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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: heermeher

muskan please atleast let Raj recognise geet today he deserve to meet his gudiya. I dont want maan to meet her yet.

after 7 yrs also he didnt got guts to tell daadi

FIRST i will like to say i am not defending Maan... i also believe he deserves to suffer but is there a point for him to tell dadi when eveything is done for... let him meet geet trust me as much as i have read muskaan di's ff's i m dead sure she will make him tell dadi n also repent his mistakes😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
waiting eager for all ur ff yaar i am missing dewanees and kamoshi and kashis see we are so greedy, do it when ever u feel free.😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 7thHeaven

FIRST i will like to say i am not defending Maan... i also believe he deserves to suffer but is there a point for him to tell dadi when eveything is done for... let him meet geet trust me as much as i have read muskaan di's ff's i m dead sure she will make him tell dadi n also repent his mistakes😳

very correct boli tumi
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Posted: 14 years ago
MUSKAN SOBS...NOT CLICKING LIKE BUTTON😭😭
-truly magical-
part 126
raj - back off now..looks like militant intervene in this whole thing. I don't think u guys can handle it
athif - we r already in there sir
raj immediately arranged for the chopper to reach the location..

gk on microphone - I am going in now.. cover me...
khan - we are cleared here..there are only two guys inside & VIP ..
gk - VIP wat??
khan - I think he is unconscious... the guards are going out..
gk was furious - his hands are tied ??
khan - umm
gk sneaked inside & pulled the knife & cut the rope..he snapped ..
he scanned the person top to bottom..some one in black dress.. slim..but well toned body
masked face..eyes...the almond color may be not seen..
gk on spoke into the microphone in her hand - is it clear??
gk - I repeat ..is it clear..
heard some cross firing in the background...& sour under the throat
his eyes almost popped hearing the words
gk - pretend u r tied.. (reminded him..exactly wat she did 8yrs ago)
pulled out the other gun from the back & pointed at the door... 6 militants rushed in with AK -47 ..blindly firing...Gk immediately covered him & 6 bullets & 5 of them down...the way gk stood shielding him reminded him of her..they way she pressed her hands around him when those militant stopped their car. Every move reminded of her. ..6th one pretended to drop the gun & came around Maan & shied himself.. gk held the gun straight pointing... she looks into his eyes..she couldn't take the shot..not a shot that might hurt him.. she froze...kept looking at his eyes...his eyes not sure if she was looking at him.. the glasses for shielding his view.
athif - its a clear shot gk
khan - max VIP ke shoulder main lage ga...
gk unwired ..
athif - dam...unwired..wat wrong with GK today
khan - iss case ko itna personal le rahi hain
they hear vague moment...gk bend down & kpet the gun ..
militant - haat uppar
still pointing the gun at Maan, inched closer to gk still holding Maan capitive..frisked the person who seemed like Geet to Maan, the militant checked if she had more weapons, by then Maan picked the gun & pointed at the militant. He immediately took Gk captive & slide behind her partly. Maan tried to trace his moment as his gun was at point blank range ...his eyes where close enough to read those eyes through glasses now...it clearly said shoot with a slight node..after being able to read them.. he definitely couldn't take the shoot..no no ..he cannot shoot her..these eyes belonged to his Geet..his long lost love.. his life.

he knew some where it was her...he expected to meet her at every possible situation may be a mall, in busy traffic signal, some airport, beach, hill station anywhere....not like this.. not holding a gun at her..on point blank range..he couldn't think..without warning her gloved hand reached his & pulled the trigger on her right shoulder...ruthlessly pressed it, bullet pierced through her & then hitting through militant's heart ' Maan was shocked..he shot Geet..before he could react..gk turned grabbing the gun from his hand & shooting coldly through the head of the militant how lay on the floor

