keep that silence. Should I call Chandenpur and tell, Or should I call him (Surender) ?but he is on hisofficial tour too, what should I tell him, and if I say this , he may cancel all the program and will be here next minute, but Dev's words are confusing me. anyway let him come, we will inform and enjoy after that . She walked towards the Kanha Idol, she folded her hands again and just looked at that smiley face of the Idol for a clear vision.

Thanks for your precious time to read this update.Have a good day.

part 76
Edited by Devika. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17
Fabulous update di ... like his self talk & his excitement to being with her, waiting for her reaction now ...THANKS .
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18
I can't wait for the next update....
curious..
waiting di..I think I can get some answers for some of my que... in next update...this is really a superb story di wow you are gr8
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Posted: 14 years ago
#19

Devikaaaaaaaaaaaaaa !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡

U better update today or am coming down to ur place to MURDER YOU .... How could u ??? How could u do this to us ??? Leaving us in such a LURCH , what the HELL is this MYSTERY ?? RADHIKA is back to CHANDENPUR and she did not even inform her in-laws.. YY ??? How could u make her so CARELESS and so INSENSITIVE in ur FF... 😡
If u make MY DEV CRY then u r SLAUGHTERED for sure... 😕
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
omg where is radhika now😕???? if she was in chandenpur then suchi might have got the info from rohni....hope she is safe...liked dev imaging her n getting ready for her...plz do update fast...

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