SR&ArSh l JaaneDilMainKabseHaiTu l UpdCh5-6 [pg12]

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Hey Guys ! I'm fairly new to the FanFiction Section of I-F & my name's Esha (: I'm an American-Bangladeshi , so most parts of this story will be written in English . . . But I will be writing in Hindi as well , but just a reminder , my Hindi isn't so good :(





Before I start , just a few things I want to mention . . .
- The storyline for this FF has NOTHING to do with the show Dill Mill Gayye itself .
- I'm ONLY using the characters of the show (:
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Overview :

Setting : New York (only because I live in New York & know it pretty well , hehe )
Characters :
_ Siddhant Modi: an 18 year old ; Senior of highschool ; Mr . Hottie (; Bestfriends with Ridhimma since elementary school :D
_ Ridhimma Gupta : an 18 year old ; Senior of highschool ; Ms. Smartstuff ; bestfriends with Sid since elemantary school
_ Shilpa Gupta : a 17 year old ; Junior in highschool ; Ms. Flirtacious :O ; Sister of Ridhimma ;
_ Suvarna (Sue) Modi: a 17 year old ; junior in highschool ; Ms. Chulbulli ; sister of Sid , bestfriends with Shilpa .
_Armaan Malik : an 18 year old ; Senior of high school ; Newly admitted student at highschool ; Becomes good friends with Sid , Ridhimma , & Sue , but NOT Shilpa >:) hehe
Synopsis :
Siddhant Modi and Ridhimma Gupta have been bestfriends forever practically . Always together like peanut butter and jelly, nobody's been able to come between their friendship . Alongside Sid & Ridhimma came their siblings , Sue and Shilpa ; chulbulli besties :D . Last years of high school go wonderful . . . But. . . the arrival of a new student into the circle . . . What happens then ? Is it the same ? Wil friendships break ? Will someone fall hard and fast ? Will someone say to themselves . . . "Jaane Dil Main Kabse Hai Tu ? ... Yaara rab se pehle hai tu . . . "

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So what do you guys think ? Should i continue ? Do you guys like it? Feedback please !

_ Love Eshaaa (:




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Updates

_ Synopsis : page 1

_ Chapter 1 : page 2
_ Chapter 2 : page 4
_ Chapter 3 : page 6
_ Chapter 4 : page 9
_ Chapter 5 : page 12
_ Chapter 6 : page 12

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Edited by -Esha_423- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Guys, I will be, hopefully posting the First chapter of this FF sometime tonight [US Time] , So till then . . . I'll be waiting for some views !

-Esha😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey love to read SR n shilpa's ffs...........
it seems good as new concept...................👏👏
add me in ur pm list...........
plzz update soon.................
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey

it seems intersting...............wanna knw what changes will happen....update soon

do pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
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interesting...........
add me in ur
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conti soon.....


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Interesting concept. Iam Karan-Shilpa fan so i would love to read more😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi, just read the synopsis, and im hooked, please do continue soon and please do add me to your pm list!
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Thanks for your feedback everyone !

Decided to post the first part earlier ; so here it is .

Chapter One :

This summer wasn't lasting for anyone . It was way too fast . Things weren't going the way they should . It was just too fast , but , as everyone knows , only Shilpa ... No ... Not just any Shilpa ... Shilpa Gupta ... Was the saviour of this fast, boring summer . It was the end of Summer , and only she had the brains to lighten ... Or should it be said ... Electrify the end of what could be called the beginning of a new end .

" Hello ? Sue ? Where the heck are you ? Tu bhul gayi kya ? Aaj hi hamari big extravaganza hai . . . Agar party ke do hosts tayar nahi . . . Toh kaisa lage ga ? Jaldi kar ! " Shilpa screamed into her Blackberry . She did not want anything lacking in her end of the Summer party .
" Uff... I'm coming ... Aur-"
"Haan Haan ... Jaldi . & dont worry ...Sid bhaia is here too . . ."
She disconnected the phone .
All of a sudden , Shilpa heard some hard, heavy footsteps from the staircase ...
" Bhaia ? Tumhe kya hua ? Itne zor se seerion se-"
" Bhaiya ? Ye Bhaiya kya hai ? What do i look like to you ? Main kya rickshaw driver hoon ... Jisko tum har waqt 'bhaia ! Abe bhaiya !' Kehke bulaagi ?" Siddhant Modi hated if anyone called him anything else then Sid or Siddhant . He opened the fridge . . . His muscles flexed . . . Taking out a can of pepsi . . .
Shilpa leaned on the fridge ... " Achcha . . . Toh aapko tayar nahi hona chaiye ? It's already 5:30 aur hamara party 7 se shuru hota hai . . ."
" haan , toh main kya karoon ? Ja ke apni behen se bol bathroom se nikle . . . "
" Mein toh nikli . . . " A slim, yet tall girl walked down the stairs . Her every move carried a scent so strong . . . It was intoxicating . A light purple , more like a light lavendar hugged her body . The dress drew details on her every little curve . Her hair fell light below her shoulders, loose & simple . & her stilettos . She seemed to be a queen of them . . . But underneath all this fancyiness . . . No one could tell that this girl was a full on casual and simple girl .
Shilpa whisteled at her sister and hugged her , " Aakhir behen kiski hai?" the two of them laughed , and Sid made his way to the bathroom . "Pata nahi , in ladkiyon itni der kyun lagati hai tayar hone main "
*Ding-Dong*
"SHILPA! OPEN UP!"
Shilpa ran to her door , while Riddhima sat on the couch , concentrating on her phone , BBM-ing whoever was available.
" SHILPA ! Naina nahi araha hai ! "
Shilpa looked awestruck . Par kyun ?
"i dont know . She said her cousin from India is coming . . . Usko ghar pe rehna hai . . . "
" toh kya hua , tell her to bring her cousin to the party . Maaza ayega . "
Sue, already dressed in her black, short and cute outfit, sat next to Ridhimma on the sofa, calling Naina .
Naina on the other hand was driving to the JFK International Airport . *RINGRING*
''Kya hua Sue ? "
'' Listen , Shilpa wants you to bring your cousin along . . . Please varna meri band baj jaigi. "
" Teekh hai ... Ill see . . . Bye."

The operator was in the speaker. "Good Evening Passengers ! We have arrived at our destination. Please take all of your belongings and exit throught the front doors . We hope you had a safe flight . Welcome to New York "
A young guy , maybe in his late teens , reached for his backpack and left the plane .
"Thanks for flying with Jet(?) Airways."
He flashed his dimpled smile to the flight attendant and left.
A few fifteen minutes later Naina spotted him . He looked good as ever . His red half-shirt revealed his muscular body . His dark jeans just added to his look . Naina hugged him , becoming teary . 'Bhaiya !'
"Good to see you Naina ," he smiled . "Bhaiya . . . mujhe ek party mein jaana hai . . . aap chalenge mere saath ?"
" Party ? I'm in ." His green eyes flickered and he walked to Naina's car. . .

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So ? How was this ? Good ? Ehh ? Tell Me !!

_Eshaa (:
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@lovekwshilpa: thanks so much . Glad you liked it (:


_ waiting for some more feedback . I need to know what you guys think so i can continue !
_ ( btw ; what do you guys think about cliffhangers ? )

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