athif & khan rushed to gk as she just fell down a seconds after the militant collapsed
raj ..came in & took Maan away ..he was in shock..he short..geet...how could he?? .
Gk was rushed to the hospital immediately.
Raj shook Maan - Maan...maan
Maan - I shot her..main ne usse mardiya
raj spat in anger - u did that 7 yrs ago
Maan - main ne usse mara...I shot her...
raj was getting irritated but his duty didn't allow to smash his face ..sad he couldn't do any thing. Still couldn't bear the pain slapped him tight to get him back to senses.. Maan roared back.. & held his collar..raj ..woh..geet hain.. woh kanha hain.. woh Geet hain I am sure
raj thought he has really lost it..anybody would after losing Geet ..even he has. Raj just walked away..tucking the seat belt around his waist in the chopper's passenger seat & showed a thumbs up to the pilot. Raj couldn't have bear to see his face any longer. He would have killed him, if he could.
Maan was restless he had to know who that person was. The moment the chopper reached his place, he immediately called the police head quarters & the inquired if there was any Geet Handa who was the officer incharge this operation. He couldn't wait.. he immediately drove down to the head quarters with permissions from the higher ups & recommendation from the ministers. He himself read the names...
Geet....there were few...geet arora, Geet biswas, Geet jain, Geet kapoor, ..he checked again between Geet b & Geet j...sad just the next one was Geet Khurana...he probably did see it ..but he didn't read it.. still the coldness in the person was no where like Geet.. but the way she stood covering him was exactly her.. she couldn't pull the trigger on him, those eyes..he was sure.. he can't be wrong in reading them. Another attempt to reach her died. Still got the name of the officer in charge was Ayur. He was frustrated to the core at his helpless situation.
He came back to the house broken & desperate to know where his life was. Daadi came & hugged him.
Daadi - hum bahut dar gaya the
Maan - I am fine don't worry.
Daadi - I have kept a party in honor of the officer how saved u
Maan - umm
Daadi - he really did a grt job
Maan thought he!!!
Daadi - humari unse baat huwai hain..
he smiled weakly
Daadi - r u alright
Maan - yah I am alright.
Thats the sadest part..he is still alright, he is still ok.. how can that be!!! how can he be fine without her..so many years.. he dipped his head in grief & walked to the gym. He can't be wrong in recognizing her eyes..it was her. He madly practiced brutally like every single day he has been punishing himself for last 7 years, every single day. The physical pain didn't feel anything infront of the inner torture he was fighting. How could he let her drift away from him. He was to be blamed for all the difference in between them. It was him. Only him. He walked broke another 6inche glass slab & then punching hard on the burning punching pad. His hand bleeded & burned.. every single day..by now it had become numb to the cuts & burns he caused every single morning..
will updated deewangi after GHSP... will PM later..
MOST AWAITED PRECAP
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VO1WK5n4WRM&feature=related [/YOUTUBE]
-PREV PART125 NEXT PART 127-
hope u all like the updates. Love all your comments.
Really love reading them
please do keep commenting'.
Love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
ummmmmm wat shud i say muski darling as always the part was awesum 😃
i simply simply simply loved k it just have blown my brainz 😆
oooo god she stilll love him yaar she still cant see him in pain😭 she cudnt even fire on him that 2 saving his life she cudnt shoot she is heartless bt nt for maan😉😉
ooo so that idiot maan😡 did recognized her nd ooo feeling really sory 4 him god wat life is he living😭 i du agree wat he did he gt punished nt by geet bt by god time
we cant say here that geet took her revenge or punished him she just obeyed him as he said i wll come 2 u so she just waited that he will cum 2 her
the punuishment was by his deeds who did nt 4gived him 4 wat he did 2 her
well oooo so finally u showed she must b having a beautiful daughter definitely i gt wat u were trying 2 show in precap😉 2 me i assumed this only that there is a daughter ooo really happy 4 her😃
eagerly waiting wat maan will du wen he will cum 2 kno he is a father of a daughter😭 now other punishment he was nt with his geet thru her tough time he promised her in part ummmm i tnk nt sure bt i tnk part 109 or 110 he promised her no matter wat ill b alwayz dere with u as he never fulfilled any of her dreamz he also didnt fulfilled any of his promises

now wen he will meet her he will simply realize wat have she gone thru how she have brought up their child all alone just bcoz of his 1 moment of his ego they both had 2 pay
well really hopefull soon muski will get everything clear btw them bt i tbk there is a long way 2 go
welll loved the update👏
now du post the nxt update soon
hmarai jaan mat lena😳



Edited by muskaan_cute19 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 7thHeaven

FIRST i will like to say i am not defending Maan... i also believe he deserves to suffer but is there a point for him to tell dadi when eveything is done for... let him meet geet trust me as much as i have read muskaan di's ff's i m dead sure she will make him tell dadi n also repent his mistakes😳


agree with u 7thHeaven,
me too not defending him but maan got his punshiment.
it's his punishment that he is alone today, he has his wife but still don't know where she is?
it's big punishment for him.7 long years he suffering.
we r all want this . he is repenting.
first maaneet should meet.
it's not easy for maan to manofy this new geet. it'll take time , after this maaneet will surely announce their wedding.
now we r waiting for maaneet meeting.



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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful and another emotional update.
again a heart wrenching part.
gk is geet,I'm right.I know gk couldn't shot her maan. first she loss her concentration.
same situation both met but some thing is different today.
feel really sad for maan.
I'm again crying today to see maaneet like this.
maan repenting very much.
I guess maan is not in his senses , so he is not searching the name geet khurana.
Now make them meet muskan.
bahut hua torture, it's un bearable for us and maaneet also
update soon.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
thats awsome one yar...am madly waiting for maneet to see each other ....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Awwwwwwwwwwww Muski..........

I don know wat do say...I m at a loss of words..
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Posted: 14 years ago
my heart is crying for Maan now 😭😭

pls Muski....aur nahi 😭😭

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