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Posted: 14 years ago
muskan waiting.
I'm back from office and first I seen the title of this ff updating.
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Posted: 14 years ago

-truly magical-
part 127

again a bandaged hand on his way to office. Black long sleek Mercedes-Benxz drivers in a white dress opens the door for Maan Singh Khurana, his body gaurds join him in the other car that followed. Maan opened his lap-top checked his mail answering some calls in his blachberry
suddenly his car stops with a jerk
Maan - what happened? (in stern voice irritated than ever before)
driver scared & nervous - some girl jumped in front of the car
sort it out & would have looked back in to his lap-top had been Maan Singh Khurana 9yrs ago.. but this incident was very special to him.. close to his heart.. he could never forget that day..how
geet ran & opened the side door of the car & hopped in
his body guards rushed to pull her out..before they could
her body guards stopped them..there was a certain tension between the body guards
maan turned left to meet her eyes..it was magical..
curly hair unkept & tied up with a clip..worn jeans, lose fitted top, dirty sneakers &
side bag ..she pleaded..please I am getting late for my exam
please please please please...

he was lovingly shook out of his thoughts by a delicate hand around his neck.. crying rubbing herself saying something near his neck which he couldn't follow. That's all she could reach standing on her knees on the cars's back seat wearing a cute pink frock..curly hair neatly tied up with two pony's which shook as she shook her face. He couldn't resist the urge to put his hand around her & hug her. He kissed her head ..like a most natural thing at the moment as she cried...na na.. ..umm..nah nahi jaa ..ja..da daa daa d a da da yy. the word which he didn't understand but still hit his heart like thousand needles..a lump formed his heart..he couldn't believe wat he just heard or probabaly he felt he heard. Tears just poured continuously.. though there was no logic. A lady dressed in cotton saree..Mk..Mk...challo sahab ko late h jayega...Mk..she hugged him tighter & tighter.. heavy traffic & the police had to tell them to move the car. Maan looked at the lady probably the nanny he assumed with questioning eyes. Nanny got really scared - sahab mam ne kal dinner ke liya jayenga kaha ..kal raat mam ghar nahi aayen tho baby naraz hain. Raat bhar soye bhi nahi aur abhi aap ko dehka ..
she couldn't even complete fearing the anger that filled in his eyes. ..she had assumed she might just lose her job now.
He was irritated with the irresponsible parents letting their child run in the traffic road like this & leaving with some nanny who was so irresponsible. he spat. Tumhare mam ko kahao ki isse mera office se le jayegi
nanny - lekin sahab
he didn't let her complete - driver challo
driver couldn't move the car. The cops who were with girl, didn't let them move. There was heavy traffic jam. One of the cop called & reported the incident to Gk.
Gk - let them go.
They just let them go pass. He tried to make her sit on the side, she didn't. She hugged him & sat on his lap. He was so blank.. he didn't know wat to think. She looked quite old may be 4-5yrs old may be older but her the way spoke she seemed like a baby..toodler. She looked so beautiful..baby Geet..same curly hair..same almond eyes..hugged him by his neck the way she always does. Why did he feel so much in love with this little girl. The nanny followed them to his office & called gk.
gk - yeh sab kya hain?
nanny - mam woh baby ne sahab ko dehka tho
gk closed her eyes.
Maan carried her to his cabin. Every one was shocked to see ruthless angry Maan walking in with a little girl angel may be. He looked to be in different world all together with that angel in his arms. He walked straight in to his cabin. The girl looked so happy & she probably kissed him a million times by now. Every time she kissed she made a complaining face looking at the stubble. Off course it actually did hurt her, her cheeks where all red rubbing against it.
Maan - aise traffic main nahi bhaag the
she made a cute face. he made her sit on the table she kept looking at him in awe. While he looked into the news paper. She pulled the paper away..since it was blocking her view. He smiled & put the paper away.
Anjali & devansh came running in & hugged Maan. Mk's expressions changed drastically. The anger Maan saw on her face he could relate to Geets anger when she would see anyone near him. He almost feared to hug them back. She jumped from the table & sat on the couch.
Anjali & Devansh - uncle yeh kaun hain
Maan - mk
devansh - mk..aap bhi tho mk ho
Maan smiled
anjali - uncle is Maan khurana..thats why MK
devansh - tho iska naam kya hain
mk looked at him from corner of her eyes
Maan - go ask her ur self
she turned & sat
anjali went to her & sat next to her - tumhara naam kya hain
she was quiet
devansh - tumari bhi chuti hain aaj
she still made a big face very angry
anjali & devansh tried again to talk to her but she was still quiet.
Maan came & sat with them on the couch
Anjali - do u want to play with us
She looked at every one & then at Maan. She was very angry with him now. He wondered why she was. They pulled out the board game & started to play.
Maan - just one game
devansh - one game for di & one game for me uncle
as they began to play & laugh.. mk was not liking.. he noticed she was getting irritated.. she turned her face & sat still making a big face.. when they started the next game.. she got very angry & threw the board away. Anjali shouted - yeh kya kiya
devansh hit her - I was winning
she took the remaining coins & threw it.
Maan shouted - mk very bad girl
she cried & cried..not able to talk..choking... words 'mama...mama '
Maan told anjali & devansh to leave & short a stern disapproving look to her. She got really scared & began to cry a lot more.. he hugged her .. she tried to go away.. he kissed her..kya huwa naraz kyun ho rahi ho
she hugged him tight - mee....meee..rrr......a.........da..d...a....d.a......d...a..d..umm..umm..yyeee
he was not able to make out a word she spoke.
Maan - bhook lagi
she nodded.
He ordered some sandwiches & chocolate milk shake..he himself doesn't know wat made him order that chocolate milk shake. He fed her & made her drink the whole shake. She began to rub her eyes. Being with anjali & devansh he knew that means kids are sleepy. He carried her & walked around, she just fell a sleep, like the most natural thing. He slowly put her on the couch. he was so instantly connected to this little nanhi pari. mk..he smiled at her..jr mk...a smiled touched his lips...


