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Posted: 14 years ago
@sami..why you saying so..
you are just fantastic be it as a FF writer /VMmaker /and above all we love you for apoorva and also you are a very very good friend.😃
will wait for update and already loving it by the hint..😊
here this for you though busy but you always fulfill your promise..🤗🤗...
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Posted: 14 years ago

awww sab se main bhi utna hi pyaar karti hoon ......aaj dil thoda udaas hai.....but umeed bhi hai ke apu bhi dikhega parul to dikhti hai abhi..but jaane kyun wahaan zee ki tarha main bhi anmol ko dhoondti rehti hoon

also guys i made a post in general section of IF please all read ..its on hug your pet day..i also shared my personal experience there about a doggie..aap padh ke dekhna....
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Posted: 14 years ago
sami dii aap ne update kiya😲 Thank God. 😆The wait was worth dii. I just cant understand how can you such a small minute scene so groovy. The story has depth and i can see it vividly in my mind. Anmol throwing the bottle, blood oozing from his hands, Haila meri mind he ek tv bangaye hai. When I read your FFs i just cant control my emotions on angini. Yaar dii I miss angini so much.😭 Dii aap to ek wonderfull kamal ke ff likka hai. I just adored and loved it so much........
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sami01

thank you all ..u guys r so sweet with ur comments..sometimes i feel am not worth ur love😭 why apu had to enter bidaai sometimes i feel...and if he did why it had to end

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will write a emotional scene between vasu and anmol soon in next 2 days

love u all ......and thank you🤗


what an emotional scene between vasu and anmol..... OMG.... dii usualy you are good no no.. very good in writing FF's... now you are telling us a emotional scene coming soon... then i am beter to get rady to cray..... i am sure... your FF wil make me cray... it made me cray many times... .
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Posted: 14 years ago
aww i hope we wil get it soon zee thnak you
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Posted: 14 years ago
Very nice 👏
You updated after a long time made us wait a lot
Please make quick updqates
Ok enough of my complaints,
Truly very nice scene
I loved the anger in Anmol's eyes for Ragini which was full of love for her
But he also wants to be with her but she is comvicing him to come to agra
I am excited what will happen next
Will he sleep on the couch
Or will he get his share of bed😉

And the maag scene was very well done
Ragini realizing that Anmol has done it by accident but the rightful thing to do
Plz continue soon !!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shanti05

Sammy I offically hate you !! 👏👏👏👏

It was gripping
I was in smiles My god Anmol is a power packed person
Uff the gussa he carries
And The control again when he is with Ragini !!
Why Ragini why do you do that to Anmol
and Now u want him to come to Agra with you
Yes Anmol go go for your daughter
Ragini is melting down but he will go for his Tammana first !

And I want more treats some twists welcomed and update soon
I want Tamman to be happy and Ragini faling n love with Anmol again
She felt his blood on her maang and it shook her yes he has put his presence in her comepletely !!

thank you shanti .....yes yes ragini needs to love anmol unconditionally
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: savee_k

@sami...wait karna pada but its just mindblowing..👍🏼

really you take us to another world.world of angini with their passion and the intensity in their scenes..woah its so real..👏
first scene ragini cant forget the touch of anmol and the way she feels her maang and mangalsutra and took her decision..very well penned down emotion of ragini..👏
love the daring ragini too..hard to convince vasu and she too in denial mode whether to let go or not..bad mood but still ragini have her say to let anmol come back to agra for tammy's sake..
hailaaaaaaaaaaa angry anmol..😍
wat a scene.ok no need to say all was real..his anger towards ragini..his frustration for not getting her answer..next he could not control his anger and let it out speaking harshly to her which shocked her..his bleeding hand as he smashed his fist with such force ...awesome scene..👏
love this bit and you were bang on."yeh jo kabhie mere paas aur kabhie itni berukhi,baand kardo yeh sab"..superb dialogue..👏
as usual ragini is at anmol's care and his weakness his ragini .once she is close to him he just forget everything even his pain or his bleeding hand..
once he got wat he wanted to hear and his sudden change in his behaviour got ragini in thought.well written scene..
end scene so catchy anmol's blood in ragini's maang and which did brought a smile on her face..how much she tries hard to be rude or impassive but she wont be able to stop loving her husband anmol..
anmol has gone through so much emotional trauma staying away from his daughter .he will be back to agra for her.😊
outstanding..awesome..captivating scenes and worth reading..👍🏼
so you do deserve applause for such treat..👏👏👏👏👏..
as for next update ok dont want to be too greedy a twist will be fine.😊

yes yes....i wil lwrite very soon...i felt emotuional writing all that.....i want to shwo RS angini story can bring TAM with curiosity factor ke why seperation is there...but wo sunega tabhi na
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sammy the turn of events in your FF will bound t get TAM up the charts for season two with Angini
I have always seen ki bechadna and then meeting raises the TAm ratings
So ur script has good potntail..
And would love to see that happening
If creatives visit this thread they will love the way you have shown it ..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Anmol was sitting in the study on a plush soft leather chair,which belonged to his late nanaji.A Tuscany lamp was placed on table beside the chair,its power plug in his hand he was playing with the switch absently and thinking about events of today.The room kept turning from mysterious in yellow lamp light to dark with mild light from moon falling though window on his face.

