Mayur FF..[Kabhi Hum Bhi Khoobsurat The]last pt123 - Page 52

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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update.
it was sad update.
nupurs brothers r really heartless.......it was quite expecting for them, bt i dint xpecting this frm mayanks father.
it was really shocking.
i knww, our society ve some rules.......bt rules r not bigger thn humanity.
nw d story turnd into an unexpected way.
waiting for mayanks answer. ........its not easier for him tooo.
update soon.
thanks for the pm,
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

nice update.

it was sad update.
nupurs brothers r really heartless.......it was quite expecting for them, bt i dint xpecting this frm mayanks father.
it was really shocking.
i knww, our society ve some rules.......bt rules r not bigger thn humanity.
nw d story turnd into an unexpected way.
waiting for mayanks answer. ........its not easier for him tooo.
update soon.
thanks for the pm,

@sujal
Thank u sooooooo much yaar for liking and appreciating my effort🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank u sooooo much for liking and appreciating🤗🤗🤗🤗ur comments means a lot to me😃🤗

Part 15

Mayank ki Nupur se shaadi nahi ho gi.this is my last decision...he said in ordering tone and went upstairs when Mayank called him again...

Dad Toh mera bhi last decision sun lain main sirf Nupur se shaadi karon ga...main us ke bina zinda toh nahi reh sakta..us ke bina mar zaroor sakta hoon...He said confidently

Ravi sharma turned back and looked at him...

Toh tumhain hum main aur Nupur main se kisi aik ko choose kerna ho ga

he freezed at his place hearing these words 4m his father..he was too shocked to take any decision...but he had to take decision.he had to choose between his love and his parents...he had to choose between the right and wrong..he did not want to hurt his parents...but he also could not efford to loose his life,his love..he knew very well he had to take right decision and he would.

Main Nupur ko Tanha nahi chor sakta..she is innocent...she did not do anything wrong...why she has to get punished for the sin which she had not even done.i m with her always..i would be more happy if you accept her as your daughter in law...he replied confidently..he was determined

so you has chosen your love not your parents.....His Father said sarcastically...he was extremely angry at mayank bcos of his decision....sorry Dad i dont want to hurt you but i dont hurt her as i love her more than myself and this time she needs me...she needs my love and support..Ap ne hi mujhe sikhaya hai ke hamesha sahi aur sach ka saath do...magar aj ap apni hi sikhae hue baat bhol gaye hain..aur galat ka saath de rahe hain...saza toh use milni chahiye jis ne Gunah kiya hai..us masoom ko nahi..he said and walked out of the room...Shilpa aunty was trying to stop him..but he did not stop....she was happy at his decision...as he took right decision...

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In Bhushan House....

Nupur was in her room...she did not eat anything...she was crying continously ..Gunjan was trying to console her but it was of no use...she was too hurt becoz of his brothers words....

Mayank entered in Bhushan house...He met Gunjan

''Gunjan where is Nupur.''?he asked impationtely

''i want to meet her''...he was too upset...he wanted to see her then n there...

''she is in her room'' Gunjan replied seeing him so upset...she knew Mayank was the only person who could bring happiness in Nupur's life....

he went upstairs...he entered into her room but she was not there...he noticed the door of balcony was flung open...

he approached near her...the sight infront of him left him shattered...Nupur was sitting in balcony ....her head resting on her knees

and she was crying...her face has got pale and dull...

he called ..''Nupur''

she raised her head and saw him infront of her....she hugged him tightly and cried her heart out....Mayank everyone taunts me...no one trusts me...bhaiya,bhabhi everyone hates me...no one love me..hum ne kuch galat nahi kiya...hamara koi qasoor nahi..phir bhi sab humain qasoorvar samajh rahe hain...Mayank patted her back with tears also in his eyes..

Mayank knew she was in unbearable pain...

He cupped her face and wiped her tears...main hoon na tumhare saath..phir tum duniya ki parvah kyun karti ho..

I love you Nupur...i always hv loved you...and im always there for you....he kissed her forehead

I love you too Mayank...she said while looking straight in his eyes

she rested her head on his chest...Mayank enveloped her in his arms....she felt content and secured in his arms...she closed his eyes to feel his presence...

Nupur...Mayank called her

Ji...she replied

i want to tell you something....Mayank said...she raised her head and looked into his eyes as she heard her words

Mayank bent down infront of her

Will you marry me?...asked her while looking at her

Nupur looked at him in disbelief...she was shocked and happy at the sametime

Nupur will you marry me..i know now i have nothing to give you except my LOVE..

but i promise you...i will give you all the happiness of the world

he forward his hand towards her....Tears were coming out of her eyes...she was sooo happy..she also bent down infront of him and put her hand on his hand

yes...i will marry you...Mayank mere pas bhi ap ke Pyaar ke elava kuch nahi hai...she said with smile..but there was lots of pain hidden in her words

Mayank stood up and hugged her tightly...both were in tears

They were happy as They were Together..

Nupur jis ne tumhain hurt kiya hai us se main nahi choron ga.us se toh main dondh ker hi rahon ga...he thought while hugging her

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Posted: 14 years ago
y mayu's dad cant undesrtand..am with mayank dis time......poor nupur...........loved the update dear.............
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesomeeeeeeee part

simply loved it

poor mayank had to choose but he took the right decision

continue asap !!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey MAri
I loved maynk very much
He is a gem- the way he support Nups- hats off to him
i loved his decision ......
Good update mari.....
do cont. it
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Posted: 14 years ago
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

isse zyaada kuch kehne ki zaroorat hai kya?😳

thnx for de pm🤗
do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovedddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd It
Really I Love and Respect Mayank So much. He really Took a right Decision Proud On Him
Thanks for Pm and cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
tht was really nice update
SujaLuvsMayur thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update.
so, mayank choose his love over his parents.
it was a correct decision.
bt his father couldnt understand their love..........he only understand abt so-called society n thir rules!!!
love marriage proposal scene.
it was so sweet, but painful.......they both are bearing same pain.
nups betrayed by her parents like bhai-bhabi n mayank betrayed by his father..............m really happy that atleast shilpa aunty is with him, na!
she's d best mother!!
love her!!!
nice update.
waiting for mayur marriage.
update soon.
thanks for the pm.

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