precap,
AND THEY MEET
-PREV PART 126 NEXT PART 128-
hope u all like the updates. Love all your comments.
Really love reading them
please do keep commenting.
Love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful part. loved it.
so finally maan met his daughter.
mk met jr mk.
hmmm, so name start form m.
let me guess. muskan.
mahi, mahek, meher.
hope they meet for forever
pls muskan , let them(maaneet ) meet this time.
update soon.
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 7thHeaven

agreed n then they very nicely after murdering our sanity go scot free... just by giving a beautiful update.... 😆


very true im glad the never let us down they give us reward 4 our impateince bt tell muski we already have died so plz give us our soul back 😳
updatequickly😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
ooooooooo muskan the part was fab really loved jr mk😆
😆ooo she is sweet she
is complete blend of her parents 😃
half of geet😳
nd half of maan😉

cuteness naughtines all came 4rm geet😳 jealousy
stuuborn attitude as whom can give this 2 her only our maan singh khurana😡 frustration

bt i must say i cute blend loved her
nd if im nt wrong du she kno that he is her farther coz that nanny said sumtymz that baby ne sa
hab ko dekha tou kiya baby sare sahab ko dekh kar esa karti hai naaaa
nd she even tried 2 spkoe d
ada in her broken language which was again very sweet ooo loved her in fact im nt wrong she defi that he is her father other wise that jealousy n irritation has no sense
oooo really stupid of me getting things so laate ooops
4 mk nd 4 u


oooo thanku so much 4 bringing such a sweet twist in the story
edit*
j
ust wanted 2 share this with every1 on maan behalf
as maan is saying this 2 geet

Don't leave me in all this pain
Don't leave me out in the rain
Come back and bring back my smile
Come and take these tears away
I need your arms to hold me now
The nights are so unkind
Bring back those nights when I held you beside me

Unbreak my heart
Say you'll love me again
Undo this hurt you caused
When you walked out the door
And walked outta my life
Uncry these tears
I cried so many nights
Unbreak my heart


My heart Take back that sad word goodbye
Bring back the joy to my life
Don't leave me here with these tears
Come and kiss this pain away
I can't forget the day you left
Time is so unkind
And life is so cruel without you here beside me


Unbreak my heart
Say you'll love me again
Undo this hurt you caused
When you walked out the door
And walked outta my life
Uncry these tears
I cried so many nights
Unbreak my heart
My heart
Heart

Hope u all like this
this is 4 u muski darling 4 ur ff 4 its present situation wat maan is suufering or has suffered😭
bt have sympathy more 4 geet as wat he has done 2 her😡
still love them both nd their lovely daughter









Edited by muskaan_cute19 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh my!! Is that her daughter?! Woah....please end the separation soon this is too hard to bear in this story
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Posted: 14 years ago
That u dear for the great update.
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Posted: 14 years ago

wow.........their daughter!!!!

can't wait to c maan's reaction wen he comes to abt the truth!!!!!

precap was too wonderful.......can't wait for it!!!!

loved it!!!!!!!!

wonderful!!!!!

gr8 update!!!!!

can v have one more update plz???????

atleast by tonight plz.........

Edited by dia_ditz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
😲wow!.... their daughter.. !! wow..!
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Posted: 14 years ago

his daughter

Ms. M Kharana😆

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