His face was closed book and had calm reflecting from it,but one needed to look carefully into his deep eyes to find the storm playing inside his mind.
His mind was playing ragini's early agreement about him moving back into Agra mansion but he couldn't go unless The very person who had turned him out on that dark night asks him to.
But I should think of my daughter came a reply from his inner mind...
before he could probe more ,he heard footsteps outside the study,he turned the light off not wanting anyone disturb his solitude.
He held his breath waiting to see who was outside.
Vasundhra rajvansh was having a very bad day,Ragini had practically given her a ultimatum,this house seem to be whispering into her ears,she kept getting flashes of anmol's past deeds for her and her family.She picked up her shawl and went out in moonlight,walking absently and thinking.
Suddenly she stilled;seeing light go on and off in a room from open window,from this far she could make out Anmol's outline,Even from this far she could tell he was very disturbed,something shifted inside her heart,a mother's heart suddenly overpowered her scheming brain and her steps moved toward the house,once inside she hesitated outside the door,she realized he had turned off the light to
avoid intrusion...she went forward softly and ....
anmol was sitting in the chair,in dark ,his face lit with soft moonlight,their r eyes met ,his showing the inner turmoil and her showing her constant battle with her heart.
Both stood there for some time when suddenly anmol stood up ,turning the light on in process and flooding the room with artificial light.
she clicked the door shut and stood there while Anmol gestured towards the chair.
she refused saying nahi yehin theek hai
hum jo kehne aaye hain wo jyada der nahi lega
He just looked on ,she avoided his eye and looked around,her gaze resting on laughing photo of his Nani and mom.she swallowed visibly ,Anmol saw her expressions change and followed her gaze.
A soft smile came on his face and he lovingly picked up the photo and hugged it silently.
Vasundhra rajvansh was on verge of tears now,she steeled herself and forced her gaze away from him.
Tum wapis aa jao
ji he looked shocked
wo ..she hesitated with the words ,her eyes pleading ,yet her stance was defiant and proud.
Ragini ya mere liye nahi ,business ke liye bhi nahi
balki mere bete ki aakhri nishani ke liye
he looked up stunned at her words ,those words almost peircing his heart like a arrow....
Wo tum ko apna sab kuch manti hai Vasundhra added harshly ,
She needs you even I can see that
Aur aap ko a softly asked question stunned vasundhra,she was not sure if he said it or she imagined
Mujhe ,
she looked up he looked confused ji kya
aap ko kya?
wo tum ne kuch kaaha tha na
nahi to main to aap ki baat sun raha tha..
oh she was lost for words for few seconds,she looked d around and turned to leave ,when suddenly she turned back and shouted
Mera beta kyun mera hi beta kyun ..kyun ...
kyun hum tum ko bardashat karenge,kyun hum har din tum ko dekhenge aur sochenge ke....her voice turned into a anguished sob .. Ranvir nahi raha
Ragini had asked Dai ma about anmol and she had directed her to study,she was about to knock on the closed door when she heard Her mother in law shouting about Ranvir,too stunned to react she stood rooted to spot when the door opened with force and Vasundhra rajvansh faced a stunned looking Ragini,
Mummiji yeh kya she managed.
Ragini tum yahaan aao ander aao came a calm voice
Mrs Rajvansh even i feel same when i look at the mirror every single day
Vasundhra turned to see his troubled expressions and suddenly it all seemed too much and she left the room.
all energy seem to drain from Anmol and he sat on the chair,closing his eyes and resting his head on the back of the chair...
Ragini looked at his troubled face and her heart turned .
tum ne is insaan ke saath acha nahi kiya ragini?
yeh kaun tha,she thought was it her own antaratma....
Ragini please aaj nahi , i need to be alone we Will talk tomorrow i promise.and he turned the switch o lamp off,leaving the room in darkness and soft moonlight.
She looked at him and felt like she had failed in life,failed his daughter ,failed her family and most importantly failed him.
she moved forward and touched his forehead gently.
all her feelings reflecting in her voice.
Kamre mein jaa ke so jao na
he held her hand and opened his eyes ,puling her closer in process
She tried to look down but his intense gaze held her still.
suddenly he let go and smiled knowingly.
nahi i have to finish files ,if we are going to Agra i need it done tonight.
oh
tum so jao
ji
she turned to open the door
Ragini
ji
chai mil sakti hai please
and smiled sweetly ,pulling her out of the gloom,the sadness and intensity making the moment very normal;like he had always done all those years.
she nodded ji abhi laati hoon
aur suno
adrak daal dena
haan pata hai
he chuckled and she left the room with smile on her face
a smile of new hope a new beginning
Edited by sami01 - 14 years ago

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